KHAMOSHIYAN (PG 20) UPDATED - Page 4

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Posted: 7 years ago
#31
Very interesting story
I m waiting for its update
Uodate soon
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#32
wow amazing teaser loved it can't wait for the updates thank you for pm.
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#33
Awesome teaser dear please update soon
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#35
Really liked the teaser ... This looks like an super Intresting story,. Will love to read it
This is ur first irk I'll be reading so yes excited
Conti soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#36
Hy wooowww new story I love the teaser plzzz update soon 👏
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KHAMOSHIYAN WITH MANAN ISHRA ARSHI AND ABHIGYA PROLOGUE 2



last teaser is abt couples ... here s a teaser about brothers and sisters...

Kaamoshiyan

Pyarasa ristha (LOVELY RELATION)

Atoot bandhan(UNBREAKABLE BOND)

Par (BUT)

Ek galathi (ONE MISTAKE)

Ek majboori (ONE COMPULSION)

Thod diya us atoot bandhan ko (BROKE ALL BOND)

Kya sab kuch katham ho gaya (WHETHR ITS FINISHED FOREVER)

Ya phir ... kismath unko ek our moka dhega... (OR ELSE WILL FATE GIVE THEM ANOTHER CHANCE)

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Pragya: maa... huhhuuu
she starts coughing

Sarla came running : beta.. wat hap...

Pragya: huuuhhh (she was coughing)

Sarla: oh no... wait I ll get ur tablet...
She searches for it./ but couldn't find...

Pragya finds the tablet on table and takes it...

Sarla: I didn't keep this in table...

Pragya searches for someone... here and there...

Kushi outside the room... Gets relieves tat pragya stops coughing...

Kya hua in dono ke beech ki... pyaar hothey hua bhi jatha nahi rahe hain... (wat hap tat even though they had love.. they r not willing to share )


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On the other side

Abhi: I wont call mamic here... he s happy there

Nyonika: I m dying to see my son

Abhi: but by seing ur party invitations.. it doesn't seem so

Nyonika goes to asr

Asr: don't worry mom... I will talk to bhai...
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Abhi was reading some books...

Asr came

Abhi: I m busy

Asr: bhai vo...

Abhi: manic will come tmr..

Asr to himself: he didn't even let me speak to him... Y bhai.. wat have I done...

Abhi turns his face as if he hears his mind talk...

Raman holds asr.. and asks him to leave the room...

Raman: what the hell is this abhi... u r hurting him .. and I cant take it...

Abhi didn't pay attention to raman...

Raman: one day ur ego will kill urself...

Raman also left
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Aise kya hua ki pyar jathane ko mouka hi nahi dena chahtha hai...(wat happened... even though he wants to show love .. he don't get any chance)
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Ishu s standing outside having red roses and greetings having I LOVE YOU...

Raman: hey body builder... wats up?

Ishu hididng those : nothing ... and why r u calling me body builder every time...

She pouts...

Raman came close to her: bcz...

She looks at his eyes lovingly

Raman: bcz... u r body builder..

Saying this he pulls her hair and runs..

Ishu: I wont leave u ravan kumar...

Raman: hahah... to hold raman is not only tough its impossible... (raman ko pakadna mushkil hi nahi naa mumkin hai)

both run

Want to know more... just follow my ff... kaamoshiyan... and it will be coming soon.. by end of this month of October or starting of this november... stay tuned guyz...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#38
Nice teaser
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#39
Fabulous teaser
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#40
Wow great teaser please update soon
I can not wait for the next part of your story
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