KHAMOSHIYAN (PG 20) UPDATED

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Posted: 7 years ago
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HI GUYZ... HERE S A SMALL TEASER FOR MY NEXT FF HOPE U ALL LIKE THIS,,, HIT LIKE AND DO SHARE YOUR VIEWS REGARDING MY NEW TRY... ITS ALL ABOUT FRIENDSHIP AND LOVE ALSO HATRED BETWEEN ALL COUPLES...


KHAMOSHIYAAN TEASER


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A very big mansion s shown... the decorations r indicating for a very big party...

Press s there to capture each and every second of the party... light goes off..

A voice

Ladies and gentle man.. this party s for mr.malhotra... he s back to india... lets welcome our chief guest.. the three chambers of malhotra industry...

Another voice: its not three... four chambers ...

Man: yeah yeah...

The four man came in fron with high attitude...

Voice: mr.abhishek malhotra...

Abhi removes his coolers and gave a proud look



Voice: mr.arnav singh raizada

Asr came with his own pride...



Voice: mr. Manick malhotra...

Manic came with a cool look..



Voice: and mr. Raman bhalla

Raman came with a dashing look..



All girlz cheered up for the four young handsome business man...

Door the mansion opens to welcome the pretty ladies...

Suddenly the four removes their coolers...

Cool BGM plays... to see the pretty ladies... with super dashing look...



Party begins...

One of the girl heads towards drinks...

Waiter: mam... here s ur juice..

She took with a great smile...

Arnav came and throws the glass... the girl turns her pretty angry eyes... her cute pinky lips... starts scolding him..

Who else has the guts to scold asr.. she s one and only kushi kumari gupta...

Arnav: just shut up... i knew it already tat u r lack of brain.. but today i witnessed it...

Kusji:just stay away from me..

Asr: think before u drink..

Saying this he leaves... then she notices tat it was pineapple juice and she s allergic to tat...
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While they move opposite side with utmost hatred... a young man came and grabs one the girl and starts dancing...

WHAT THE HELL .. the girl screamed...

WHAT THE HELL U WERE DOING WITH THEM??

he shouted back...

Girl: tats none of ur business MR.MANIC MALHOTRA



The man revealed to be manic.. amd yeah ofcourse she s nandhini murthy

Manic: if i havent grabbed u here.. u would have messed up the whole party and the whole press would have been capturing u

Nandhini: they were misbehaving with me.. so i was only ..

He intrepted:lecturing... right??

Nandhu looks away

Manic: when this habit will leave u??

Nandhini: when u will stop interfering in my matters??

Manic gets angry and leaves her forcefully by which she was pushed towards the wall...

Nandhini looks at manic with teary eyes...

Nandhu: will u be alwayz like this to me??

Manic left the place as if he didnt hear her...

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When these two couples showed their colours... there was two pairs of eyes which were constantly seeing one another with utmost painful love...

Suddenly their soul came towards each other and starts dancing...

Man: missed u soo much mugambo

Yeah the girl turn to be pragya... and tat man was abhi..

Girl: me too... abhi



Abhi touches her cheeks... she smiles with tears...

While they were dancing intensly... the clapling sound disturbs them and tat turned out to be a dream... they were standing exactly opposite to each other having an eye contact...

They came back to reality...

Suddenly both turn away..

Both at the same time : I HATE YOU THE MOST... I HATE MYSELF TO THINK ABOUT YOU

By seeing the three couples...

THEY WONT CHANGE ... a girl said..

To which he replied positively...

Girl: by the way... u also wont change ever..

Man: why... wats the problem in me..

Girl: u yourself is ravan kumar..

By saying this she laughs...

He turn out to be raman bhalla..

Raman: if i m ravan kumar.. u r not less to jansi ki rani..

He also laughs back...

Ishu: leave those... who will unite them..

Raman: oh hello... dont start ur spying work here also..let them be as they are... i m not going to do any stunt .. got it..

Ishu frowns: akdoo... u will alwayz be a akdoo...

Raman: dont u forget tat i m the raman kumar bhalla..

She colapses his hair... raman frowns.. she runs.. he starts running to catch her...

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Press man: wow.. tmr hot news... after four long years... guptas and malhotras come face to face... will they again fall in love... or this time the history will show revenge story... stay tunned

What happened btwn these familes... tat lead to this much hatred in them?? Will they ever be able to forgive ... or will they ever be able to move on...

Stay tunned with me.

I will start on the basis of comments.. if u want this story or not .. do comment guyz
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Posted: 7 years ago
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TEASER 1 : PG 1

KHAMOSHIYAN EPI 1


KHAMOSHIYAN EPI 2



Edited by arshiabigya - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#3
Beautiful storyline . Though the title is khamoshiyaan, these 4 couples are going to create storm n tornadoes only.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#4
interesting storyline with da best 4 couples
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Posted: 7 years ago
#5
Congrats for the new story
Interesting

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow greqt story please update soon
I can not wait for the next part of your story and congratulations on your new story
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Posted: 7 years ago
#7
interesting teaser n start too
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Posted: 7 years ago
#8
Oh dear plz continue with this story
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Posted: 7 years ago
#9
Very nice story
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#10
interesting teaser rehana diii
updte soon
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