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neverlandspirit

@neverlandspirit

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Dedicated to me?! Me is flattered

But then again, I did deserve this, didn't I

😎

Just kidding. I am actually pleased. Thank you!

Now coming to the chapter...

Okay, Kunj dear we get it that you have daddy-mommy issues but really dude, you think a French Gal will be the solution to your problem?? No buddy NO!

But a certain Indian girl might, If you know what I mean...

Plus you are kinda, like 20-30% already falling for her, just saying.

Loved this chapter, A!

Reading Kunj's POV was a treat. I kinda get where he is coming from and the coping mechanism he wants to adopt.

His feelings of confusions were wonderfully depicted. He thinks we wants a French Bomb but he really needs a Punjabi Phataka!

It was a treat all the way.

PS: Oh, I parceled a bar of chocolate for you.😆

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Dinky choudhary

@Dinky28

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

O la la got a super long update i must say cutting my comment to short it was fab amazing n superb do update soon

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Aditi

@adi_FMT_ct

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Wow A.

It's really long update.😃

And please don't say to me again and again that you will update.

I know you will.

& Meh;Thanks for giving help to A.

Now coming on the chapter...

Kunj's POV is beautifully written dear.

But I must say I expected this after all it's Kunj's thinking.

And yes now i understand Kunj's little rudeness.

& also understand why he can't attach with art.

Actually the reality,the rudeness of life make you mechanical and technical which is farrr away from the artistic matter.

But his thinking is wrong about the French girl date..As Meh said it's Twinkle who can change his life,his thinking and also can give him the hands of friendship may be more.😳

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lavanya

@amlavs

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Wow...

Wonderful update..

Kunj pov is amazing..

Looks like the boy is having some feelings for twinkle

French girl??, Solution for his prob??

Boy u r going to fall for typical Indian girl...soon..

Loved it..

Thx for pm.

LavSriya

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Jambread3

@Jambread3

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Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Hum busy Kya ho Gaye,aapne toh humme paraya hi kardiya 😔
Okay I'm done being melo-dramatic 😆
Finally you updateddd,thank you bae
Starting from I loved how beautifully you described Kunj's anger and frustration regarding his parents getting divorced!
I love how the story is progressing with so much ease and I see you have done a lot of research on French 😃
Kunj's mixed feelings for Twinkle was
Reading Twinj's conversations are always fun!!!
Why do I have a feeling that Kunj is going to date Rene 🤔
Anyhow,please continue soon...

P.S I know you're angry with me and waiting for me to update my SS,please give me a day's time,I'll update...sorry for the delay bub 🤗

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Eshita

@tikit

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Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Ahh finally n update.

Twinkle wanted to date french guy nd kunj wants a french girl s solution.

But twinj r perfect for each other.

S k said even i think kunj might date renee

Nd the canteen twinj scene so twinj style😆

A want an early update.

Big hug A🤗

Thanks for pm.

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Blissfullife

@Blisfulllife

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Posted: 8 years ago

#67

Wow a long one 😊 ...

Now I got to know the reason behind his lititle rude behavior..
.. Poor guy...its not easy to cope up with such issues...
But a French bomb is definitely not gonna help him with this...

Twinkle's Renee prank was superb...
And I loved her "food chain" dialogue..

I was hoping it to be cheese or something good... Afterall his "old buddy" waited for soo long..

I am loving the way its going soo smoothly...

Loooved it..

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Cobra

@FoodSmuggler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: neverlandspirit
Dedicated to me?! Me is flattered
But then again, I did deserve this, didn't I
😎
Just kidding. I am actually pleased. Thank you!

Now coming to the chapter...
Okay, Kunj dear we get it that you have daddy-mommy issues but really dude, you think a French Gal will be the solution to your problem?? No buddy NO!
But a certain Indian girl might, If you know what I mean...
Plus you are kinda, like 20-30% already falling for her, just saying.

Loved this chapter, A!
Reading Kunj's POV was a treat. I kinda get where he is coming from and the coping mechanism he wants to adopt.
His feelings of confusions were wonderfully depicted. He thinks we wants a French Bomb but he really needs a Punjabi Phataka!
It was a treat all the way.

PS: Oh, I parceled a bar of chocolate for you.😆

You happy = me happy 😃

Coincidentally, that is the same thing i tell Kunj. Well not really cus I fed him the whole date-a-frenchie-and-forget-your-issues idea. Let's see if he ever comes to his senses and realises that a certain girl from back home is his soulmate

Meh, i am glaf u enjoyed the read and Kunj will soon realise how hard he is falling for the punjabi pataka.

P.S me got the chocolate and no sharing 😆

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Cobra

@FoodSmuggler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: Dinky28
O la la got a super long update i must say cutting my comment to short it was fab amazing n superb do update soon

Thank you so much.

I'll be updating it in a short while

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Cobra

@FoodSmuggler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: adi_FMT_ct
Wow A.
It's really long update.😃
And please don't say to me again and again that you will update.
I know you will.
& Meh;Thanks for giving help to A.
Now coming on the chapter...
Kunj's POV is beautifully written dear.
But I must say I expected this after all it's Kunj's thinking.
And yes now i understand Kunj's little rudeness.
& also understand why he can't attach with art.
Actually the reality,the rudeness of life make you mechanical and technical which is farrr away from the artistic matter.
But his thinking is wrong about the French girl date..As Meh said it's Twinkle who can change his life,his thinking and also can give him the hands of friendship may be more.😳

Thank you Adi.

Look at you talking like a true behavioural analyst, I am so proud RN 😆

Kunj will soon realise whats right and whats not so right for him and hopefully then, all his apprhensions about falling on love will get cleared.

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