MaNan FF-Divine Dancers(Chapter 3-pg no.3)(26-7-2017)

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Sarahpeyton

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Posted: 7 years ago

Hi guys...

I present you with another story completely different from what you have read till now.

It is a MaNan Fanfiction with a blend of various shows and movies and has certain similarities with Chakde India coupled with Dance ka tadka.

I won't reveal much as you guys will have to find out yourself what the story is about...

So tell me how many of you want me to continue with this concept???

This was just a sneak peak of the story.

The prologue will be up shortly based on your response...

And guys I you can, then please suggest me a good title of the book. It must be something related to dance...

Index -

Prologue - Pg no.1

Chapter 1 - Pg no.2

Chapter 2 - Pg no.2

Chapter 3 - Pg no.3

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PROLOGUE-

Three people of almost the same age group were in a cabin of some office.

Worry was clearly visible on their faces.

One of the person spoke - Yaar tum log tension mat lo. Wo aati hi hogi. Kahi traffic me phasgayi hogi. Let's just wait for another 10 minutes.

Person 2- I think you are right. Waise bhi hum wait karne ke alava aur kya kar sakte hai?

Person 3 was just silently listening to the conversation of the other two.

Person 1- Yaar tu chup kyu hai... Don't worry she will come soon. Ab zyada soch mat. Chal hum bahar jakar wait karte hai... Dusre performances Dekhenge to mind divert hoga..

Saying this the three of them went to the auditorium to see the dance performances which were going on in the auditorium which was the venue of the Dancing Stars Competition.

The three of them occupied the front chairs reserved for them.

After two to three performances , the next act(dance ) shocked them to the core.

The person for whom they had been waiting for so long was standing in front of them but was representing another dance group which was the rival group of the three mentioned people.

(The three mentioned persons were the co owners of the dance academy and their academy students had participated in the Competition of Dance. But one of the dance group member cheated on them and joined the another group at the Last moment)

The three of them were Highly shocked by what they saw and to add to their woes, their dance group was disqualified from the contest and the rival group went onto become the winners of the Contest.

The three of them left the venue and reached their home.

A middle aged woman greeted them with a broad smile and said- Congratulations bachcho mai Janti hu ke tum log trophy jeet kar aaye ho.

Saying this she tried to feed them with sweets.

But then she noticed their disappointed faces and asked them the reason and the two of them explained her everything that happened.

The box of sweet fell down from the lady's hands and she fell on the Sofa highly dejected.

Lady- How could she do it? No this is not possible???

Then the 3rd person who was silent all this while, bent on his knees infront of the lady and said- I m sorry Mom. I failed you. I m not a good son. Ab mujhse ye nahi hoga. I quit...

Lady- What??? Quit Matlab??

Person - Matlab I quit dancing...

I will never ever dance again in my entire life nor will teach anyone.

Saying this the person got up and left.

Lady- But Beta sun to...

The other two of members his group tried to stop him but he had already left.

Done with the prologue part.

Too much confusing part isn't it.

Hope you guys like it.

Let's see how many of you can decode the mystery and the characters in the prologue part I.e the three people of the dance academy, the mother and the person who betrayed them.

Who were the people????

What were they talking???

Why did he quit???

To know more ,

Stay tuned...

And about the title of the story, as suggested by LoveyDoveyNeha, Divine Dancers is a good title.

But please i want more options from which I can select...

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SONIAGHOSH

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Posted: 7 years ago

nice start

love it

continue soon

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mehak_ahuja

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Posted: 7 years ago

Bey babee.. as usual u have come up with somthing so hatt k.. simple but diffrent i think thats ur style..

U can be callled the HATKE WRITER of the forum

Will be waiting for the story to proceed

Thank u for continuing

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Posted: 7 years ago

nice concept. ...

interesting ...

waiting for next update. ..

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Wow nice story.Mujhe dance bohot pasand hain,so i think i will love this story.Woh larka manik hain kya?Aur woh nandini ko dance sikhaye ga kya?Ya phir nandini ne dhoka diya?Sorry main kuch jeyada puch rahi hun.Jaldi se update dena ha.

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Hey guys...

Presenting the first chapter of yet another new story by me.

CHAPTER -1

Nawabganj, a small town in Bareilly (Uttar Pradesh) known for its ingenious production of gur(jaggery) and Sugar had a deserted look.

All the otherwise busy roads were empty and the shops closed.

A closer look at the houses too gave the same picture. No one was at their respective homes.

Where were the residents of Nawabganj?

