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Posted: 8 years ago
#61
Intriguing teaser...so the 4 couples are resp. brothers and sisters. Praggs seems to be sick and Abhi...too is frustrated and unhappy...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#62
beautiful update...
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64
very nice
loved it
waiting for next...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#65
KHAMOSHIYAN
CHARACTER SKETCH

OMKARA MALHOTRA: TEH ONE AND ONLY MALHOTRA EMPIRE'S JAAN HE HAVE WORKED HAR TO BULD HIS EMPIRE... A PAKKA BUSINESSMAN

ABHISHEKK MALHOTRA : A BIG BUSINESS TYCON HE IS A RESPONSIBLE PERSON WHO LOVES HIS FAMILY A LOT... FIRST SON OF OMKARA MALHOTRA

ARNAV SINGH RAIZDA: OWNS A FASHION HOUSE ... SECOND SON OF OMKARA MALHOTRA... HE S ANGRY AT HIS FATHER SO KEPT HER MOTHER'S SURNAME... LOVES HIS BROTHERS A LOT

MANIK MALHOTRA: YOUNG HANDSOME BOY ALWAYZ FINDS REASON TO BE ANGRY BUT NEVER SHOWS HIS ANGER SIDE TO HIS FAMILY ... ABHI'S AND ARNAV'S JAAN... HE HAS BEEN PAMPERED A LOT

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SARALA GUPTA: WIFE OF KUBER GUPTA...

KUBER GUPTA (HE IS NO MORE NOW): WAS A BIG BUSINESSMAN... AFTER HIS DEATH THEY FACED SOME PROBLEMS...

PRAGYA GUPTHA: ELDER SISTER... VERY BOLD AND COURAGEOUS BUT SOMETHING MADE HER WEAK... FOR WHICH SHE IS FIGHTING NOW TO GET HER OLDSELF BACK

KUSHI KUMARI GUPTHA: SECOND CHARMING GIRL OF GUPTAS...

NANDHINI MURTHY: COUSIN SISTER OF KUSHI AND PRAGYA... SINCE HER PARENTS DIED SHE HAS BEEN ADOPTED BY SARALA AND KUBER...
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CARRIERS OF GIRLS WILL BE SHOWN IN UPCOMING TRACK...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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KHAMOSHIYAN EPISODE 1




HELO GUYZ.. ITS ARSHI FROM A TREAT TO ISHRA AND ARSHI FANS... HERE I M WITH THE FORST EPI OF MY 2ND FF... HOPE U LIKE THIS TOO.. AND GIVE THE SAME SUPPORT...

A girl entered the dark room... "oh no... this idiot... I wont leave him... where I have been trapped" she soliloquied
She moved inside to find him...

After a whie " I think he tricked me and escaped... as he knew tat I was following... its better I should also leave from here... this room seem to be a mini horror movie" she decided...
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She proceeded to door... but she couldn't open the door... " dam its not opening" she scolded herself for cmng... after a sec she opened her eyes wider " omg... I have been trapped here instead f him " she starts panicking...
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Some men wearing mask takes one man and ties him to chair... He was continuously asking them to be away...

But they didn't listen...

He then remembers..." dam... she was right... they had kidnapped me... oh no.. she was following me.. what will I do... this building s dark... she often gets scared in dark place... Whaat have I done... I have to save her... But how"
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A garden area... a man with high attitude came and sit there... he closes his eyes... He feels something... But ignores... a girl was following him... she hides behind some tree... the man feels her presence.. he searches for her.. but couldn't find...


A call came he lifts his mobile : mr.abhisek manholtra...

Yeah its abhi... from kukum bhagya

Abhi: yeah..

Caller: u have ordered 1000 pieces.. I have
delivered tat...

Abhi: tats great... I will check it and call u again...

He hangs up...

Girl behind tree " I have to tell him about tat threat... But how... I wont go infront of him...there r bodyguards so I m sure he will be safe only "

"why" a voice came she widen her eyes to see abhi in front of her


Abhi: I m asking u pragya... Y r u following me since 1 hour???

Pragya: u knew it?

Abhi: I can even feel ur presence...
He stopped ... Saying tat.. pragya gave a surprised look

Abhi: I mean... I saw u in mall itself...

