Junoon - Intekaam Me Chupi Mohobbat Ki Dastan...(SaHil) - Page 23

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Part 25:Love Paves its Way!

SaHil soon set the room right and Sanam moved to open the door... Mrs. Rishika who was standing outside smiled seeing her and said " well , beta Tanu has come..." and before she could complete Sanam spoke in between " oh...I'll just go and meet her...she didn't come yesterday ..." Mrs Rishika nodded whileSanam left the room...

Ahil was standing quietly till now too ran behind her ... " beta , you are awake..." Mrs Rishika was speaking but Ahil left the scenario without hearing her...

Sanam ran to the hall where she saw Rishi standing all alone..."Rishi , where's Tanu?I couldn't ask yesterday..."

"Bhabhi...she is fine , just come with me..." he was taking Sanam out when he saw Ahil coming... " Bhai, its good you too came...just come with me both of you..." he said as anger was easily sensed in his voice...they both went behind him to the garden...there Sanam found Tanu standing staring at her coming...

They all went towards Tanu while Ahil asked " you didn't come in the wedding yesterday...why?"

"I don't think you need to know Ahil JIJU..." Tanu replied angrily...

" Bhai, how can you both do it??" Rishi asked angrily.

"What we did???" Sanam asked confused.

" Bhabhi...marriage is not a joke here...its not about your lives at the end...its about the lives of our family..." Rishi said staring at Ahil.

"Rishi, I am elder than you...don't interfere in my matters..."

" Bhai , i won't have...but it isn't your matter...its a matter of many many lives..."

" Rishi...what we both did,I promise you, it will not at all create problems anywhere...but what I promised my brother, I will do it..." Sanam said lowering her eyes.

" Bhabhi...revenge isn't the solution of anything and that thing applies to you too bhai..."

"Rishi, how can you forget...remember how our Karishma used to cry...how much she has gone through...still you say that revenge isn't the solution... "

"but why don't you both understand...it is their matter not your...they both will handle it themselves..."Tanu spoke in between while she was cut by Sanam " Tanu...if it was their matter then it would have been much better but Aarav is in ICU just because of this man...how can you expect me to forgive him...I won't forgive him until he too goes through the same pain from which Aarav has gone..."

"What I did to him was right...he deserved it... "

"Oh please...you did to him what the people like you deserve...infact not people...animals...I am wrong in comparing you with animals...you almost killed my brother..."

"Its better such type of people die rather than polluting this world with their presence..."

Sanam almost raised her hand but she was stopped by Tanu who held her hand... "Mind your tongue...if anything happens to my brother na...i'll assure to kill you...myself..." she said as she took back her hand... " there's a limit guys...just stop it..."Rishi said cutting their fight in the middle... " she needs to stop it..." Ahil said as he left the garden angrily...

"Rishi...its our life and our decision...don't worry..." Sanam said calmly as she too walked off...

"There's a limit...there's a limit Tanu...what are they both doing..." Rishi said angrily while tears of grievance started falling down his eyes.

"I don't know Rishi...love is a beautiful feeling and they both just played with it...I don't know how many lives this revenge will destroy..."

"no Tanu...I won't , I won't let them destroy any lives in this revenge game of their's , I won't..." Rishi said as he hugged Tanu.

The part ended at the faces of SaHil angrily walking at sides while TanShi hugging in the middle...

WILL TANSHI'S LOVE PAVE WAY FOR SAHIL TO OVERCOME THEIR HATRED...????

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Author's Note: So after a long time friends, this update is specially for my friend Jasminerahul who asked for it...I hope you all liked it...Now as it is the 25th part and I always organize a small quiz on my 25th part so here goes the quiz , Please do answer it if you can.

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1)WHAT DO YOU THINK ABOUT MY FF???
A) VERY NICE
B) GOOD
C) AVERAGE
D) YOU WANNA THROW EGGS ON ME FOR THIS PIECE OF WRITING

2)WHO DO YOU LIKE MORE AMONG MAIN LEADS???
A) Sanam
B) Ahil
C) BOTH
D) NONE

3)Whom do you like more among the supporting cast...????
(like Tanu, Rishi, Tara, Karishma, Zain, Aliya...)

4)Which scene of SaHil is your favourite...???

5) When was TanShi first meet...????

6) Grade my story on scale of 1 to 5 (1 for worst,5 being good)

7)What do you hate in my ff...???

8) A name for the type of relationship SaHil have...???

9) An alternate for the name of my ff...???

10) Who is your favourite pair from among SaHil, TanShi and ZaYa...???

Finall Tanshi confronts Sahil regarding their revenge.They r r right in saying that it involves many familes.but these fools wont understand that.Sahil fighting...sanam even raised her hand to slap ahil.Oh!loved rishi's determination to stop their revengeful plans.Wonder how Sahil will understand that they r doing a blunder by taking revenge on each other.This chapter is very short.wish u had given double updates.