Well everyone was gathered at the outskirts of the town where some mega event was about to start in an open air theatre.

(Let's talk about the event and the event manager- Every year there was a dance event organised by the Mayor of Nawabganj Ravi Kumar .

He was a successful businessman as well. All the expenses of the event were out of his pocket. He never took a single penny from the residents. Thus he has earned a huge respect and equal amount of love from the people of Nawabganj in a short period of time. )

It was time for the event to start.

The host walked upto the stage.

Everyone cheered and clapped .

Host- Namaste... Aadaab... Hello...

Mai hoon apki host aur dost Natasha Verma.

Pyaare bhaiyo aur Behno... Jaise ki aap jaante ho ki har saal ye Superstar Dancer competition mere Dad organise karte hai to is saal bhi hum hazir hain aap sab ke beech.

Aap sabhi ka bahut bahut Shukriya ki aap sab apna keemti samay nikalke aaye ho. Ab mai zyada baat nahi karungi. To seedhe lechalte hai is saal ki first performance ki ore.

Zordaar taaliyon se swagat kijiye hamari chulbuli aur sab ki chahiti Adah Malik.

[Zoya Afroz as Adah Malik.

She was a child actor in Hum saath saath hai (Neelam's daughter)]

A girl of around 17 years walked upto the stage.

Everyone started shouting and cheering - Adah.. Adah... Adah...

She took her position and the music started.

Phenke nazar ke sikke usne

Bik gayi hoon main

Usne jo chhoo liya tto haaye

Lagey ke nayi hoon main

Yun tto premi pachattar humare

Leja tu kar satattar ishaare

Dil mera... muft ka

Khamkkha hi taraste bichare

Leja tu kar satattar ishaare

Dil mera... muft ka

Teri nazron ka kaisa hai chhalawa

Ho teri nazron ka kaisa hai chhalawa

Hai ye sach ya ki ye bhi hai dikhawa

Nazron ka kaisa hai chhalawa

Hai ye sach ya ki ye bhi hai dikhawa

Dil ke dukandar hai doosre bhi

Hum thoda achhe hain, woh hai farebi

Ni me kamli kamli

Ni me kamli kam...

Haan Dil ke dukandar hai doosre bhi

Hum thoda achhe hain, woh hai farebi

Mehnga hai dil, sabke bas ka nahi ye

Bikna hai par teri khaatir mujhe bhi

Aaj baazar hi bik gaya re

Leja tu kar satattar ishaare

Dil mera... muft ka

Ho yun tto premi pachattar humare

Leja tu kar satattar ishaare

Dil mera... muft ka

Socha tumhara bhi dil hum kharidein

Kyaa daam hai bolo kaato rasidein

Haaye haaye socha tumhara bhi dil hum kharidein

Kyaa daam hai bolo kaato rasidein

Phir tumse karwa le jaisa bhi chaahein

Nazarein tumhari meri haazri de

Par tumhari hi nazaron se haare.

Leja tu kar satattar ishaare

Dil mera... muft ka

Ho yun tto premi pachattar humare

Leja tu kar satattar ishaare

Dil mera... muft ka

Adah finished her performance amid cheers from the crowd.

Then 4 others performed on different songs .

Now was the time for announcement of the winner.

There was complete silence.

Natasha - Wow... Ab sab hi ka performance bahut hi badiya tha. Maan na padega hamare Nawabganj me hunar hi kami nahi hai.

(Everyone clapped)

To Ab samay aagaya hai winner announce karne ka. Sabhi participants stage pe aajaye.

All the 5 participants came on the stage.

Natasha - Dil thaamke baithiye bhaiyo aur behno.

Is saal ka winner hai...

Koi bata sakta hai???

The crowd cheered for Adah.

Natasha - Ji Haan. Is saal ki winner hai Adah Malik. Zordaar taaliya.

Everyone clapped the loudest.

Adah was so excited and happy.

She received the trophy from Ravi Kumar and also took his blessings.

Natasha - Adah tum sab se Kuch kehna chahogi.

Adah took the mike and said- Mai kya kahu?

Mai apne Ammi Abbu ka Shukriya ada karna chahti hoon jinhone mujhe kabhi bandisho me baandh kar nahi rakha.

Meri har khwaish Puri ki.

Aur mai aap sab ka Shukriya ada karna chahti hoon .

Ab sab ne mujhe Itna pyaar diya hai ki mai chahkar bhi usey lauta nahi sakti.

