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Posted: 7 years ago
#91
PART-13

ACTING WIERD


RISH POV

What the f**k you have done???? Rohit screamed in my head

Aahhhooo...stop being so loud...i spatted

You better shutup iam already pissed...rohit said

Rohit was pissed cause mistakenly i broked his xbox probably for 10th time

Okay i vl buy you new stop being so...

This your 10th time...he said by cutting me

Whatever... i said

I am going to kill you if you wont give me new... rohit said

He was very obbsessed with xbox whenever i setup his date he just shut that nd start playing xbox the reason i broked his xbox 9 times this was mistake cause of this shit he is single every girl in college wants him he is tall brunette with blue eyes thick accent and most probably kind heart but xbox has taken this all away poor girls

Yeah i vl...i said

Let it be i vl buy on my own...he said still in pissed tone

Awww...i said to irritate him

You are hommo or what???? He said

Ooohhh shit you get i mean my secret is out shit...i said with the fake cry

Rohit laughed

Ass...Rohit said

I smiled proudly

Dont you think you are behaving like kay???? He asked

No...i spatted

Lets move to music room let practice some notes...Rohit said

Cool... i said

Then we headed towards to music room

We were practicing hold on by louis tomlinson it was to special song for me cause he wrote for his mum who was fighting with cancer

Hey...rohit said in between practice

Hi...kay said i recognised his voice i turned back nd gave her weak smile

What you doing here???? Rohit asked

Cooking... she said

I couldnt control nd started laughing nd rohit joined me

Nd she started practicing

We started ours i started song...

As i finished mine i was so happy finally i have done it correctly i was trying to hard to get ri8 notes nd i did it

I noticed kay was so disturb like something was in her mind which didnt let her concentrate even 2-3 times i felt like she is watching me now that she is noticing me i am ignoring her i mean like wow their was time our eyes met we were staring eachother intensly like we both want to know whats inside no i wont let her

So i ask her is something wrong she said nothing it was wierd cause she was not mocking at all strange again she was doing wrong so i taught her when her skin touches its like electric bolt pass through my body WIERD she was going to ask whats wrong cause i was ignoring her cause i like her nd i dont to be fond of her better to stay away...

Message from brother aka rohit

Go man tell her

f**k off...i texted while looking at him

Msg from brother

Common you can broo

Will you shutup or else i am leaving i texted

Msg from brother

Commonon RISH..!!!RISH...!!!RISH..!!!

I gave him off look nd left while handing kay pick nd i dont know why she asked wierd

Hey...jeenie said while i was outside of music room

Hey...i said with smile

So with whom you are going prom???? She said

I want to say with kay but i cant

Iam not coming...i said without lossing smile

Ooo but why???? Jeenie said

Dont you have any date??? Jeenie asked

You must be kidding right yaa know no one can say no too me...i said

Nd you are not going cause the girl you wanted to be with is going to say no...jeenie said

No i dont want to go with kay either...i said

Did i mentioned kay??? She asked with grin

No but...

I knw how you feel rohit told me but why are you running just have guts to face her i knw she wont accept immediately but she will atleast try...jeenie said by cutting me

No i cant you wont understand jeenie its hard when you know you are going to hurt that person nd i can ignore her but cant see hate in her eyes for me i cant jeenie plss just let be...i said almost in broken voice

I knw their is something big with you but you dont know whats wrong with kay she reacts very different when she is near you when some one say your name light smile appears on her lips she loves mocking you like she does with me nd sid Rish trust me she needs you...jeenie said with teary eyes

I said nothing just looking at her i was figuring out what was wrong with her i just want to find

Jeenie sighed

Whats wrong with her i knew that some thing was their??? I said

I cant tell you wait for right time may be you vl knw... jeenie said

I gave her plss look

Sorry she told

Nd she started texting some thing

Message from brother

JEENIE IS COMING WITH ME ON PROM

seeing his text my blood started boiling why the f**k he is doing this iam going to kill him

So...jeenie said with grin then i noticed she saw text

So??? I repeated

With whom you are coming rohit is gng with kay now you???she said with fake sympathy

Shut up...i am going to kill him... i said

Haha...you can come with me if you want...jeenie said then she started texting then she was looking back then i turned i saw kay n rohit kay was smiling at jeenie nd rohit was watching me with a grin i have him look nd then gave week smile to jeenie

