One Night Stand--One Shot (Completed November 23rd) - Page 2

varala

@varala

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Beautiful 😉

Just lovely

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Zarmina

@falala333

Senior Member

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

I never read a better ending to something before😃

You continued/finished Om's shayari!!!

I loved the part where Shivaay throws the ring far away from them👏

Om, always perceptive, notices not only the obvious tension between Shivaay and Anika, but he also see's the growing closeness between Rudra and Soumya..

And SSO making masala chai, who could have imagined😆

I've finished reading but I'm still smiling😃

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kalavathi5

@kalavathi5

Senior Member

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

This was simply brilliant! I mean I have no words just the biggest smile on my face imagining this happening. You are truly gifted and thank you for writing such an amazing piece and sharing it with us!

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shamy

@shamyj

Senior Member

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

hai I wish i wish kaash aisa hi hota...but then I also wish you were the writer of this serial!

This was how it should have been but thankfully we have you to fulfill our desires of what Shivaay should actually have done!

Brilliant! I got the feels! and Om ...I just love how you portray him.

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twerping

@twerping

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 7

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

I wish! This was so beautiful! Loved it! Wonderfully written as always...

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

now read this twice. haha will read it once again i know to get the picture fresh and clear in my mind always.

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Vianna

@BookWormV

Senior Member

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

WOW!!!! My poor poor heart! You just gave me the ultimate ShivIka scene! The ultimate Om scene too!!!!! I can't put these feelings in words, this joy that this one shot has brought! ❤️ Navin take a bow! You just truly made my day! *dancing around the house* Thanks for writing this!
xoxo
-V

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javeria

@Javeria3991

IF-Rockerz

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Awesome! 👏

Loved the shaiyri.

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1050638

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#19

wonderful .

yea love u soo much to show much real action in the story😉.

reaction of tht wretched engagement and subsequent action tht brought.

all good dear.thanks a lot to give us such awesome story.and of course want more and more.

p.s-plz update those story which is pending.really want to read.

👏👏👏

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ShanÃ© Pillay

@MorningStar01

Senior Member

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#20

I'm going to bookmark this OS .. so that I can have something to come back to and sooth my aching heart. Because I know the next couple episodes are going to break my heart 😭 and this OS is like a soothing balm 👏

You're a brilliant writer. You always give us Ishqbaazians the perfect scenes we need. ❤️

I can just imagine the senior oberoi's reaction if they saw the same sight OmRu&Somu saw 🤣 Pinky would have oh my mata'd right on the spot 🤣

-Shan'e

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