1)WHAT DO YOU THINK ABOUT MY FF???
VERY NICE

2)WHO DO YOU LIKE MORE AMONG MAIN LEADS???
BOTH Ahil n Sanam

3)Whom do you like more among the supporting cast...????
Tanu, Rishi as they have more screen space than ZaYa.

4)Which scene of SaHil is your favourite...???

Their scene in the school.Ahil singing for Sanam,confession..funny scenes during wedding rituals n post wedding

5) When was TanShi first meet...????

I don't remember exactly.Was it in the place where Sanam lied to be living ?I don't know.

6) Grade my story on scale of 1 to 5

5

7)What do you hate in my ff...???

Nothing.

8) A name for the type of relationship SaHil have...???

Crazy

9) An alternate for the name of my ff...???

Not suggesting any other title as I love this one a lot.

10) Who is your favourite pair from among SaHil, TanShi and ZaYa...???

I like Tanshi more.Like ZaYa too.But in this FF I'm completely in luv with Sahil n they r my fav pair.

TanShi trying to make SaHil understand that what they r dng in the name of revenge is wrong...Hope they understands it quickly...My Answers for ur questions:
1.)C-Average2.)D-None3.)Tanu4.)First night fight5.)Unable to remember 6.)3.57.)Irregular updates and dragging most of the times8.)Love-Hate9.)Mohaabath ki adhuri daastan10.)TanShi!!!

good all talk it out...to know more about the revenge
nice update

loved it
piyu dear
this was amazing
continue soon'
thnks 4 pm

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Finall Tanshi confronts Sahil regarding their revenge.They r r right in saying that it involves many familes.but these fools wont understand that.Sahil fighting...sanam even raised her hand to slap ahil.Oh!loved rishi's determination to stop their revengeful plans.Wonder how Sahil will understand that they r doing a blunder by taking revenge on each other.This chapter is very short.wish u had given double updates.

1)WHAT DO YOU THINK ABOUT MY FF???
VERY NICE

2)WHO DO YOU LIKE MORE AMONG MAIN LEADS???
BOTH Ahil n Sanam

3)Whom do you like more among the supporting cast...????
Tanu, Rishi as they have more screen space than ZaYa.

4)Which scene of SaHil is your favourite...???

Their scene in the school.Ahil singing for Sanam,confession..funny scenes during wedding rituals n post wedding

5) When was TanShi first meet...????

I don't remember exactly.Was it in the place where Sanam lied to be living ?I don't know.

6) Grade my story on scale of 1 to 5

5

7)What do you hate in my ff...???

Nothing.

8) A name for the type of relationship SaHil have...???

Crazy

9) An alternate for the name of my ff...???

Not suggesting any other title as I love this one a lot.

10) Who is your favourite pair from among SaHil, TanShi and ZaYa...???

I like Tanshi more.Like ZaYa too.But in this FF I'm completely in luv with Sahil n they r my fav pair.

Thanks a lot lot lot for the sweet replies Jasmine. So happy you liked it and decided to answer my questions too, Thanks alot. Right answer for that TanShi first meet question.😊

Originally posted by: ajay227

TanShi trying to make SaHil understand that what they r dng in the name of revenge is wrong...Hope they understands it quickly...My Answers for ur questions:
1.)C-Average2.)D-None3.)Tanu4.)First night fight5.)Unable to remember 6.)3.57.)Irregular updates and dragging most of the times8.)Love-Hate9.)Mohaabath ki adhuri daastan10.)TanShi!!!

Thanks a lot for your comment and answering my questions, I actually am happy knowing this honest review, will try my best to imrpove in the areas I am lacking in...😊

Part 26:

TanShi broke their hug, tears were escaping their eyes continuously.



The fragile relationship of their love that hadn't even started was destroyed in a day , in a day SaHil's cute fights took shape of an actual fight, if it was only about SaHil , TanShi knew they could solve it but no , it was about their siblings.

"Sanam loves Aarav alot , from childhood she cared for him like a mother." Tanu spoke as tears were still paving their way out of her eyelids.



"Karishma too Tanu , she is the princess of our house , everyone considered her their doll, Tara always used to get jealous of her...Rishi said as he remembered some of his childhood moments with Karishma.

"They won't ever listen to us... Tanu said as she realized that convincing SaHil is not at all easy.

"I would , at any cost ,I would make them listen to us ..."Rishi said keeping his hands on Tanu's shoulder.

"I trust you , we will do anything to make them walk on the correct path , they need to do it , not for themselves , not for us but for their respective siblings. Tanu said as she held his hand.

Tanu took her hand to his mouth and wiped his tears, she smiled among her own tears , " Mr chipko , you look good only with a smile , not with these tears... she said.

Rishi too smiled and nodded.


