Archi OS : |****LOVE BLOOMS****|

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Hey Archians this is nimi...🤗 i have written many stories for Nibir❤️ my soulmate couple...and this is first time i m writing for Archi❤️...
Do tell me how it is...your jutta chappal and criticisms are most welcome 😉

on seeing yesterday's epi...this imaginary story automatically pops in my mind🤣 so i gave it a try...





****LOVE BLOOMS****


As soon as both aryan and sachi said "Pasand hai" they both lost in their own world der eyes got locked...revealing thousands of unsaid emotions while their lips ...their lips formed in a beautiful curve...on the other side both Mr.Sethia and Mr. Mittal were giving each other...winning look through their eyes...then after a moment aryan and sachi looked down due to shyness while the smile were still twinkling on der lips... seeing aryan and sachi like this...both became happy and decided to give their children some alone time through der gestures and after placing der hand on the head of der children both went away...

As soon as they went aryan and sachi again started looking in eachother's eyes...innocence and cuteness were clearly reflecting from there faces...after a moment aryan blinked his eye...while sachi was still looking in his eyes...seeing sachi like that he snaps his hand infront of her...which brought her back in this real world...then both gave an awkward smile to each other..

After a moment aryan asked sachi for a walk through his gesture...and she gave a heartwarming smile...in assurance and then both started walking...
Title song started playing on Background

While walking both were fighting with their inner conscience...

Aryan(monologue)- bol to dia pasand h...and she is a nice girl but mai abhi bhi itna confused kyu hu??

Sachi(monologue)- aryan accha ladka h...bhut samajhdaar bhi h...but fir ye confusion kaisi???

Aryan(monologue) - abhi to thodi der pehle itni baatein karra tha isse

Sachi(monologue)- ab kya ho gya sachi ab kuch kyu nhi bol ri tu??

And then while walking...dono ke hath ek dusre se takra jate h...and den again they start looking at each other...

Aryan- so mai tumhe pasand hu??he asked looking in her eyes...
Hearing this she looks at other side inorder to hide her shyness and said...

Sachi- mai tumhe pasand hu???she said still looking at other side...

Aryan- sawal pehle maine pucha tha???

Sachi- par jawab pehle mujhe chahiye...

Aryan - thik h jawab miljayega ji...par jawab me chini kitni chammach chelegi ji??he said making a cute puppy face...

Sachi - do chammach ji...as soon as she said this both started laughing their heartout...and started remembering their first meeting...

After der laughing session...

Sachi- gud night see uh tomorrow...

Aryan- gud night...

And then both went retired in each other's room while there faces were still shinning with an innocent and beautiful smile...

At Sachi's room

As soon as she entered...

Sachi's father- yha hamare samne kitna naatak kar rhi thi mujhe aryan pasand nhi...aur wha wha ja ke sidhe use hi bol ke aa gayi...

Sachi- papa ...she said shyly...

Bhua- to hmari sachi sharmati bhi h???she said placing her hand on her head...

Tanu- sachi di aap dono to ek dusre k sath kitne acche dikhte ho aap dono ek dusre k liye hi bane ho...

Kusum- beta is naye rishte ko...naye ehsaaso ko khule dil se apnana...ye jo pal honge na...ye teri zindagi ke sabse anmol pal honge...and saying this she hugs her daughter...

At Aryan's Room

Priyanka- wah devar sa...hume to aap keh rhe the ki aap confused ho aur waha jaa ke babasa ke samne use apne dil ki baat keh aaye she said dramatically...

Aryan- bhabhisa wo...and he was about to say something when his brother came and again his brother and priyanka started teasing and pulling his leg by taking sachi's name...

Next Morning

Archi's cousins decided...ki unhe abhi milne nhi denge ek dusre se and unhe thoda aur tadpayenge...so tanu made sachi busy in his bag packing and priyanka too made aryan busy while aryan and sachi were desperately wanted to meet each other...they clearly know that they are not in love but they cant underestimate the fact that love started blooming...between them...

Making excuses and escaping from there cousins they left from there room in search of each other...they headed towards each other's room...still lost in there own trance...and in there mid way both collided...accidently...and the cap that aryan was wearing fell down...

Aryan(without seeing)- sorry...(in hurry)

Sachi- tum??she bent down and pick up dat cup...

Aryan(on seeing sachi)- tum??
And automatically der lips formed in a beautiful curve...

Sachi- wo mai...

Aryan- tumhi se milne aa ra tha ...he completed the sentence...