So??? Jeenie repeated

Yaa ok cool...i said

Chill its just prom night they are not going at date...jeenie said

It dosent matter...i lied

Yeah i can see that... jeenie said

We waved our good bye now iam going to kill rohit

What the heck is in your thick skull????? I screamed

What??? Rohit said

As if you dont know...i said

No i dont...rohit said

Why you are taking kay???? I said

Why dose it matter to you???? He said

Umm...i opened moith but nothing came

Speak now why you are slinent speak na speak...rohit said

First tell me why you are taking her...i said

Cause...but why dose it matter to you???? He repeated

Cause iam bloody jealouse and iam coward running from bloody feeling nd uh idiot is playing trick i mean...i said

Exactly if you wont stop some one will take her iam not one of them but one can be just stop being bloody coward or it will be too late... Rohit said

You know i cant she wont i mean i cant cause i know the future atleast mine...i said in low voice

No one know the bloody future and let her decide what she will or she wont...rohit said

Forget about it you wont understand...i said

You are not understanding Rish stop or it will be to late... rohit said

Okay iam leaving we will surely continue this talk... rohit said

hugged me for dear life i did the same he left nd left me in vulneravable position but he was ri8 but i cant
Urrgghhh this is hell
Everthing is so messed


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Edited by Hitikalokwani99 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#92
Awesome update
Like it very much...
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#93
Hope everything will be sorted
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#94
Ohho awesome update
Loved it
The way rohit convinced rish
Waiting for more
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#95
PART-14

Prom night 1

KAYS POV

Ready???? Jeenie asked

Ummm...no...i said

Are you mad or what??? We have to leave in hour or half...jeenie said in disguisted voice

Jeenie I dont wont to come... i said

Did you said some thing??? Jeenie said

Yeah i dont want to come...i said to loudly

What i cant hear you... jeenie said

Fine i vl be back in 5 min...i said

Sometime jeenie became so stubborn especially when it come to parties nd shopping.she is girl with black dark eyes brunette long hair perfect body she is perfect for any guy she is the one with kind heart and very good support system no one can have been pushed me like did she have lots of patience nd she is stubborn to but she has very soft heart she is the one of best thing ever happened to iam not not going to leave not matter how much we fight that only make our relation strong

You should be... jeenie said

I vl be back in 5 min...jeenie said

K...i said

ROHIT ND JEENIE CONVO ON PHONE

Hello...jeenie said

You guys ready???rohit said

No jeenie is not yet

Same with rish...rohit said

These guys are behaving like Assholes idiots...jeenie said

Seriously...btw what about kay is she coming or going to ditch me...rohit said with fake hurt

That god only knows..jeenie said

What do you think,they are going to accept???? Rohit said

Yeah both of them are stubborn they cant run from their feeling or ignore them one day they will accept atleast rish had accepted but kay aint going to accept this early rish has to patient if he want her...jeenie said

I hope rish stop this soon or iam going to beat shit out of him he has become to moody he spat every time its like he is on man periods...rohit said

Hahaha you are mad...jeenie said

Yeah i know so let the plan began..rohit said

Yeah...jeenie said

Okay Rish is ready we are leaving see yaa in 15 mins... rohit said

Yeah...jeenie said

Kay Pov

Woaah is this my sister??? Sid said

What do you think??? I said

She dosent look that bad...sid said with smirk

See i told you iam looking like cartoon...i said jeenie

No instead you are looking hot...jeenie said

She is blind...sid said

Yeah right nd jeenie slammed his hand

Aaaooo...sid said

Iam not coming...i said

What???? Jeenie said

Yeah iam looking like bloody wimp iam not coming any where like this...i said

Wise decision...sid said

Sometimes he is very annoying actually everytime

What??? Sid said

Whats your problem?? Jeenie asked in anger

Ummm my problem is this he pointed towards me you can see she is not comfortable at all if she dont want let it be dont force her nd you are looking preety it will be okay if you sometime behave like a girl...sid said

But...