Par Agar Mujhe kabhi mauka milega to mai Kuch aisa karungi jisse Nawabganj ka naam Puri duniya me famous hojaye.

Everyone got emotional.

Natasha - Lagta hai Bhagwaan ne tumhari sun li.

Adah- Matlab ???

Natasha - Ye lo . Ye newspaper ad padhlo . Khud hi samajh jaogi.

Saying this Natasha gave the paper to Adah.

Adah saw it and jumped in excitement.

Adah's mother - Kya hua Adu ??? Aisa kya hai is akhbar(newspaper) me Jo tu itna Khush ho rahi hai?

Adah- Ammi ye to Divine Dancing Stars ke auditions ka invitation hai. Mai kabse Iska wait kar rahi thi. Finally ye log U.P me bhi auditions kar rahe hai...

Saying this Adah hugged her Mother.

Adah- Ammi aap mujhe jaane dogi na?

Adah's mother looked at Adah's father who nodded his head in a yes.

Adah's mother - Theek hai ja meri bachchi... Nawabganj ka naam roshan karke aana.

Adah- Ji Ammi. Abbu aap bilkul bhi chinta mat karna mai jeet kar hi lautungi.

Adah's father - Mujhe tujhse yehi ummeed thi. Mai Khuda se Dua karunga teri kaamyabi ke liye.

The crowd was also equally excited.

Everyone gave their blessings to Adah.

Adah then realised that someone was missing.

Adah to Natasha - Wo kaha hai???

Natasha understood Adah's question and said- Aur kaha hogi... Wahin apni duniya me khoyi hogi.

Adah- Huhhh... Ye ladki bhi na... Mai lekar aati hoon.

Saying this, Adah rushed to the green room and quickly changed her clothes and went towards her destination.

All the crowd dispersed from there.

In the Meantime-

At a bar in Mumbai.

Four friends were discussing something.

All of them had a glass of wine in their hand.

Friend1- Yaar bas karo tum log. We are here to have fun aur tum log yahan bhi kaam ki baatein lekar baith gaye.

Friend2- Abey Saale tujhe to koi fark nahi padta but Mom ko jawab mujhe dena padhta hai.

Friend3- Aur Waise bhi we have a huge task at hand.

Friend4- Mai hoon na babe to tumhe tension lene ki koi zarurat nahi hai.

Friend3- Awww... How cute!!! Dekha tum dono ne ye mera kitna khayal rakhta hai. Love you baby.

Friend4 blushed.

Friend1- Abey yaar itna blush mat kar. Pata nahi teri girlfriend ka mood kab change hojaye?

Friend4 stopped blushing and said- Tu to bas mauka dekhta rehta hai ki kab ye mujhe daantegi. But don't worry ye mujhe Ab nahi daantegi.

Friend2- Guys... Enough. Calm down.

(A/N:

Friend1- Cabir

Friend2- Manik

Friend3- Mukti

Friend4- Harshad)

Cabir looked at a dancer and decided to befriend her.

Cabir self thought- Kya ladki hai yaar kasam se. Agar ye meri girlfriend banjaye to maza aajaye.

Cabir- Guys... Tum log baitho mai abhi aaya drinks leke.

Saying this he left from there .

Mukti - Ye Cabir ko kya hogaya? Ek drink to theek se li nahi aur dusri lene chalagaya.

Manik - Drink lene nahi gaya wo ladki patane gaya hai.

Mukti - What???

Manik - Yes. Dekho waha .

Mukti looked at Cabir who was flirting with the dancer.

Harshad - Guys... I have a plan. Let's just tease Cabir.

Mukti - But kaise???

Manik - Obviously us ladki ko Cabir se Pehle patake .

Mukti - But ye karega kaun?

Harshad looked at Manik and said- Manik karega aur Kaun karega...

Manik - What??? Dude are you kidding me? Mai aisa Kuch nahi karne wala.

Harshad - Manik Comeon yaar. Mai khud hi karleta but you know...

Harshad pointed at Mukti through his eyes which was seen only by Manik.

Manik - Ok fine. Just watch me...

Saying this Manik went away from there.

The dancer didn't pay attention to Cabir's flirting and went to give her performance.

As every man who ever sees me wants to hold my hand

And be the one who gets me to say Oh I Do

They swear eternal undying devotion, yes they swear

That they will love me forever, love me true.

