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bhavi09 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
Kria is a mystery girl love it that way
poor Rey got beaten up 😆
hehe love the update
Kiarawinget16 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: bhavi09

Kria is a mystery girl love it that way
poor Rey got beaten up 😆
hehe love the update


Thank you dear sweet af '
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Update the next part as soon as possible
The story was beautifully written
love the concept
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: love-kreya

Update the next part as soon as possible
The story was beautifully written
love the concept


Thank you very much will update today or tomorrow
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
CHAPTER THREE
BR]
kria pov
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Butterflies in the stomach and my heart palpitations were at the peak . I flinched my hand back . At the 2nd floor , lift Gate opened an our building secretary Mr.verma entered with a wide smile and a pleasant face . He greeted us both and then asked me -
" So kria going to the sea bank ? but clothes ?
"Yeah i will change them there only "
"You must be a good swimmer then ?"
" A state level one "
"so why not olympics and all "
"i prefer saving lives more "
With the last answer of mine the lift door opened and I hurriedly went to fetch an auto avoiding further questionnaire.

Rey pov
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So now I know her name is kria and next I am assuming she must be a life guard in the sea but why so reserved and specifically rude then . Her cold eyes speak thousands of allegories which she tries to conceal every time . she is like ember you do nothing It stays like but you blows air to it turns into fire and I am not trying to poke her or precisely gaping the next time . Lets go and meet Swayam the boss a** licker I giggled and zoomed off my car .

Third person pov
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sea bank was experiencing a lot of commotion . Tourists, fishermen and locals were wondering there . Kria in her life guard dress was observing every single person single wave of the ocean single boat going
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Rey entered Swayam's home killing all the silence and creating Hustle there . as he entered swayam room he saw what he shouldn't . swayam and sharon were so close to kiss each other but he shouted and turned his back . They both parted and stood up in an awkward position
"Rey tu kab aaya ? At least enter with a knock na " said swayam with irk in his tone. .

" Dude mujhe kya pata tu shar ka lip gloss taste kr raha hoga " rey retorted with shock expression.
Shar with a disappointed face said -
" You killed the vibe rey . I met him after two days b******
Rey giggled and spoke -
"Easy peesy shar next time put a board outside don't disturb lovers gone wild "
Swayam hit him with a pillow speaking -
"It's high time you should get a chick " .
Rey- " i would get a lady not chick dude "
Shar promptly ran to rey and spoke in a dramatic tone - "Tu tension mat le rey main tere lie fir se blind date fix kraungi "
Rey made a horrible face and blurted - " Na maate tu rehne de pichli baar you fixed me with a girl who had armpit fetish . poori date main wo mre armpits dkhrahi thi ewww "
Swayam and Sharon broke into fits of laughter and rey joined them soon .
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It was 7 p.m. and dark was following soon . Kriya was still doing the same thing from past few hours . Suddenly she noticed that a fisherman's Boat with only one person was coming from the other side . She thought - " i bet i didnt saw them going from here then how come they are returning from the other side . Naval ships were patrolling but why can't they see it maybe because its an Indian boat " she saw that man didnt went into any fisherman Chawls . Kriya was quick to follow him in the street soon that men sensed Kriya following him he started running and by seeing this Kriya also started running in his pace .

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Read the next post too .
Edited by Kiarawinget16 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Ok sorry for the typos guys no proof read . And story will slowly gain pace so kria and rey aren't goona share a lot close scenes in the few chapters only . It will take time their scenes will take time . And i will update it regularly in two three days just keep liking and commenting . Buddy me for pm of the updates . Love ya 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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ahaan u r shaping it very well
Kriya a lifeguard :*
saves lives
vese she is our saviour anyway
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update 😳
Finally rey knows the name and poor swaron
😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Barkha_

ahaan u r shaping it very well
Kriya a lifeguard :*
saves lives
vese she is our saviour anyway


Lolz so right .. thank you ..you are quick haa 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: ChocolatelySmil

Nice update 😳
Finally rey knows the name and poor swaron
😆


You also are very quick 😆 your comment make me happy thank you dear
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