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Posted: 7 years ago
#61
Dnt say lyk dat
Ur story i gud dear
Please complete your stories dnt leave them in middle
And jus coz someone is nt valuing your work it doesn't mean that youll leave
I lyk you work
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Posted: 7 years ago
#62
its ok dear
hota rehta h
meri taraf se to ap bht achhe ja rhe ho
bakiyo ka to pta nai
bt ho sake to ap apni stories continue karna..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#63
n ya all the bst for ur exams...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#64
it's an amazing story dear 😊
do continue
and all the best for your exams
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Posted: 7 years ago
#65
All the best for ur exams
And plz cont the story
It is really interesting
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Posted: 7 years ago
#66
First all the best for ur exams..
And 2nd plz continue ur story I love too ready...
Its interesting...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#67
plz cntinue ur story
all the best
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Posted: 7 years ago
#68
Don't worry
Every great things start from the small
So please don't discourage yourself
Always be positive

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Posted: 7 years ago
#69
Awsome updates
Read all at one go

Sorry to her abt ur health and so less response

Hope u get well soon
And best of luck for ur exams..

Waiting for the update..
Ur a beautiful writer
pls dont stop writing...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#70
part-10



SID POV



So whats matter y you bunked lecture??? I said to jeenie

I didnt.. jeenie said

Where is kay?? I said

Oo kay dont worry she is with rohit and rish she is safe dont worry...jeenie said

And who they are??? I said

Rish is one who kay like and rohit is his best friend...jeenie said

Thats what assume... i said

I know it iam going to prove it to you...jeenie sad full of confidence

Will see... i said

Then jeenie explained me whole plane

This is not gng to work... i said

It will you vl see it jeenie said

When kay came she was smiling differently the way she smile with us she was smiling with the guy standing outside is he rish??? I guess i hope he will teach kay how to live life

I remeber

It was kays 12th birthday so many ppl were there she was social butterfly everyone loved her nd she loved every one
See more guest are invited on my birthday thn yours... kay said
That because younger... i said
No it is because they all loves me more ppl love me...kay said
Yeah whatever but no one love you like i do... i said
Aww bigb she said nd hugged me
Those were days after her that birthday every thing she was no more social butterfly we left india with the view that we vl start our new life i did but kay never did we came london nd started living with our uncle kay was scared of everthing she never talked to uncle one day he left nd never came i told he will also leave kay said me i did nothing just hugged her uncle geogre n aunt karl was our neighbour so they helped us to much initially kay didnt talk to jeenie thn jeenie nd kay both loved music then kay started talking to jeenie uncle george n aunt karl pampered her to much nd made her forget past they werent successful atleast she started loving them kay always think cause of her mom died but it not her fault mom already had some heart related disease she was gng to die in some days hence she already made arrangement of sending us london i never said kay about this nd i vl never




See how happy she is... jeenie said by bringing me back to reality

Yeah...i said kay was standing with some brunte guy who was tall almost of my height the way he was speaking was good nd kay was enjoying

So ready..she said

Let the plan began...i said nd we both smirked

How to play???kay asked

Okay you i will tell you a word n nd first thing come in to your mind you have to say it...jeenie explained

Sounds interesting...kay said

Okay let start i said

Live jeenie said
Music kay replied
Love i said
Neutella kay replied
Sid jeenie said
Partner for life kay said nd i smiled proudly
Jeenie i said
Bitch... kay said
Rohit...jeenie said
Kind heart kay said which shocked me cause kay never kind hearted to anyone for her everyone is creul
We both stared her surprisingly

What??? She said and when she realised what she said her eyes opened wide...Ahhh this is some thing new nd her cheeck turned red

Rish jeenie said

Smile appeared on her face nd then she noticed we are watching her nd She became slient like she was thinking too hard to cover this

Thats it iam nt gng to play this shit game more...kay said

But... i said

No...she said nd ran upwards

See i told you... jeenie said

I cant believe KAY BIRELL just blushed nd also quitted the game like seriously brunnete has something special someone pinch me...i said

Aaaoo that hurts... i said

We both started laughing

But the problem is she wont accept it... jeenie said

She vl just we have to patient... i said

Yeah i hope...jeenie said

Finger crossed i said





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Hola guyss sorry for late update as you know iam busy with boards i have already written 25 chps nd now i wont writing any i will try to post soon nd i want to just ask is any directioner here cause my next story is one directionm
Sid is confused between rish n rohit i hope you ppl like this do commend nd my last post was about not getting reponse i was little dishearted fr that but after reading comments my confidence boosted up nd will also start new story asap last but not least iam to lazy to proof read if i have done any mistake sorry for that

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