No buts if she want she will if she dont want she wont...sid said by cutting jeenie

They both looked at me

Okay fine iam coming...i said

Nd they both smiled

Okay common will drop you...sid said

No need rohit nd rish are coming to pick us...jeenie said

What...i said

What???? Jeenie said

Why they are coming tell them no need we can manage...i said

Door bell rang

See they are here...jeenie said with smirk

Ok iam welcoming them you can continue your touchup...sid said nd left

What??? Jeenie said

You know iam going to kill you soon...i said

Yeah...jeenie said with fake hurt

I was going to kick nd she started running down wards nd broke nd neutella jar

Get your butt down soon...jeenie said

I groaned nd she laughed

RISH POV

What cant you see iam not well so iam not coming...i screamed

Yeah i can see how much ill you are stop behaving like moody girl it seems like you are on man period idiot now get up nd get ready jeenie nd kay are almost ready...rohit said

Iam not deaf so no need to shoutt...i said

Get ready...rohit said in annoyed voice

Okay give me 5...i said cause i was not in mood with arguing him i have became too moody cause him he is pushing me towards kay where iam resisting her...seriously why he is so stubborn.how ever he is right iam running away from everything

Are you ready or iam getting you naked...rohit said by breaking my taughts

Aahhhaaa good idea...i said sarcastically

See iam so smart...rohit said with proud smile

Yeah...i said

Okay ready???? He said

Iam not...i said

Okay then lets go he said nd started dragging me

Wanna drive...he asked

Yeah obviously...i said cars are love of my life specially porshce

Take to kays house...he said

What????i mean why???? I asked

Cause we are picking them...Rohit said

You know you will be dead soon...i said in annoyance

Yes thats goal of my life...he please note the sarcasm

Tell me address...i said

He told me nd i headed towards kay house i dont know why but there was knot in my stomach it was very strange feeling

Are you okay mate???? Rohit said

No...i spatted

Everything is okay...rohit said

Why the f**k you are behaving like this bloody stubborn...i screamed

Exactly...he said

I said nothing nd we reached it was only 10 mins away from rohit house

Whats wrong mate??? Rohit said

Kinda nervous...i said

Dont worry yet you are not kays boyfriend...Rohit said with smirk on his face

Can you please shut up...i said

Sure mate...he said and knocked door

Some guy opened door...

Rish rohit right...he said

We nodded

Welcome iam sid kays brother...he said

My face changed

You can come in...sid said

I nodded started walking

So???? Sid said

So???? Rohit said

What you guys are up to see let me make clear iam not that typical brother but if you guyss hurt them i will kill you guyss just make it clear i dont knw whts going between you guys but i have feeling something is going so mind it...sid said in calm voice

Dont worry sir we are not going to hurt them and their is nothing its just friendship nd friendship can also give scars which last long so dont worry we r not gng to hurt...i said

Sid nodded with smirk

Jeenie arrived

Nd she hugged sid behind her their was kay who was ready to kill her when i saw her my jaw dropped she was looking goregeous in Black nickers she was looking bit uncomfortable but she was looking cute jeene was looking too hot to handle nd she looked comfortable

Jeenie you again did something with her neutella???? Sid said

Yeah she broked whole bottel bloody blind...Kay screamed

Awww dont hurt her i vl buy you one...Rohit said

Mate you stay away...kay said

Awww thankyou soo much...jeenie said to rohit nd grabbed him in hug

I think they have started liking each other or had became good friends

Okay move your butts now and not be too late and you guyss take care of them...sid said

Some one is too excited to thrw us out off house...Kay said

Yeah right now move i have to meet swirl...sid said

She came between us i knew iam leaving nd vl never come back...kay said with fake cry

Dont you dare to say that again or i vl kick your ass...sid said

I was

Not in joke...sid cutted kay

Awww kay said nd hugged him

Getoff...sid said

Okay enough of drama lets go...jeenie said

Kay nd sid glarred

I went out side to attain the call i was coming back then i bumped in to kay nd she was about to fall but i hold her her body was perfect in my hands i wish we can stay like this wish we shared look for 2-3 sec nd then