But i don't need a shining star

And i don't wanna be rescued

No neither frog nor charming prince

Nor my summers barbequed

[I wanna chiggy-wiggy with you boy

I wanna chiggy-wiggy with you boy

I wanna chiggy-wiggy with you fella

Just chiggy-wiggy with you baby ]2

Free-eee your mind

Free is the way to live it up

Free-eee to go

Free if i dont wanna give it up

Free-eee to groove

The dance floor's where i wanna be

Free-eee to move

White picket fences frighten me

[I wanna chiggy-wiggy with you boy

I wanna chiggy-wiggy with you boy

I wanna chiggy-wiggy with you fella

Just chiggy-wiggy with you baby ]2

Aaa... dont want a talker

Aaa... dont need repartee

Aaa.. dont need a future

I just like to... party

Aaa... forget tomorrow

Aaa... my feet tapping

Aaa.. dont you get it

Why won't you let it happen

Say you'll never go

Never ever go

Down upon on your knees

Say you'll never say

Never ever say

Baby marry me pleeeaasseee

I wanna chiggy-wiggy with you boy

I wanna chiggy-wiggy with you ah ah aaa

Just chiggy-wiggy with you baby

Heeyyy...

Goreee...

Babyyy...

Yehh...

Khatoon ki khidmat mein khiladi ki hai khwaish

Qaatil yeh adaayein qaatilana yeh numayish

Kar le chiggy wiggy mere sang soniye

Kar chiggy wiggy mere sang jaaniye

Kar chiggy wiggy sang sang heeriye

Chiggy wiggy Chiggy wiggy

Chiggy wiggy chigi chig

Oyiieee...

Chiggy wiggy mere sang soniye

Kar chiggy wiggy mere sang jaaniye

Kar chiggy wiggy sang sang heeriye

Chiggy wiggy Chiggy wiggy

Chiggy wiggy chigi chig

I wanna chiggy-wiggy with you boy

Tera husn hai rehmat ya ghazab

Tere ishq ibaadat ya khata

I wanna chiggy-wiggy with you fella

I wanna chiggy-wiggy with you

Tera husn hai rehmat ya ghazab

Tere ishq ibaadat ya khata

Tu kahe to tere sang sang zindagi

Ya guzaroon aaj ki raat raat

Tu kahe toh din

Tu keh de to shaam

Tu jo kahe woh sach

Jo tu kahe wohi mera naam naam

Kar chiggy wiggy mere sang soniye

Kar chiggy wiggy mere sang jaaniye

Kar chiggy wiggy sang sang heeriye

Chiggy wiggy Chiggy wiggy

Chiggy wiggy chigi chig

I wanna chiggy-wiggy with you boy

Ho ho.. Chiggy wiggy ho thoda chiggy wiggy

Oh sun haal dil ka

Oh aaja chiggy wiggy oh kar chiggy wiggy

Oh kyun soche kal ka

(I wanna chiggy wiggy with)

Oh aaja chiggy wiggy

(I wanna chiggy wiggy with)

Oh thoda chiggy wiggy sun haal dil ka

Oh aaja chiggy wiggy

Oh come on chiggy wiggy

Oh kyun soche kal ki baat baat.

After the song got over, the girl was all gaga over Manik's charm.

Cabir felt jealous and fumed.

The girl gave her number to Manik and left.

As soon as she left, Cabir jumped on Manik and started to punch him( in a friendly manner)

Cabir- Kaminey tujhe yahi ladki mili thi patane ko. Agar tu nahi aata to is waqt mai Uske saath hota.

Manik - Cabir stop it mujhe kyu maar raha hai. Isme meri kya galti hai. Ab mera charm hi aisa hai ki koi bhi ladki aasani se pat jati hai mujhse. Aur Agar tujhe maarna hai to Harshad ko maar . Ye usi ka idea tha.

Harshad - Tch.. Tch Tch... Cabir tu itna cool hai nahi Jitna dikhta hai. Better luck next time bro.

Cabir - Harshad tu to gaya aaj. Sorry Mukti tum shaadi se Pehle hi vidhwa hojaogi aaj.

Saying this he ran behind Harshad.

ran for his life from there.

Manik and Mukti laughed at the two.

Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

Ignore the typos if any.

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Hi guys...

I present you with another update of this story.

CHAPTER -2

Nawabganj -

Adah went in search of her friend who had once again skipped the dance progam.

Adah searched everywhere but couldn't find her friend.

Adah- Kaha gayi hogi ye ladki?

Then something struck her mind and she slapped her forehead.

Adah - Mai bhi na. Bilkul idiot hoon. Mujhe pata hai wo fir se usi pahad pe gayi hogi.

