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Posted: 7 years ago
#41
lovely update
swirl girl friend of sid hehhe
kay and swirl meeting nice
update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#42
Rish is jealous haha don't know how he has fallen for Kay
Rohit and Rish's bonding remind me of reyam😭
Sid-kay best bro and sis
Hope Kay soon come out of her wall
And show some part of rish and Kay
Update soon but not so soon😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#43
awesome update
did introduced his gf to his sis
and brought her to a club .which bro does such a cool thing.such a lucky gal to have a bro like him
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Posted: 7 years ago
#44
Very nice update..
Waiting for next update...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#45
Part-6

GUITAR

Sid pov

How can kay even think that she knws she is above everybody no matter who ever come she vl always be my priority this girl is seriously out of her mind nd why did she said to keep my promise


Who let the dogs out who who my phn rang


Hello jeenie is every thing ok i said


Yeah do you have a min i have tell you some thing important about kay


Yeah say

Their is guy in our college nd it seems like he likes kay

Oo god RIP poor soul i said

Yeah but i also think kay like her back jeenie said

I think you are high i said jeenie

Ok dont believe she said

You knw its nt gng to happen i said

But it is happening jeenie blurted

But she didnt told me anything about him

Exactly y he is one who annoys her must

Oo i said

We have to make her agree so i have plan will discuss tomorrow ok ?? Jeenie said

Yeah ok cool i said still thinking what she said

Okay then see you tomorrow she said

I hope you are not joking coz it aint funny i said

Ofcourse not jeenie said

Then see you tomorrow i said

I hope jeenie is not joking if she is iam going to kill her and if it is true i hope that guys wont end up murdered n my sister end up being in jail


Kay Pov


This or this...i said while holding guitar


Red...jeenie and sid both said


Okay so iam going for black...i said


So why did you asked???? Sid said


To know which one is not okay...i said


Ass...jeenie said


Love you too...i said


She rolled her eyes nd we went towards billing counter


Will be back in min...sid said he was probably talking with swirl


Pls pack this I said to lady on counter


Sorry mam but this one is already sold...Lady said


But it was still in shelf...i said


Yeah guy went outside to attain the phn...she said while pointing


I turned back nd i saw same smirk


f**k not again...i wishpered


Stop following me babe...Rish said with smirk


I just rolled my eyes


What are you doing with my guitar???Rish said


You left this in shelf it self so its mine now...i said


One sec this is mine...Rohit said


Have you paid for this???? I asked


No but...


Thats it i said while cutting him


He grabbed guitar


This mine...he said


No i said while trying to grab guitar


You cant...he said


I groaned


Hungry dog...he spatted


f**k off...i said


I will give you this guitar if you will come with me on date...he said


Never in a million years...i said


Common...He said


Thats never going to happen...i said


It will...he said


Will see...i said


Hey...Rohit said


Hii... said


Mate get this safely some people have eye on it...Rish said while handing him guitar


Stop bloody mocking me...i said in annoyance


Stop it you both and kay you can buy another one and rish you can do the same stop fighting idiots
...Jeenie said from nowhere


No...Rish and i both said at the same time


If you want you can take this i will buy xbox for me...Rohit with smirk


Arrgghhh mate you are not going to this...Rish said


Rohit just smirked nd then he looked towards me yaa want???? He asked


Naah its ok...i said

Rish and jeenie both were staring at me

What????I said

Dude you are life safer...Rish said to me

Yeah i knw...i said

Attitude...Rish said



Lets go...Rohit said




Yeah...would you like to




No...i said by cutting rish cause i know he was going to for coffee or some thing





Ahhh someone knows me very well it seems they stalk me...Rish said




Stalk you???Rather i will do sucide or something...I said




Did i mentioned your name...Rish said




So you mean it was for shelf or anything i seriously think you need doctor...i said




Yeah nd that doctor is you please save my life...Rish said in fake beg






Stop being Dick head nd lets go for you kind info your mom is waiting on airport...Rohit said




Shit...Rish said




See you babe...Rish said before i could say any thing he left




Ass...i blurted




Why you do this???? Jeenie asked





What????I said




Why didnt you took it from Rohit before you were fighting for it...jeenie said



I changed my mind...i said




Common you can atleast admit you like mocking and messing with rish...jeenie said



Whatever...i said




Iam back...sid said



Live safer...i said




No we are going to continue that...jeenie said



Continu what???? Sid said



Forget she is high...i said



Seems like you were...jeenie said



What you girls are talking abt...sid said




Nothing...we both said at same time




You done with your guitar??? Sid said




Some other day i said




Wierd...okay listen jeenie iam going to meet swirl if you wanna come you can nd kay you to... sid said


I will..jeenie said


I wont...i said


Cool then we will drop kay first then vl leave...sid said


Nd we went towards car in whole ride jeenie was looking at me like she has 1000 of question to ask i ignored cause i was not in mood they dropped nd left nd i decide to take quick nap nd then to get ready for college


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Taadddaaa kay is enjoying rish mocking and sid different type of brother jeenie kay gives us goal i hope you people are liking next 2 chps are too much funny i will post it asap
Till that keep liking supporting commenting and buddying




Edited by Hitikalokwani99 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#46
Amazing update
Loved it
It was funny update
There nok jok was awsm
And I am loving Sid character
And Jennie is like pheebe😆😆
And Sid is like Ross😆😆
Rishhh😳😳😳his one liners😆😆
Kayyy is sweetheart
Loved that doctor wali line😆
Update soon...

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Posted: 7 years ago
#47
Awesome chapter
Cute knok-jhok
Lovely update
Egarly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
#48
Nice update
I liked kay character...
She is lovely...