Pragya: vo actually... vo...
Some men wearing mask surrounds them...

Abhi: who r u?

Men shows some pics... and asks them to sit inside the car...

Abhi fumes : what the hell.. where s my bro... where have u kept him?

Man: our frndz r following him.. if u didn't get in... I wil ask my frndz to finish ur bro
They two were taken inside... abhi couldn't resist but to sit as his brother was in their custody...
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Inside the building...

The girl searches for light... she couldnt get any. She was almost at the rage f crying... Suddenly she spots some lighter.. she lits tat... her beautiful eyes r shown... her tensed eyebrows shows tat she worries for tat man...
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" I have to get out from here anyhow... she must be scared..." he said to himself... and then he called one f goon...

Goon: wat?

Man: I have to go for washroom...

Goons having no option untied him... at once he ran... as it was fully dark.. they couldn't catch him...

Goon: full doors are closed.. so don't worry.. he will be here only.. lets split and search...

She was very much stressed as she couldn't find the way to get outside... she couldn't see properly.. her vision s getting blurred... she s about to fall...

"KUSSHHIII " HE SCREAMED and ran... He holds her...

Goons switched on the light of the building to search for him...

Kushi: arnnuuu...
She faints...

Arnav: Kushi.. get up damid.. Kushi... Kushi...
He was very much angry at himself as he s the reason for her condition...


Arnav: I should have listened to u atleast once...
Goons came and shocked to see Kushi... they grabbed both inside... Arnav was again tied up ... Kushi was seen lying on bed unconscious ...

Goon: dam... this s Kushi kumara gupta... why have u kidnapped her?

Goon 2 : we just kidnapped this Arnav...

Arnav: who r u all.. how u know me
Boss called them in rooms intercom: u idiots... why have u kidnapped this mad girl...? Have u forgot? She was a journalist... and she will definitely make us arrested...

Goons: sorry boss... we shall kill her..

Arnav holds his fist and shouts: don't u dare

Boss: silence... we have enemity with tat malhotras... don't do anything with tat girl... I will call u all once I decide wat to do
He hangs up
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Kushi slowly opens her eyes... she sees Arnav ...
Kushi: r u fine arnu?

Arnav: Kushi.. r u fine?

Goons suddenly ties Kushi also...Arnav continuously scolds them...

They all left the room and locked them inside...

Arnav: r u alright?

Kushi: because f u... I have been trapped here.. and u r asking .. am I alright?.. seriously mr.arnav singh raizada...

Arnav: I thought...

Kushi: oh please... for gods sake stop thinking... as ur thoughts always ends up messing everything...

Asr: if I m silent .. it doesn't mean tat u can say anything...

Kkg: to whom I am talking... he have never listened to anyone till now... why I am even talking to him

Asr: tats wat I am telling...

Both turns their faces...
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Inside car:
Abhi: u could have told me this before?

Pragya: if I tell this ... u even believe me?

Abhi: oh hello... see who s talking about believing... I m not pragya... I have my own brain...

Pragya: listen abhi.. I m not in the mood to argue.. I m really worried now

Goons who were irritated by their fight put plaster over their mouth...

Precap:

Manan and ishra intro

Sorry for aall manan nd ishra fans... u will be expecting their intro... tat will be on next epi...
So guyz... how s the intro f abhigya and arshi... if it didn't reach up to ur level.. I m really sorry... there s much more twist and turns r awaiting... so get ready for tat... and leave a comment if u really think tat its worth for t... bcz based on ur comments only I will decide whether I have to continue this ff or not...
Edited by arshiabigya - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#67
awesome update. Want more of Arshi scenes.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#68
Means Pragya was aware that goons were following Abhi n she wanted to inform him abt it n thats y she followed him?Did Abhi believe her reason 2 follow him?Arnav too kidnapped?Now Khushi too?Arshi scene was cute n even in d kidnap scenario they were fighting...eap khushi.but y this kidnap?I know MaNan.But havent watched d show.have read a Manan os by my friend sydell.this will b my 1st ff on Manan
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Posted: 7 years ago
#69
Nice update
Thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
#70
amazing cs n part
loved it
waiting for more entries
update soon
thanks for pm
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