Saying this she rushed to the hilltop in search of her friend.

Background music -

Na re, na re.. na re, na re..

Nana na re na re

Na re, na re

Nana re, nana re, nana re, na na re

Far far from the dusty place, a girl sensed the wind that blow with a very appealing smell. The thunder send her the message of the comming weather and thus made her heart flutter and arms rise above her head as the droplet touched the palm.

It started to rain all of a sudden.

Adah got drenched in water as she reached the hilltop.

There stood her friend with her arms spread out as if hugging the rain.

Barso re megha megha

Barso re megha barso

Barso re megha megha

Barso re megha barso

The rain appealed her too much and like a peacock she danced. Hands above head. Smile rose on her face. Feets jumping. Waist swirling on the tune.

Meetha hai kosa hai, barish ka bosa hai

Bosa hai, kosa hai, barish ka bosa hai

Meetha hai kosa hai, barish ka bosa hai

Bosa hai, kosa hai, barish ka bosa hai

Expressions as of a queen. The apphrodite on earth. She was dancing in an attempt to catch all the droplets of water. She walked swiftly and made her waist swirl. Hands crossings each other

Jal jal jal jal jal jal thal jal thal

Chal chal chal chal chal chal chal bheta chal

Nana re, nana re, nana re, na na re

Pillers became her strings of guitar. She was playing on the surface. Sometimes closer to it. Sometimes bending backward a little far from it.

Barso re..

Barso re megha

Barso re megha megha

Barso re megha barso..

Gile gile gile haan..

Haan haan haan haan..

Geeli geeli maati

Geeli maati ke chal gharonde banyange re

She saw muddy water at the end of the place. And her eyes twinkled. She ran towards it and starts jumping around it. The water ruined her clothes but a bird never mind anything when she flies freely.

Hari bhari ambi, ambi ki daali

Milke jhule jhulaayenge re haan..

Dhan, baiju, ghaj ne hal jote sabne

Bailon ki ghanti baji

Aur taale lage bharne

Re tair ke chali, main to paar chali

Paar waale par le ke naar chali re megha

A tree comes in her way and it was not an ordinary tree. It has a lot of raw mango on it. She must love it too much. She searched for a rock and as she foound it a bit afar, she hopped her way there while hands rose up and swaying in air.

She threw the rock from distance and missed causing only a leaf to fall. Her face fell.

Nana re, nana re, nana re, na na re

As after alot of shoots one mango fell and she picked it up and stuffed it in her bag. Making a mental note to eat later.

She saw a park empty as people ran off at the site of rain. She reached there. The middle of the park had a swing.

Kali kali raatein

Kali raaton mein

Yeh badarwa baras jaayega

Gali gali mujhko megha doondhega

Aur garaj ke palat jaayega

Ghar aagan, aganaa aur pani ka jharna

Bhool na jana mujhe sab poochhenge warna

She swung standing on the swing with the support of her hands. Her upper body a little bent.

Re beh ke chali, main to beh ke chali

Re keh ke chali, main to keh ke chali re megha

She dropped out of the swing and did a few thumkaas. One hand at waist, other at the back of her head.

Nana re, nana re, nana re, na na re

Nana re.. Nana re.. Nana re..

Na re Na re Na re Na re Na re

Few children saw her dance and join her to it. They all made a circle around her joining their hands with her in the middle and roamed around her while she danced. Hands flowing in every direction possible. Feets once forward then backward. The kids were enjoying themselves too as was she.

Adah was witness to all this from a distance and she nodded her head in disbelief and shouted on top of her voice so that her friend could hear her.

Adah- NANDINI...

(The girl who was dancing was none other than our very own Nandini Singh

Nandini was daughter of Kuldeep Singh and Harleen Kaur.

Kuldeep was a small time businessman and his wife Harleen was a homemaker.

Both of them loved their daughter very much and always supported her in every decision of her life. Be it studies or career.

Though they wanted Nandini to choose dancing as her career but Nandini was not interested in it.

She was an expert in classical dance but stayed away from dancing for reasons best known to her.

Nandini helped her father in his business.)

Coming back to the story,

On hearing Adah, Nandini turned back and said - So Miss. Beauty Queen is here. Congratulations for winning the competition once again.

Adah - Tumhe kaise pata ki mai jeet chuki hoon competition.

Nandini - Tumhare chehre Par likha hai. Aur Waise bhi tumhe kabhi koi nahi hara sakta.

