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Posted: 7 years ago
#11
Nice start dear
Hope to see more

Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12
awesome update.. update soon. and do pm me
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Posted: 7 years ago
#13
Thank you so much i vl be posting asap
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Posted: 7 years ago
#14
Part 1

RELATIONS



"Get your lazy ass out of bed now" sid screamed



"Let me sleep its sunday"I said



"If you wont get your lazy ass out i vl eat your neutella..."jeenie blurted while holding my neutella in her hand



"Well done jeenie" my brother said giving her hi-five



I groaned and said "u are my best friend or his nd get back my love right now"



"Aww your love is not save in my hand"jeenie said nd started running
i reculently tried to leave my bed but my brother grabbed me i tried to get escape but he was way to stronger thn me nd i give up



Ugh..!!! I groaned


My brother was laughing shamelessly
nd then jeenie came dancing with empty jar of neutella i was ready to kill her as i am very obsessed with neutella but she was very lucky as my brother handed me his bottel



"You bitch you have to pay for this" i blurted by glarring daggers



"I love you too" she said



Nd we both started laughing



"So girls get ready we have to go for shopping"my brother said



"In 5 said"i said
he nodded n both jeenie n my brother left my room



I literally hate make up nd jeenie loves it some time she tries to convenince me but she always get successfully unsuccessfull as iam grown by my brother iam like him i even dress like him iam more comfortable in boxers thn shorts i rome in boxers when iam nt with jeenie cause she thinks thats nt cool so as jeenie is with me i will wear boxers...!! Urgh!!!! She will beat the shit out of me so better to wear normal clothes so i took out one of my black tshirt n blue jeans as i said i was ready in 5 min




Kaaayyy...!!! Sid screamed from top of lungs like i was living on moon..
Coming i screamed
As i headed down
No...i murmured



Jeenie saw me and their was grin on her face
i wish i just wipe it out
"See kay is here" jeenie said with grin on her face



"Hey sweetie roy"said sids best friend i just hate that guy he always flirt with me and my brother he wont do anything cause according to him flirt is healty



"Dont call me sweetie" i told roy in annoyance



"Aww i missed you to..."he said



ASSHOLE...i wisherped but he heard it



"Love you too..." his this make me roll my eyes N jeenie was laughing at me I glare daggers at her nd she stopped



"Why you are here" i asked



"Is this way to treat guest honey" roy said



"Yeah this my way if you dont like get your butt out of my house" after saying this i stromed out of house n went to car after 5 mins sid nd jeenie both came



"Iam nt in mood to talk to any one plzzz" i said N started song story of my life of one direction we reach to mall



my brother asked "why you are so rude??" I just ignored the question like i didnt heard it



Sid shook his head nd started walking with me as tomorrow was 1st day of my college which will be accompained by jeenie we started shopping jeenie took half of mall with her nd i just bought two tshirts nd 5 new boxers the jeenie give me dissapproval look



"Love you too babe" i said
Thn way to house we grabbed to many things to eat we had fun sid call it night



Jeenie decided to stay with me as uncle george nd aunty karl was not there they were like mom dad to us only they treat me like they treat jeenie nd i love them it was 1:00 pm sid came to tell us good ni8 jeenie n me was so excited for tomorrow



We shared our good night hug n went to sleep


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Your guyss are insane seriously the support you guys give is amazing...And also tell me if you want any changes i knw chp is quite small but vl make it up in next one kindly buddy me for pm keep supporting
Edited by Hitikalokwani99 - 7 years ago
vrimarfan thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
#15
really nice
waiting for more
plss dont take this much time
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Posted: 7 years ago
#16
awesome
lovely update yr
bs sirf aap caractors k intro pehle de do to better h
i seriusly liked ur story
vrna me taarey k alava kisiki story nai pdti ...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17
Nice a different type of track... Do continue and update soon. Thanks for pm though.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18
Amazing sisπŸ˜›πŸ˜›
Ur update is just bold and I am in love with all characters specially kay😳😳her bold replies
And Jennie Kay their frndship is goal
Ans their sarcastic replies like uπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Update soonach

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Posted: 7 years ago
#19
nice prologue. poor siblings.

nice chapter awaiting more

ty for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#20
Amazing update dear...
Lyk it...
Waiting for nxt update...
Don't forget to Pm...
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