Sachi smiles...and said so...

Aryan - so what???

Sachi- cap...she said handling the cap to him...

Aryan- waise ye cap bhut acchi h...kaha se li tumne???

Sachi- maine li nhi...actually...hum jab yha aare the to kisi ki cap gir gyi thi to mai us cap ko lautane unke pichhe bhagi but tab tak wo ja chuke the...ye unki cap h kash mai unhe lauta pati...she said feeling helplessly

Aryan- to ab lauta do...he said with a smile...

While sachi looked at him in confusion...and said how???

Aryan - ye cap meri hi h...bhaiya ne mujhe di thi...i thought i lost it...but ye tumhe mil gyi he said with a smile and cleared her confusion...

Sachi - kitni ajib baat h na aryan...

Aryan - ha sachi ye sanjog hi to h...jo hum 2 baar milte milte reh gye...but fir bhi teesri baar mil hi gye...

Sachi- teesri nhi chauthi baar...actually...jis din hum yha pahuche the...us din bhi mai tumare room tumse milne aai thi but tumse mil nhi paai...

Aryan- same pinch...he said loudly...and then both started laughing...and sachi was abiut to go...wen aryan call her...

Aryan - sachi...

Sachi- ha...

Aryan- ye cap tum pe jyada pretty lagti h...saying so he placed his cap on her head...she then smiles and says jaipur me milte h...saying so she went from there...and he too went from there...

After half an hour...

Both mittal's and sethiya's came out from the palace...while the servants carrying there bags...


Kuchh bate ho chuki kuchh bate abhee hai bakee
Bauchhar ek padee hai barasate abhee hai bakee
Khulake nachane ko bekal manaka mayura hai
Milan abhee aadha adhura hai
Milan abhi aadha adhura hai


Both family greeted each other...both aryan and sachi looked at each other...aryan said "we will meet soon" through his eyes to sachi while she replied him through blinking her eyes...aryan's bhaia and bhabhi teased aryan while tanu teased sachi

Mile honge radha krishna yahee kisee ban me
Prem madhuri unakee basee hai pawan me
Aur bhee pas aa gaye ham iss divya vatavaran me -


Both again looked towards the palace...and then look towards each other with heart warming smile...their eyes were conveying wat der heart want to say

Ek mann diya hai kitane sau gate abhee hai bakee
Bauchhar ek padee hai barasate abhee hai bakee
Hame milane me sabaka sahiyog pura hai
Milan abhee aadha adhura hai


they both looked towards there family who kept the root of there beautiful realation...who make them meet then both the family sat on there respective vehicles and headed towards their journey towards jaipur

Jharana suhana aisa prem git gaye
Aane wale kal ke mithe sapne dikhaye
Yeh ehsas pehelee bar dil ko gudgudaye -
Sab din abhee hai bakee sab rate abhee hai bakee
Bauchhar ek padee hai barasate abhee hai bakee
Ched diya purava ne tan kaa tan pura hai -
Milan abhee aadha adhura hai


Both on there respective vehicles looks outside the window...and think about each other...and felt something new...something verry special...that dey never ever felt before...thinking this they reached der respective homes carrying new feeling new happiness...Finally love blooms

I dont know how it turn out to be...agar accha na lage to frankly bol dena


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Posted: 8 years ago
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nimiii love u for this... yayy 1st os on our cutipie archi.. so beautifull..u amzingly express their thoughts & the song ohh god i am big fan of vivah u should write more story yaar u r too good..i still imagining their pretty smile they are so cute.. loved it...
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Originally posted by: ...pratu...

nimiii love u for this...yayy 1st os on our cutipie archi..so beautifull..u amzingly express their thoughts & the song ohh god i am big fan of vivahu should write more story yaar u r too good..i still imagining their pretty smile they are so cute..loved it...

thanx alot dear🤗
N ya will try to write more ...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow :)
Awesome :)
Loved it :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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its super se bhi upar 😊 keep writing OS.u r amazing..Hoping for a romantic OS now 😉
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Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

Wow :)

Awesome :)
Loved it :)

thanx sumana🤗
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Originally posted by: urvi25

its super se bhi upar😊keep writing OS.u r amazing..Hoping for a romantic OS now😉

aweee thanx alot urvi🤗
Will write romantic OS soon😳
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Originally posted by: vinii01

Awesome OS...loved it

thanx vini🤗
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thanx dear😊
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super awesome dear keep writing😳
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