Adah - Acha Acha theek hai stop buttering me Ok. Is sab se mai pighalne wali nahi hoon. Tum fir se nahi aayi competition me mujhe cheer karne ke liye. Mai bahut bahut bahut naraaz hoon tumse.

Nandini - Adah tum bhi na. Isme naraaz hone ki kya baat hai. Tumhe pata hai na mai dance se Milo dur rehti hoon.

Adah - Par kyu Nandini. Abhi to tum akele me itna khul ke nach rahi thi . Ye baat mujhe samajhme nahi aayi.

Nandini - Leave it na. Tum batao where is your trophy? Aur party bhi to banti hai. Is baar koi kanjusi mat karna.

Adah - Haan Haan... Party bhi doongi . But usse Pehle ek aur good news suno. Mai D.D.S(Divine Dancing Stars) ke liye audition dene jarahi hoon Jo pehli baar U.P me horahe hai. I hope I get selected.

Nandini - Obviously tum hi select hogi.

Adah - Agar select hogayi to Mumbai japaungi aur top dancing academy me experts ke under training and then directly Dancing Stars Competition me entry. I m so excited.

Nandini listened to Adah attentively and said- I pray to God that all your wishes get fulfilled.

Adah hugged Nandini and said- Thank you Nandu.

Nandini - Ab chalein...

Adah - Yeah.. Let's go... Bahut Saari tayyari karni hai. It's already late.

With this they went to Adah's house and got busy with Adah as Nandini helped Adah to get her bags packed.

In the meantime at the same Bar in Mumbai where Manik and his friends were present-

As Harshad and Cabir were busy in their fight, Manik looked at his watch and said to Mukti - Mukti Ab mai chalta hoon. It's getting late aur Waise bhi Mom aaj ghar pe nahi hai.

Mukti - Ok then... See you tomorrow... Bye.

Manik - Bye.

With this he left the bar and drove back home.

Cabir and Harshad finished their so called fight and came back to Mukti.

Cabir-Ye Manik kaha hai?

Mukti - Wo already ghar ke liye nikal gaya hai. Usey der horahi thi.

Cabir - Itni jaldi??? Khair Ab hum bhi chalte hai. Waise bhi yaha Kuch maza nahi aaraha hai.

Mukti - Okay. Let's go Harshad. Bye Cabir.

Cabir winked at Mukti and Harshad and said - Bye guys... Have fun...

Saying this he left.

Harshad smiled and put his hand on Mukti's shoulder and said- Let's go...

Mukti removing Harshad's hand from her shoulder said- Harshad hum saath me nahi jarahe hai. Tum apne ghar jaoge aur mai apne. Samjhe...

Harshad's face fell on hearing this.

Harshad - Ok Baby as you say...

Mukti - Aww... You are so cute...

Saying this she kissed Harshad's cheek.

And this brought a smile on Harshad's face.

With this even they left to their respective homes.

Manik reached his house and found darkness all around.

Manik selfthought - Ye itna andhera kyu hai ghar me.

He went to the switch board and switched on the lights but there was a powercut.

Manik - Light ko bhi abhi jaana tha. Mom bhi ghar pe nahi hai. Ab mai candles kaha se dhoondh itne andhere mein?

Manik with the help of his mobile flashlight, somehow managed to reach his room.

He went to the cupboard to search for candles but suddenly heard the sound of shower from his bathroom.

Manik - Ye kaun aagaya mere room me. Lagta hai koi chor hai. And look at his guts... Mere room me aakar mere bathroom me shower leraha hai ye chor. Abhi dekhta hoon usey.

Manik walked upto the bathroom door when the lights came back and there stood a girl just wrapped in a towel at the bathroom door.

Manik - Tum????

Phewww...

Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

Ignore the typos if any.

Any guesses as to who was the girl in Manik's room.

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Sarahpeyton

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Hi Guysss...

Presenting another update of this story.

CHAPTER-3

Manik walked upto the bathroom door when the lights came back and there stood a girl just wrapped in a towel at the bathroom door.

Manik - Tum????

Girl- Haan main... Kyu tum kisi aur ko expect kar rahe the.

She winked at Manik who inturn said- Ri ...Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho? Aur tum andar kaise aayi???

The girl was Riya Singh, one of the best dancers of DD(Divine Dancers) Academy.

Riya- Oh Comeon Manik... Ye bekar ke qstns mat puchu. Instead ye pucho ki mai yaha kyu aayi.

Manik sighed and said- Kyu???

