Ram Lakshman OS : Lakshman's sacrifice !! UPDATED !!! :)) - Page 2

proteeti

@sambhavami

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Nice OS with strong emotions!

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Mili

@LakshMila

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

RES😆

And let me rest😆

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Anokhisharma

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Anokhisharma
res 😆

unres 😆

this os is so beautiful

Ram-Lakshman convo was so emotional 😭 😭

u potray all the emotions so nicely

generally , emotional stories are very difficult to write but u seem to write it effortlessly

well done sweetie

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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Anu

@SenAnu

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Sumi !!! I love this !!!! ❤️😃

So emotional and well represented.. It was as if I could see everything happening in front of my eyes 👏😊

Ram and Lakshman have always been something of a writers dream.. and you have proven it 😆😳

Wonderful Sumi!!! 👏

Do write more !

😳

Anu :)😳

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Pooja

@moviefan-pooja

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Absolutely wonderful!!!!!🤗 and it was so emotional too😭, it was so well written

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Mohini

@..Dharma_dasi..

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Suni dear...

This was one of the most heart wrenching part of epic. Teary eyed read it all... I agree after departure of His Siya, Lakshman tried every trick to keep him happy.

Though somewhere I feel he himself was dejected by the cruelty of Destiny.

Well lovely writing... Luved the first pic a lot! Nd the Ram Lakshman night scene.

Keep ip the good work sweetie!

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Janaki

@RamKiSeeta

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Wow, this is so beautiful and detailed Sumi! 👏

You have portrayed the events so accurately, and yet there is so much love and emotion behind every word. I love it!

The scenes between Ram-Lakshman, and with their respective sons was so sweet, but I love the scene best in which Lakshman bonds with his sons and nephews before leaving.

Everything is absolutely perfect.

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Sanjana

@Siya-Ram

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: ..RamKiJanaki..
Wow, this is so beautiful and detailed Sumi! 👏

You have portrayed the events so accurately, and yet there is so much love and emotion behind every word. I love it!

The scenes between Ram-Lakshman, and with their respective sons was so sweet, but I love the scene best in which Lakshman bonds with his sons and nephews before leaving.

Everything is absolutely perfect.

The most awaited review na sumi😳😳

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Rati

@rati_pandya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Beautiful update...loved it ...everyone's emotions were perfect...

Do write more

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Riya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#20

It was beautiful Sumi...It was descriptive but not repetitive. Loved the visuals that you used...much much better way than what we were fed in SKR. Thank you for writing this girl.

love

Rii

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