Leave me...kay said by standing again normal position

Are you blind or what???? Kay said

I saw you thats why I hold you you never see me...i said

Yeah you are invisible for me...kay said

Yeah right...i said

Then she started walking nd then she fell again obviously i hold her

What you are doing with my date???? Rohit said with fake anger

I was helping your date...I said

Babe you are okay???? Rohit said

f**k my mate is dead today he said babe god bless him

Yeah. ...she said she didnt reacted jesus why she is complicated

You stay away from my date...Rohit said

f**k off...i mouthed nd he laughed

Lets go we are all ready late...jeenie said while coming

Awww look my date is there...i said

You look amazing...i said

This choked kay which make me laugh she gave me look nd then rohit abd kay both went toward car she was holding his hand if he was not my best friend i would have killed him

Awww thankyou jeenie said...jeenie said qhile we were walking towards car

I opened door for her

Ahhh gentle men...jeenie said

I smile in proud

Cut the drama nd get your butt inside the car or else we are leaving...kay said in really pissed of tone

I just smiled and sat i dont know but i was enjoying it so i was flirting with jeenie whole ride she was doing the same we were doing this cause it was pissing off kay nd she starred songs in loud volume nd three of us started laughing she just ignore all of us just like we never exist


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Hola guyss sorry for not updating i was kinda busy due to some personal staff i am going to post next two chps together till that peace
Edited by Hitikalokwani99 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#96
Hilarious update
Loved it
Man periods
Aww Sid and Kay
Waiting for next update eagerly
Okay sista I had read till here only before so my curiosity is increasing so update soon or meet meπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

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Awsm update dearr
Plz show kays dress
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#98
PART-15


PROM NIGHT-II



RISH POV

So we reached prom that place was f**king crowded nd jesus we saw lisa nd i noticed sudden change in jeenies behaviour nd then i turned back nd i notic kay and rohit were holding hands that make my blood boil nd jeenie felt it

I hope you wont kill your best friend...jeenie said with smirk

Yeah he is alive till now cause he is my best friend...I said little annoyed

Woooaaahhh some is too jealous...jeenie said

Stop blood mocking nd pushing me i have reached to my limits dont force mee to break down...i said

Thats what we want...jeenie said

I will kill you soon...i said

Its ok i can scarifice my life 1000 time for my bestfriend...jeenie said

Arrrghhh...i groaned

She laughed

KAY POV

Rish was looking too good like wise right and their is something between rohit and jeenie and they actually look good together and i dont know whats wrong with me i mean when we were in car i increased volume cause the scene that Rish was holding me was repeatedly flashing in my mind not because he was bloody flirting with my bestfriend

You are going to pay for that day...Lisa said by breaking my thoughts

Bring it on babe...i said

And she tried to pour beer on me nd i defensed whole bottel felt on her

Jesus christ...jeenie said while laughing

I did the same

What the f**k...Lisa screamed which caught rohit and rish attaintion who were getting drink

What happen you guys okay rish said

Yeah just her plan backfired on her...i said while laughing

Dont you get it we are not interested just leave her alone i vl ever see you near her i wont leave you mind it very well bloody wimp get lost now...Rish said in so angry tone

Woahh calm down romeo...rohit said

Shut up...rish spattedd

Wooahhh stop bloody spatting it was not big deal...i said cause he was really pissed nd i dont know for what so i mocked him may be it calm him down

It was for me i wont tolrate of anyone try to hurt you i will beat shit out of that person no matter of gender nd she had done this many time just because his father is princi that dosent mean she bloody owe us nd i cant see that she is trying to hurt you and jeenie i knw you can handel it but today you both are our responsibility better not mess with me today...rish said nd he was really pissed of i didnt said anything nd looked down nd his word i cant see some one hurt you were all time in my mind like why the hell he said that i mean why what he want to say why he reacted like this why he was so pissed i mean why

Heck i need drink you guys want??? I said while leaving chair

Yeah...three of them said in unison

You aint gng alone...rish said

But

Yeah he is right...jeenie said cutting me

Wait i vl come with you...rohit said

Cool...i said and we left

4 beers...rohit gave order

You okay???? Rohit said

Yeah...i said

Then why you are zoning out??? Rohit said

No iam not...i said

You are...rohit said

Okay fine i was thinking why he was so pissed of...i said

Cause he cant see that someone hurts you...rohit said

But why???? I asked

Dont be dumb cause he likes you...rohit said

No...i said

He do...rohit said

No he cant...i shouted

Yaa he thinks the same iam not telling that you guys date each other or some thing just try out friendship but you are not even trying that cause you ppl know you will grow more fond of each other and also may be cause of your past but that was past forget it and move on...rohit said