Girl- Tumhare liye silly. Kitne din hogaye the tumse mile hue. Aur aaj to Aunty bhi ghar pe nahi hai so i thought both of us can spend some alone time. U know what i mean.

Manik- Okayyy... Ab to mujhse mil li na ... Now Leave... Aur haan kuch pehan lo pehle.

The girl smirked and came near Manik.

She traced her fingers on Maniks face. Manik closed his eyes tightly.

Girl- Mujhe aise towel me dekhkar tumhe kuch horaha hai kya???

Manik- Nahi...

Girl- Jhoot...

Saying this the girl pecked Manik's cheek.

Manik immediately opened his eyes and pushed the girl away and he turned back.

The girl smirked even more and played a song on the music system.

Chaliya ,Chaliya ,Chaliya
Rooh Chura Loon Mein Hoon
Aise Chaliya
Haath Na Aau Mein Hoon
Aise Chaliya.

(Riya traced her hand over her body while swaying her hips)

Chaliya ,Chaliya ,Chaliya
Rooh Chura Loon Mein Hoon
Aise Chaliya
Haath Na Aau Mein Hoon
Aise Chaliya

(Riya walked towards Manik and mafe him sit on a chair and moved around him in a sexy manner)

Oos Leher Hoon
Dhoop Seher Hoon
Baath Meher Hoon
Bach Ke Jayega Kahan

(Manik got up from the chair and was about to go away from Riya but she held his hand and pulled him closer)

Na Lada Na Lada Tu Aankh Na Lada
Dont Look At Me Like That Mahi
Na Lada Na Lada Tu Aankh Na Lada
Dont Look At Me Like That Boyz
Na Lada Na Lada Tu Aankh Na Lada
Dont Look At Me Like That Mahi
Na Lada Na Lada Tu Aankh Na Lada
Dont Look At Me Like That Boy

(Riya wrapped her one leg around Manik's waist and kept Maniks hand on her outer thigh for support. And then she bent backwards closing her eyes.)

Chaliya ,Chaliya ,Chaliya
Rooh Chura Loon Mein Hoon
Aise Chaliya

(Manik with a jerk pulled Riya back to him and traced his hand on her thighs.)

Raat Hoon Taron Mein Mil Jau
Har Mod Pe Mein Aahon Ki Baahon Mein Khil Jau
Chal Hoon Tujhe Pe Mein Chal Jau
Tu Na Janega Kab Bazi Mein Dhoke Se Maar Jau

(Riya opened the buttons of Manik's shirt without him realising and removed his shirt off his body).

Beekhre Dil Ka Mein Haal Hoon
Aur Galib Ka Mein Khayaal Hoon

(Riya threw the towel on Maniks face and wore his shirt)

Mein Noor Hoon
Mein Hoor Hoon
Baach Ke Jayega Kaahan
Na Lada Na Lada Tu Aankh Na Lada

(Manik kept the towel aside and looked at Riya from head to toe and smirked)

Dont Look At Me Like That Mahi
Na Lada Na Lada Tu Aankh Na Lada
Dont Look At Me Like That Boy
Na Lada Na Lada Tu Aankh Na Lada
Dont Look At Me Like That Mahi
Na Lada Na Lada Tu Aankh Na Lada
Dont Look At Me Like That Boy

(Manik pulled Riya close to him and turned her back. He held her by her waist while Riya did a few dance moves close to Manik)

Chaliya ,Chaliya ,Chaliya

( Nashila Nashila Tera Naiana
Churayi Le Humra Chaina
Abb Hamre Dil Mein Rehna )... (2)

(Manik made Riya to face him and leaned in to kiss)

Haaan Raaz Hoon
Hootho Ko Sil Jauun

(Riya put her finger on Maniks lips stopping him from kissing and nodded in a no)

Tere Haatho Se Mein Ret Banke Phisal Jau

(Riya moved away from Manik and went to the washroom and Manik followed her)

Boond Hoon Tujhpe Baras Jau
Jo Na Bujhe Gi Woh Pyaas Bane Mein Tarasau

(Riya sprinkled few water drops on Maniks face to which he closed his eyes. Riya took Manik under the shower and cool water hit their bodies.)

Chal Ki Pheli Chal Hoon
Mein Sujha Uljha Chal Hoon
I M The Noor
I M The Hoor

(Manik placed Riya's hair over one shoulder and dropped a few kisses on her wet body.)

