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Posted: 8 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: MaliciousAngel

Lol Adi, whom does that remid you of?
We do grade boys at times mostly during our midnight talks right? Is that what you hinted at?
anyhow thank you

Bingo.👍🏼

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Posted: 8 years ago
#92
THEY KISSED!!!!!!!!
I don't believe this,they kissed

Hayeee meri talented writer,finally you updated!
Thank youuu 🤗
The double update truly made my weekend since you know how busy and super bored I am of my studies...

Anyway coming to the updates,they were FAB to a whole new level!!!!

I loved every and every bit of reading them!

You know what makes me fall in love with this story more and more?
The fact that it's so different and nice,this plot/story is something I've always wanted to read and at some point,live it too!

This is indeed one of my fav stories here 😃

Twinkle's confusion was so cute
I love compliments like 'you're so rare' so great job in that 😎

I always fall short of words after reading your updates!
And your story is something I would love to read all day!

Amazing job,you're super talented jaaneman
Kudos to your imagination

I hope I'm not being greedy but please update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#93
Holy guacamole!
What was this?
I come back from a function at my uncle's place where I worked my a** of and when I came back you updated two parts of the story!
It's almost 1 am here and I should be sleeping but couldn't help myself from commenting.
This was awesome!
The kiss was a beautiful! I still can't believe that they kissed!
Girl this was just perfect I'm in love with this story.
The way you described the scenery and Kunj's physique haaaye mai maar jawan!!
The rating system something I have never done and don't even know if I'll do it but something I wish to do atleast once in my life!
The care Kunj took of Twinkle. And the excursion that felt soo like a date!
The way he brought food and never complained when he had ti stop for Twinkle! Haaye mera Dil I want a boy like Kunj to be my life partner!
Twinkle girl, forget all French or Paris boys focus on Kunj he is a dream come true for every girl even me!!
I'm sooo sooo happy you updated!
The update was too good and I simply enjoyed it!
Imagined sidmin throughout it all and made me miss them all the more!
I know I'm being greedy but kya kare after soo many days forum pe kisine story update ki hai and I want more!
By the way when are you going to continue your other stories I'm waiting for them eagerly too!
Pm me whenever you update!
Lots of love
Sayli
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Posted: 8 years ago
#94
A...
You really know how to kill me.
Either by your sense of humour or by writing like this.
And mind it I don't tell the above comment jokingly.
Part 7 is indeed your best upbringing in storytelling till date for me.
I am completely mesmerized.
Amazing will be little word for praising you.👏
Don't know why I Just loveee this part.
All atmosphere are sooo good.
And the last kiss...
Can I say...
Yeah to honewala hi tha...
Lovely.
Seriously take your time and write this kind of stuff further.
I can wait for my whole life.😊

By the way...
One more thanks...
Your update make me realise Sab dost idhaar hi hai.
🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: Dinky28

Two parts together oh my gosh you really made my day i dont have word to thanku i just came to forum after so many days n i got a pm from u i was amazed to see 2 parts update talking about first part it was truly amazing not yet read saomething like n how can i forget part two reading that got many butterflies in stomach view of effiel tower from hill i can totally imagine it and i really wanted to know how was kunj's sketch but nevermind n yes d kiss cant stop smiling
Else i am running out of words to describe ghis but it was beyond words
Update next part soon dear

I'm glad you are enjoying this story. 😃😳
The kiss was something I hadn't initially planned on writing but then thought it would steer the story in a new direction
Imma let u know what his sketch was in the next part and will post os shortly. Sorry for the delay, was battling the examination monster 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: Shaveerkti

Double treat...🤗

I need a mmuuuaaahhh...emoji...here

Awww Shavs 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: Komal1298

Omg Agent A such long updates and lovely one's...

I loved the kiss part nd caring kunj! Nd i really wanted to know how was kunj's sketch!

Thank you Komal, glad you liked them
I'll reveal that secret in the next part for sure 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#98
Really u will
Update soon and u will update an os also someone is like giving us a treat i cant tell u how much happy happy i am to see u back dear after so long how were exams we know u would done very awsome update soon ha cant wait!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: Jambread3

THEY KISSED!!!!!!!!
I don't believe this,they kissed

Hayeee meri talented writer,finally you updated!
Thank youuu 🤗
The double update truly made my weekend since you know how busy and super bored I am of my studies...

Anyway coming to the updates,they were FAB to a whole new level!!!!

I loved every and every bit of reading them!

You know what makes me fall in love with this story more and more?
The fact that it's so different and nice,this plot/story is something I've always wanted to read and at some point,live it too!

This is indeed one of my fav stories here 😃

Twinkle's confusion was so cute
I love compliments like 'you're so rare' so great job in that 😎

I always fall short of words after reading your updates!
And your story is something I would love to read all day!

Amazing job,you're super talented jaaneman
Kudos to your imagination

I hope I'm not being greedy but please update soon

I still can't believe I actually wrote that lol. I thought of it at the last moment
Awiee K, I am so happy that u liked the updates

I am so relieved that you guys like this so much because I was really skeptical about the same, it is indeed a different topic i've always wanted to experience something like this.

Lol I have been called rare too but not as a compliment thought. Yet, I took it as one

K I am at a loss of words because of all the praises 😆

I just love u for being so sweet
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: SweetSau

Holy guacamole!

What was this?
I come back from a function at my uncle's place where I worked my a** of and when I came back you updated two parts of the story!
It's almost 1 am here and I should be sleeping but couldn't help myself from commenting.
This was awesome!
The kiss was a beautiful! I still can't believe that they kissed!
Girl this was just perfect I'm in love with this story.
The way you described the scenery and Kunj's physique haaaye mai maar jawan!!
The rating system something I have never done and don't even know if I'll do it but something I wish to do atleast once in my life!
The care Kunj took of Twinkle. And the excursion that felt soo like a date!
The way he brought food and never complained when he had ti stop for Twinkle! Haaye mera Dil I want a boy like Kunj to be my life partner!
Twinkle girl, forget all French or Paris boys focus on Kunj he is a dream come true for every girl even me!!
I'm sooo sooo happy you updated!
The update was too good and I simply enjoyed it!
Imagined sidmin throughout it all and made me miss them all the more!
I know I'm being greedy but kya kare after soo many days forum pe kisine story update ki hai and I want more!
By the way when are you going to continue your other stories I'm waiting for them eagerly too!
Pm me whenever you update!
Lots of love
Sayli

I was initially going to update just one oart but then I knew my exams were coming and that meant no updates for half a month or so, so I decided to give you'll a bonus 😆
I am so glad that you liked these parts so much.

I had to rewrite that oart about Kubj's body three times. It was worth it though 😆
The rating system is relatively new so I say, go for it. I might try it out too

Kunj is a catch isn't he? If only Twinkle could see how great he is. I am sure she will realise this soon enough though

I'll update the other story soon. Figuring out the story line now
Thank you for such a sweet comment
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