Its not easy...i said

We will help you...rohit said nd he gave me hug nd i did the same he is like sid to me

Nd we both took drinks nd headed towards our table and i can see rish was not that pissed off so went

Rish pov

Calm down rish...jeenie said while rubbing my hand

What the f**k she think she is she cant hurt every f**king person i know iam going to kill her...i said

Nothing happen rish no one can ever hurt kay she is way to strong...jeenie said

But i cant see that someone is hurting her cause of me...i said

No one can hurt her believe me i wont allow anyone niether sid nor you both their are so many people for her dont worry...jeenie said

Nd i gave her tight hug

Rish you are crushing me...jeenie said

Awww sorry babe...i said

She smiled okay tell me one thing why are you resisting her i knw their must be big reason but i can see happiness in your eyes when you are with her nd anger when someone try to hurt her but why this wall just get it off its hurting you as well as kay why you both are being dick...jeenie said

No its not like that i cant jeenie may be by time you will know it...i said

She sighed

Aww you gave up...i said to mess with her

Noo obviously...jeenie said

Awww poor girl...i said

She groaned

Dog...i said

Nd we both started laughing

You okay mate...rohit said

Yeah perfectly fine...i said with smile

Someone has became too moody...rohit said

Jeenie slammed his hand

Aaaooo and for what that was...rohit said

Stop bloody mocking...jeenie said

Nd rohit groaned

You okay babe??? I asked kay who was completely zoned out

Yeah...kay said

Dosent seem like...i said

That your problem she said

Okay now everything is fine...i said

She smiled wierd

Cheers we said in unison

We are going for dancing waana come??? Rohit asked

Sure...three off us said in unison

Nd went towards floor

We were dancing too hard i was loving dancing with kay nd she wss allowing just because she was tippsy it was wierd cause no one become to tipssy just by single shot of beer btw kay nd jeenie dances like crazy they enjoy it i was little tired so went to get someone drink

So mate you are giving chance...rohit said

Ummm..i dont know...i said

Pls believe atleast give it a try...rohit said

No i cant...i said

He sighed

Then i turned towards floor where i saw someone else was dancing with kay basically taking advantage of her which made my blood boil

Woaah mate what happend...rohit said

I said nothing nd went for dance floor that guy was trying to kiss kay i reached floor then punch him so hard he started bleeding i hold kays hand nd ran from party

Is she ok???? Jeenie asked

By holding kay

I am perfectly fine...kay said

I can see that why you drink so much?????? Jeenie said

Wait she only drank one shot...rohit said

Exactly...i said

What she cant be this high by single shot...jeenie said

Exactly...i repeated

Noo iam going to kill her bloody wimp...i said i know lisa had spiked kays drink

Calm down romeo we will tackle that wimp tom...rohit said

Right let me take kay in house sid is gng to kill me...jeenie said

Jeenie sat on road nd started crying

What happen babe why are you crying...i said

Sid will kill my best friend i cant see that...kay said nd again started crying

Awww jeenie said while hugging kay

Ok guys lets go...i said

No i want to go on long drive with rish

No you will go to home...i said

No...she said

Yes...i said

Annn nd she started crying

Awww not cry vl take you...i said while hugging her

Rohit and jeenie both were smiling

What???? I said

Nothing get her save bro...rohit said

Will sir...i said

Okay i will be waiting for you guys at rohit place so asap...jeenie said

Ooo i said with smirk

What???? Jeenie said

Why you are screaming loud its hurting...kay said

Cause youre boyfriend is being dick head...jeenie said

Shutup...i said

I know you are enjoying it you are only showing that you are not liking it...rohit said

f**k off...i said

Lets go or i vl go alone...kay said

Okay lets go...i said
Nd waved our good bye nd went towards car



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Hiya guyss i know iam not updating frequently iam quiet busy i hope yall understand on next update i will surely post their prom dress do comment till next update peace
Edited by Hitikalokwani99 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#99
awsm
sprb
drunk kay is treat to watch
plz update soonnn
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