Baach Ke Jayega Kaahan
Na Lada Na Lada Tu Aankh Na Lada
Dont You Look At Me Like That Mahi
Na Lada Na Lada Tu Aankh Na Lada
Dont You Look At Me Like That Boy

(Manik lifted Riya and carried her to his bed)

Chaliya ,Chaliya ,Chaliya
Rooh Chura Loon Mein Hoon
Aise Chaliya
Haath Na Aau Mein Hoon
Aise Chaliya

(Both of them shared an eyelock)

Oos Leher Hoon
Dhoop Seher Hoon
Baath Meher Hoon
Bach Ke Jayega Kahan
Na Lada Na Lada Tu Aankh Na Lada
Dont Look At Me Like That Mahi
Na Lada Na Lada Tu Aankh Na Lada
Dont Look At Me Like That Boyz
Na Lada Na Lada Tu Aankh Na Lada
Dont Look At Me Like That Mahi
Na Lada Na Lada Tu Aankh Na Lada
Dont Look At Me Like That Boy

(Riya was on top of Manik . She placed open mouth kisses all over Maniks body. )

Both of them highly turned on.

Manik came above Riya in a flash and pinned her hands to the bed.

Riya- I missed u Manik... Didn't u miss me???

Manik- Ofcourse i missed u Ri ...

Manik was completely in trance as he kissed Riya's forehead, then cheeks and as he was about to kiss her lips both of them heard a bang on the door.

Person outside- Manik... Beta Open the door.

Manik- Mom...

Riya pleaded with her eyes and said- Manik...

Manik- Sorry Babes... Nothing is more important than Mom.
Got to go...

Manik got up and put on his shirt whereas the girl quickly changed into her dress.

As soon as Manik opened the door, Nyonika stormed in and threw mean looks at Riya.

Manik- Mom... Mai wo...

Nyonika showed her hand to Manik asking him to stop.

Nyonika- Manik Beta... Aaj tu kuch nahi bolega. Mai iski khabar leti hoon.

Saying this Nyonika pounced on Riya like an angry tigress.

Nyonika- Tum sudhrogi nahi na. Kitni baar samjhaya tumhe Manik se dur raho. But nahi. Har baar besharmo ki tarah muh uthaye chali aati ho.

Riya- But Aunty mai...mai...

Nyonika- Ye mai mai kya laga rakha hai. Lagta hai tum aise nahi sudhrogi... Laato ke bhoot baato se nahi maante.

Nyonika searched for something to hit her.
She found a broom kept at the side of the room.

Nyonika picked it up and walked to Riya to beat her with broom.

Riya hid behind Manik but Nyonika held her hand.

Riya- Manik bachao...

Manik held Nyonikas hand and said- Mom mom... Calm down... Take it easy... Kya kar rahi ho aap? Chodiye uska haath. It must be hurting her.

With a lot of difficulty, he managed to seperate both of them.

Manik- Ri... Tum jao yaha se. I will handle her.

Riya- But Manik...

Manik- Maine kaha na jaooo...

Riya- Ok fine... Give me a call when this mess is solved.

Manik nodded.

Nyonika again tried to go towards Riya but Manik got hold of her.

Nyonika cupped Maniiks cheeks n said- Manik tujhe ho kya gaya hai??? Is ladki se dur reh tu. She is not good enough for u Beta.

Manik let out a sigh and said- Mom... Aap jaisa soch rahi ho waisa nahi hai. She is not what u think...

Nyonika selfthought- Tu samajh nahi raha hai Beta. But mai bhi shant nahi rahungi. I will find a perfect girl for u very soon.

Saying this she left. Manik passed his hand in his hair and closed his room door n went to sleep.

Meanwhile at Adahs house,

Adah and Nandini finished packing Adah's luggage and went to the terrace.

Adah- Nandini tumhe pata hai mai aaj kitni khush hoon. Finally mera sapna sach hone jaraha hai.

Nandini- Even i am happy for u. God tumhe duniya ki sari khushiya de. But waha jaake ham sab ko bhul mat jaana.

Adah- Bilkul bhi nahi. But i will miss u. Tum bhi chalo na mere sath. Bahut maza aayega. We both are good dancers. Dhamaal macha denge hum.

Nandini- No no. Never. Mai dance sirf shauk ke liye karti ho. Mujhe limelight me nahi aana.

Adah- Ok ok meri Maa. I give up.

Nandini and Adah stood there observing the beautiful view of the town from their Terrace reliving their childhood memories.

Adah's mother called them down to come and sleep to which they obliged.

Pheww...

Done with another update.

Hope u guys like it.

P.S: Please do inform me if there are any typos. I have written it in a hurry.

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