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Ahil was walking in the corridor, anger boiling inside him , Sanam too was walking just a few steps behind him , she too was in her own thoughts as she continuously thought about Tanu's words , her words echoed in her ears , she felt like she should run away but she knew she couldn't, once taken the path of revenge , we can't go back so easily , she knew she dug two graves when she decided to take her revenge , one was for herself.

She walked up increasing her pace as some feeling clustered her from within, like she was a devil , like she was ruining someone's life, when life doesn't get a right path to walk on , we often increase our speed to run away from ourselves so did she.

In her thoughts she never noticed Ahil and banged into him , Ahil was pushed forward by this slight hit and turned to see the person , he saw Sanam , he was about to shout when Sanam who just wanted to run away said still in her own world, "I am sorry... she walked away to her room even faster saying this while Ahil kept staring her , he didn't knew why but her sorry made him feel bad , like someone whom he had wronged was apologising to him, that was indeed right , he was the one who wronged Sanam , she wasn't at fault anywhere in all this but...but she was wronged , he knew this from deep within but refused to acknowledge the fact , his love for Karishma refused to make him feel guilty, refused to surrender to the small corner of his heart that still wished to leave this path , this path of revenge.

Sanam entered her room and, her phone suddenly started ringing , she went up to the receiver and saw the name , it was her mother , her discomfort increased seeing the number and she hit the phone hard and it fell on the floor shattering into pieces.

"When people aren't able to vent out their anger on anyONE , they do it on anyTHING Ahil said coming inside the room picking up the shattered pieces of Sanam's phone that he witnessed in front of his eyes.


"Ahil, please don't disturb me, I am not interested ... Sanam said turning to other side as she didn't wanted to initiate a fight now.



"Well , I would have but I am interested in doing the things in which you are not interested so I am sorry I can't.. he was saying when Ssanam closed the door and locked it from outside and went out.

"Sanam open the door, listen... he shouted yet agai but no use , afterall this time there would be no lizard outside.

Sanam walked in the corridor angrily , she couldn't find peace anywhere , she hated this feeling of despair that filled her but she couldn't do anything...ANYTHING.

She was walking in the corridor but she didn't knew that the house she is living in currently is not a 4 people house but has a lot many residents.


"Beta... she heard from backside as she was walking.

She turned to find Mrs rishika walking up to her and saying , " where's Tanu??


"Ma,she's gone...Sanam said trying hard to smile as much as she can.

"Oh , I thought to talk to her...ok leave it , today you have to cook something special, have you decided what you will cook?

Sanam stared at her blank , " COOK?

"Yaa beta , you know how to cook...right??
Sanam's face glittered up , "I love to cook ma...I would cook something for sure. she said as she realized she was told to cook.

Cooking was her favourite hobby , she used to love doing it , mostly she only used to cook food in her home but from the time she went to London to study , she couldn't cook there , it was like a stress buster for her and the best medicine of what she was passing through at this moment.

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She entered the kitchen and was told everything by Mrs rishika.

Mrs rishika went out passing on the whole kitchen to her.

She was glittering up , her face having a charming smile.


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Tara was walking past SaHil room when she saw it closed from outside , " bhai's room closed , why , if bhai is in office then too bhabhi must be there then... she thought as she heard a sound of something fallen from inside.

She went up to the door running and opened it , she found Ahil inside sitting on his bed drinking water ,tshe sound was produced due to the water's jug fallen down , " bhai , you are inside then why was room closed??? she asked confused.


Ahil who was waiting for Sanam to open the door was out of words. " fight with bahbhi??? tara asked naughtiness rising in her eyes.

Ahil nodded in a yes while Tara sat next to him and said , " bhai , you fought with bhabhi the next day of marriage itself, really bad of you...

"I didn't fought , she did... Ahil resisted back.

"Whatever but bhai keep her happy, my bhabhi is the best bhabhi in this world...

" oh , you know much about her...

"Yup bhai , I know , ok I am going , resolve you fight soon... she said as she walked out.

Ahil stared at her going out and thought , "Sorry Tara but our fight can never be resolved.

His moist eyes can be easily seen as he thought these words.

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Sanam saw the things in the kitchen , her sad face now glowing .

"What should I make??? she asked herself keeping a finger on her chin.

"I will make gulab jamun... she thought with a smile.

She started preparing the batter and then frying the gulab jamun's , within 1 hour she was done with the work.

She eyed the plate of gulab jamun's in her hand, " Aarav used to love the gulab jamun's I made... she thought with a smile.

Suddenly at the thought of Aarav she came to reality , out of her world of cooking, she saw the plate of gulab jamun's in her hand.

She thought something and smirked.


WHAT HAS SANAM THOUGHT...??? WILL HER SIMPLE AND SWEET HEART OVERPOWER THE HATRED OR WILL IT BE VICE VERSA??? IS WHAT SAHIL FEEL FOR EACH OTHER LOVE????
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