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Posted: 7 years ago
#49
Part-7

One day project


Get up you sleepy head...sid said

Get off let me sleep...i said

You are not going to awake easily...sid said

1
2
3

Nd splash
he poured jug full of water in me

What the heck???? I said

Victory...he screamed

I grabbed bottel from my side and poured on him

Victroy this time i screamed

Nd water fight start
Sid nd i enjoy doing this we do this oftenly

What the heck...!!!! Jeenie screamed

Sid nd i started laughing

She groaned

Dont worry i will clear the mess...sid said while laughing

Yeah i knw how you did last time i vl clear this till that you both get ready...jeenie said

Aww...

Get off she cutted me

Nd i started laughing jeenie is cleanliness freak reason why our house is always clean

I got ready nd we left for college

So you are coming to attain literature...I asked jeenie as she is quite liking it

Yeah offcourse...jeenie said

Something special to attain??? I asked as i knw their some reason

Naah...jeenie said

It dosent seem like...i said

Why??? She said

Ummm...i dont know...i said

Ohh my god my best friend is gone mad now she will go to mental assailayum...jeenie said

Huhhh you cant do this with my babe...rish said

Stop calling me babe...i spatted

Someone is evasdropping jeenie said

Yeah probably your bestfriend is forcing mee to this...Rish said

Awww poor guy...jeenie said

Cut the crap...i spatted

Nd they both started laughing

I groaned nd entered in class jeenie sat beside me nd rish front of me

Aaooo and for what that was?? Sid said while rubbing his hand to rohit who had hit him too hard

Where the f**k you were???? Rohit spatted

He was busy in evasdropping...i said before Rish can say anything

What like seriously here i was tackling that wimp and you were busy in evasdropping...Rohit said in full of anger

Wooaahh mate cool down...Rish said

Forget it...Rohit said nd went for his seat

Before anyone could say anything proffesor entered

So students iam going to give you one day project this will be partner project and your topic will be love...he said

Wooaahhh iam not going to this...i said

If you dont want its ok but it will surely affect your internals...he said

I nodded

Then he started dividing group

Jeenie and rohit were together

Kay nd rish ...professor said

No...i screamed

Common i dont want to loose internals...rish said

I dont care...i said

Sorry young lady but you cant back out...proffesor said

I groaned

Rish laughed

So you have to write something that will define love like poem speech any thing if you have any doubt come in staff room and he left

Okay will be meeting 15 mins in canteen...jeenie said

Rish and Rohit nodded

Rohit was looking so pissed i was going to ask him when rish signed not to ask nd i backed off nd they both went

So you are going to do this...jeenie said

Yeah i mean i dont have anyother option...i said

Do you want to this...she asked

Obviously not...i said

But why???? She said

I dont know...i said

What do you know??? She asked

I dont know...i said and we both started laughing

Did i missed some thing said...rohit said while coming with coffee

Yeah probably missed the proof that kay is no more normal...jeenie said

Yeah iam special...i said

Exactly...rish said

I groaned

Whatever jeenie said

Do you want anything???? Jeenie asked

Probably strong coffee cause i have to tolrate ass whole day so i need strength...i said

Rude that was...rish said

Exactly...jeenie said

Wait iam coming with you rish said and they both left

So why you were so pissed i asked to rohit

Cause that wimp...he said

Who??? I asked

Lisa...he told

Oo what she did??? I asked

As usual he wants to date me either rish and we are not gng to do that obviously so she is blackmailing that she will restricate both of us...rohit said in really pissed tone

Dont worry mate if she will do that i will beat shit out of her...i said while showing my fake strength

I cant see your muscles...rohit said

Yeah they are invisible...i said

Nd we both started laughing

Here is your coffee...jeenie said while handing me that

While rish was staring at me so intensly

What??? I said

Nothing...he said

Ok guys we are leaving all the best for your project... rohit said nd they left

So what according to you love is??? Look for me its a shittiest thing its a public display...rish said

Dork...their is too many meanings for love you know only one...i said

Oo so you tell me whats love...rish said

Love is some thing when your brother hugs you when you cry is some thing when your best friend give you neutella when you are upset due to fights love is when it not only hurts you but also the people who are close to you love is when some one think your are his her world love is when he she live far away thoug things are same its not only exist between dumb couples it exist between brother sister best friend and many more...i said

Impressive...Rish said

Yeah i know iam talented...i said

But seriously that was amazing...rish said while looking in my eyes

I dont know why but i started blushing

Woaah someone is blushing...Rish said

I looked down

Aww..he said

Cut the crap or proffesor will kick your ass ...i said

I think thats your wish...rish said

Yeah probably it is...i said

Rish groaned

Okay natures call will meet you in class he said nd left

Jeenie called me

Hello...i said

Listen iam not feeling well there fore iam leaving...jeenie said

What what happend to you wait vl be coming withyou...i said

No need i vl mange ...she said

You sure??...i said

Yeah now bye see yaa soon...she said and disconnected phone phn

Nd we submitted our projects our was best project i know iam to talented nd rohit was really pissed on jeenie cause she ditched him nd we left whole day jeenie didnt talk me at night she texted me that she is fine now but yet she will be not coming tomorrow i talked with aunt karl she told she is having little fever so will be doing rest whole day




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Tadaaa new update was quite busy this week hope you all enjoying it nd kays love definition what you people think about that????? will post next chp asap till that keep liking supporting commenting nd buddying

Edited by Hitikalokwani99 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#50
it was nice plss describe scenes and emotions some more and there os confusion where u wrote rish as sid in 2 places
thanks for pm
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