MANAN FF- LOVELORN(Chapter 14-Pg no.13)(28-4-2017) - Page 8

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Posted: 7 years ago
#71
Loved it loved it loved it.

Plz plz plz tell me its Manik I mean then only she ll be shocked and happy to see him na.

Cn't wait for Manik and Nandini to come face to face and their story to unfold.

Plz update soon, eagerly waiting for the nxt chapter. 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#72
Hi guys...

I am back with another update of this story.


CHAPTER -14

Ishita picked up the magazine cover and put it on her mouth in shock...

The person smiled at Ishita and she smiled back.

Ishita looked at the magazine cover and then at the person and the first thing that came out of her mouth was - Locshtar(Rockstar)...

Person bent down to Ishi - Hello sweetheart. What's your name?

Ishita was in a state of shock or rather happiness that she got to see her Rockstar. He was standing right in front of her eyes. She couldn't believe her luck.

Her Rockstar snapped his fingers infront of her eyes and it is then that Ishita came out of her shock.

Ishita slowly raised her hand and touched her Rockstar's face to see if he was real.

Ishita - R u real???

Her Rockstar smiled and said - Yes baby I am real. But apne bataya nahi ki what's your name?

Ishita - Hi. I am Ishita.

Saying this she extended her hand for a handshake.

Her Rockstar took her hand in his hand and said- Hello Miss. Ishita. I am Manik . Btw Aap Kiske sath aayi ho?

Ishita then realised that she was with Nandini. She looked here and there and couldn't find Nandini nearby.

Ishita - Mumma... I want Mumma...

And she was on the verge of crying.

Manik noticed this and said-Hey Princess... Don't cry. Ur Mumma must be somewhere near. We will search her together. Don't worry.

Saying this he got up and lifted Ishita in his arms.

Manik -Btw What is your Mumma's name? And why did you leave her alone. Dekho apki Mumma khogayi hai ab .

Ishita - Rockstar Mumma thode hi khoyi hai. Kho to mai gayi hoon.

Her Rockstar smiled seeing her smartness and said - Arey Waah aap to bahut intelligent ho?Ab apni Mumma ka naam bhi bata do.

Ishita - Mumma ka naam Na...

Aryaman shouted from behind - Ishu...

Both Ishita and Manik turned their heads to see Aryaman approaching them.

Aryaman took Ishita from Manik and said- Ishu... Tum Mumma ko akele chodke yahan kyu aayi. Pata hai Mumma kitna Pareshan thi tumhare liye. Beta aise bina bataye Hume kahi nahi Jana chahiye.

Ishita - Dad ...see Rockstar...

Aryaman looked at Manik and smiled.

Manik - Hello...

Aryaman- Hi... Aap to Manik Malhotra ho na... The famous singer.

Manik smiled and said- Famous ka to pata nahi but Haan thoda Bahut gaa leta hoon.

Aryaman - Arey nahi aapto Bahut hi talented ho. Maine sune hai apke songs . Aur Haan Ishu bhi apke saare songs sunti hai. Infact she is a great fan of yours.

Their conversation was disturbed by Soha who came to Manik and said- Sir... Aap yahan kya kar rahe ho? Sab aapko bula rahe hai.

Manik - Tum chalo mai abhi aaya.

Saying this Manik turned to Aryaman but he was not present there.

Soha - Sir kya hua???

Manik - Kuch nahi. Let's go.

Manik and Soha went away from there and Manik joined his friends who were waiting for him in his room.

In the meantime,
In Nandini's room -
Nandini was sitting on the couch with her face covered with her hands.

She was so worried for Ishita.

Nandini - I am not a good mother. How could I just leave Ishita's hand in this unknown place. Pata nahi kaha hogi meri bachchi. Ishu...Where are you my baby?

Aryaman took Ishita to Nandini and said- Nandini ... I found Ishita. Here she is.

Oh hearing this, Nandini looked up and saw Ishita in Aryaman's arms.

Nandini rushed to Ishita and took her in her arms and kissed her entire face.

Nandini - I am so sorry baby. I am so sorry for being a careless mother. Mumma is so sorry. Aage se aisa kabhi nahi hoga Beta.

Ishita - You are a good Mumma... I love you sooo much.

Ishita was saying all this as she got a chance to meet her Rockstar in Goa.

Nandini smiled weakly and said- But Ishu aap kahan chali gayi thi?

Ishita looked at Aryaman.

Aryaman - Nandini... Kitne sawal Puchogi. Ab wo wapas aagayi hai na. So chill...
Acha ab tum log rest karo. Thak gaye honge. Mai abhi aaya.

Nandini nodded and took Ishita to the bed and made her lie down.

Whereas Aryaman went out and was about to dial a number when someone tapped his shoulder.

Aryaman - Hey... Thank God tumne Manik aur Ishita ko spot karliya aur mujhe inform kardiya. Warna to aaj pata nahi kya hojata.

Person - Haan Bhai. Agar Nandini dekh leti Manik ko toh??? Anyways we have to be careful next time.

Aryaman - U are right. And let's not meet here . Agar Manik ne tumhe mere sath dekh liya to unnecessary problem hojayegi. Aur rahi baat Nandini ki to tum usse kal mil Lena. She must be tired and sleepy right now.

Person - Ok Bhai. Take care.

With this the person left from there and Aryaman went to his and Nandini's room.

He changed his dress and went to sleep on the couch whereas Nandini and Ishita occupied the bed.

However hard Nandini tried, sleep was far away from her eyes. She kept on looking at Ishita's face. Nandini was fearing that if she slept, Ishita would disappear.
Same was the case of Ishita. She was feeling so happy of meeting her Rockstar that she couldn't sleep.


She kept playing with her videogame.

Nandini - Ishu baby... Kya hua??? Y aren't you sleeping?

Ishita- Mumma aap bhi nahi sorahi ho na...

Nandini - Come here.

Ishita went near Nandini and slept on her hand hugging Nandini.

Nandini protectively held her and kept patting her till she fell asleep. After a few minutes, sleep overtook Nandini.

Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

Ignore the typos if any.


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Hey guys...

Palash Muchhal has liked my tweet and retweeted it as well.
Just wanted to share with you all.


I hope PARTH too notices and likes my tweets soon.

Kaaassshhh...

Pata nahi kab aayega wo din...

Just hoping it comes soon.



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Posted: 7 years ago
#73
super update finally manik and ishita came off face and aryaman and the person was talking super who the person suspense
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Posted: 7 years ago
#74
Great chapter once again.

Cn't wait for Manik n Nandini to meet.

Curious who is Aryaman's sister??? Didn't Manik n Nandini hd a frnd in college who helped to mk those goggles a trend??? I m guessing she is the sister.

And congrats for the retweet n like frm Palash.

Plz update soon, cn't wait for Manik n Nandini to be face to face, wht a shocker it wud be to Manik as he thinks Nandini is dead. Hope they meet soon. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter. 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#75
Awesomeee...soha aryamn ki sistr hogi...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#76
Manik ishita met

I hope Manik n Nandini too meet soon

and really wonder, why aryaman don't want MaNan to meet? and the girl.with manik knows abt Nandini.. is it Aliya?
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Posted: 7 years ago
#77
He too will definitely like your post dear,
lovely update,
continue soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#78
This story is so damn interesting so as the storyline.
Loved loveddd the last chapter

EAGERLY WAITING FOR NEXT CHAPTER

Update sooon... .

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Posted: 7 years ago
#79
Where are you???

I hope u r fine.

Plz update soon yr, it's been sooo long, this is one of my fav IF's MaNan story. Plz plz plz update.

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