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Posted: 7 years ago
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Saachi been staying at her parents house for 1 week now Aryan and saachi miss each other like crazy they sneak around meet each other they skype talk all night Aryan sneaks in saachi house sometimes they can't live without each :) Masa was still mad at saachi but happy she left Aryan and the house Ma sa made divorce papers and gave it to Aryan got shocked he was standing in shock and dropped it Babasa picked up and started to ask what is this and sarita said she does not want saachi to come bak in this Babasa was about to say something But Aryan said I will not leave saachi at any cost Babsa got mad at her and tried to make her understand but she wouldn't Listen Bua came to the saachi saasural to get her clothes and neelima was telling something to pandi to check something on the phone she got shocked seeing bua they both started to fight the whole family came and told them what neelima did they got shocked Bua she only came to get saachi close Ma sa was even feeling guilty Neelima said she only did this for the family n she did not want the family to come together the all felt guilty They went to saachi house and verin wasn't feeling well that day so saachi was trying to get him to eat when they came Verin stood up asking why are u here Diwaker said we came to ask for forgiveness from the wedding till now we know the truth now saachi started at aryan and they talked throw there eyes :)) Verin and diwaker hugged each other and said sorry but verin said there is no need to say sorry and they started to talk Ma sa came to saachi and said sorry for everything she did She should of trusted her saachi hugged her Aryan hugged ma sa and said sorry for being rude all were talking Aryan took saachi to her room and hugged Her I love u saachi are promise to each other to bring are families together has finally come true and we won't have to hide and meet each other anymore <3 They broke there hug and aryan leand in n kissed saach there lips touched and they kissed for the first time tanu came upstairs calling there names they broke the kiss saachi was blushing and aryan was just staring at her but was upset that tanu TANU came in the room and said they are calling them downstairs so they went downstairs Masa said to saachi to come home before leaving they planned to go on a small trip with both famillies :)))

IK not the best but tried Guys the trip special will be out on Friday or saturaday there will be 2 parts or 3 i will see hope u like it and Please give feedback :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Mahhu too good yaar
Your os is the only hope for all of us in dukhbharay episodes.
Loved it
Keep writing
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: mystory

Mahhu too good yaar

Your os is the only hope for all of us in dukhbharay episodes.
Loved it
Keep writing


should I write everyday or only on weekends what do u guys want ? :))))

Thank u di u are so sweet <3
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Posted: 7 years ago
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gud job mahhu..loved it
now i am hopping for picnic os dear...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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👏👏👏
keep writing more! u were amazing!..god knows when we'll get to see archi romance like this
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Mahhu di this is very nice
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Pratu picnic idea is great
Mahhu write a picnic os with lots of archi romance
Chup chup ke
And mahhu write it whenever you want to
We are archi lovers every second every minute every hour every day every week every month every year we will be hungry for their romance.
So you just keep writing grl

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome mahhu as usual it was nice one 👏
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