One Night Stand--One Shot (Completed November 23rd) - Page 3

Brilliant!!!!!

You are an amazing writer, able to keep the reader almst holdig their breath wanting to see how the story unfolds. I especially love how you keep things simple, plausible, without needing to incorporate any unnecessary erotic scenes to sell the story. 

Bravo 👏 and may there be many many encores to come.

Thank you for a brilliant read.

My Version of the shaayri:

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Tear filled eyes tab tak toh thik tha. This izzat selling nonsense at the cut price of 15 lakh is getting to be too much. I'm giving SSO until Saturday( before the wedding) to figure out via splashed water or slashed hands **whatever** it takes that he is being played like a violin in D Minor. Or honestly, the essential core of his respect and admiration that she earned is lost. That is her right , something she fought for. That is separate from his attraction which is making him lose control-- not his brains. And being possessive  and marrying her because he can't let someone else have her is just him being no different than Daksh, with his mania. 

Shivaay doesn't get a pass at forcibly marrying her for the wrong reason ( anything other than protecting her is the wrong reason) just because he is the hero. He knows better. I hate this regressive Arre Yaar Shadi HO Jane Doh, Saab Fix Ho Jayega-- no. No. Motives matter .  WHY you do something is as important as the outcome of what you are doing. He is no hero if he contemptuously forgets what he knows already about this woman, what has taken months for him to learn. If he cannot trust his own judgment what kind of man is he?? 

For me and most girls, being given respect means a lot more than being lusted after. If all that's left because of Daksh and Shivaay's collusion over Anika's body is Shivaay's animal possession, the Shivika essence will be gone for me. Their love story cannot survive ASR and Khushi level disconnect. I cannot accept another couple,  where he adjusts to the woman he married because she is gorgeous and makes him frenzied with the need to own her, literally. While the audience is watching helpless, as intellectually he judges her with affectionate contempt, she is just NOT good enough, until the last scene. Another man who  can't trust or value the rarity he married,  because he never sees her as a partner, but as a pet or a problem he solved?? Count me out.