MANAN FF : TWO BEAUTIES OF MY LIFE# CHAPTER13,14AND15UPDATED on 8 May! - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: gtilwani45

wow...Niceee concept. so Interesting ...Nandini is married may be..manik is in love wid her.waiting for next update. thanks for pm..


Thank you ..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Nice Prologue Eku...⭐️👏


Liked the plot... quite interesting... now wanna know the reason...😳
Thanks dear... God bless.. !!!



Thank you bhaiya :))
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: devilkhushi

Sweetheart it awesome

U can get in touch with on wattpadd
Loved the story


Have read it on watpadd par for u will read it again



Thank you ;))
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Manan_1D_Zayn

Thank you for sending pm.
The ff is interesting and something I would love to read.
Please continue soon and pm me when you update.



Thank you ...I will do for sure :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: avneetmalhotra

Wow awsme prolouge tooo much interesting manik be I thing kuch galat samajh liya



Thank you. .hmm let's see what is it ..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
CHAPTER1

London Concert Stadium
The huge stadium filled massive Crowd and the Crowd was going crazy and creaming
Fab5.. Fab5.. Fab5...
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Stage was dark and people could see four figures standing on stage one of them was a male figure in the middle sitting on a stool and his drums with two drum sticks in hand, other one was standing on the extreme left side of the stage with a guitar, a girl figure with piano was standing in between two boys but ahead and the second girl figure was standing on the right side of the stage.
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And finally bright colourful lights illuminated the stage showing the faces of those four people who excitedly waved the crowd and crowd became more crazy.
Some people from the Crowd realized that the hero of the evening was missing and they started shouting for HIS name soon the whole crowd joined and started cheering
Manik... Manik... Manik...
And lights again went off for few seconds and when they were on the HERO was standing on the stage with his back towards crowd and that was it for his fans they started shouting like maniac but soon the whole crowd stopped shouting and cheering as HE spoke through the microphone.
Manik : HELLO LONDON
Crowd : HELLOOo
Manik : ARE YOU READY ?
Crowd : Yeahhh
Manik : THEN HERE WE GO
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With that he started strumming his guitar and soon was joined by Cabir 's drum beat and Mukti Druv and Alya.
Manik closed his eyes and started singing in his unique Melodious Voice
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Apne karam ki kar adaayein
Yaara, Yaaraa... yaara!
Mujhko iraade de
Kasamein de, waade de
Meri duaaon ke ishaaron ko sahaare de
Dil ko thikaane de
Naye bahaane de
Khaabon ki baarishon ko
Mausam ke paimane de
Apne karam ki kar adaayein
Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein
Sun raha hai naa tu
Ro raha hun main
Sun raha hai naa tu
Kyun ro raha hun main (x2)
Manzilein ruswa hain
Khoya hai raasta
Aaye le jaaye
Itni si iltejaa
Ye meri zamanat hai
Tu meri amaanat hai haan...
Apne karam ki kar adayein
Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein
Sun raha hai naa tu
Ro raha hoon main
Sun raha hai naa tu
Kyun ro raha hun main
Waqt bhi thehara hai
Kaise kyun ye huaa
Kaash tu aise aaye
Jaise koi duaa
Tu rooh ki raahat hai
Tu meri ibaadat hai
Apne karam ki kar adaayein
Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein
Sun raha hai naa tu
Ro raha hoon main
Sun raha hai naa tu
Kyun ro raha hun main (x2)
Yaaraa...
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Audience was swaying with the music. Fab5 performed on few more songs.
Soon the concert was over and as usual Fab5 rocked the concert and was headline of all newspapers in London.
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Fab5 were sitting in a room of 7 star hotel while sipping bear and watching news channel which was showing the massive success of Fab5's concert.
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Cabir : Yes guys we rocked it again
Mukti : Yahoo I'm so happy today
Alya : Guys it calls for party
Druv : Definitely baby it calls a party, right buddy ?
Manik who was lost in his thoughts till now came back to his senses and was completely clueless what his friends are talking about.
Manik : huh? Sorry buddy I didn't hear what you said ?
Druv : We said that it's time for party.
Manik smiled : Yeah of course it's time for party.
Cabir who noticing Manik came in his teasing mode and winked at Mukti, who winked back.
Cabir : Manik I don't understand one thing dude ?
Manik raised his one eyebrow (getting suspicious about his intentions) : What ?
Cabir : Yehi ki Why do you get lost in lost in your thoughts ? I mean I can understand if Mukti gets lost in her thoughts then she must be thinking of HER Abhimanyu, Alya and Druv well though they both stick to each other all the time will think of each other...
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Mukti, Alya and Druv blushed with reference of their love but Mukti composed herself and cut Cabir in between and said,
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Mukti : just the way Cabir gets lost in thoughts of Navya
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Now it was Cabir 's turn to blush on which everyone chuckled, but Cabir frowned at Mukti to hide it and Mukti and continued
Cabir : so yeah so I can understand about four of us but what about you, tu kis me khayalo main kho katana hai .
Manik smiled a bit: Mom ke
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All became serious when Manik's Mom's topic came.
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But to lighten up the mood Alya said : Manik don't you think it's high time you are 25 now and still you are single , you should find someone for you.
Manik : guys I have you all na then I don't need anyone else in my life.
Mukti : Manik yaar no doubt you'll always have all of us in your life but everyone needs that special someone in his life. A person who will fill the emptiness in your life , who will be your strength, who will be reason for your happiness, Who will LOVE of your life, who will love you unconditionally.
All nodded in yes supporting Mukti. Manik smiled : we will see about it. I want to concentrate on my career first and then will think about.
Cabir : yaar Manik don't change the topic ok
Druv : yes buddy please be serious about it
Manik : guys calm down see
you all are lucky enough to get a person who love you unconditionally but in today's selfish world it is next to impossible to find a pure hearted girl who will love me and not my fame and money. If god has written her in my fate then she will definitely come in my life and I'll love her back unconditionally.
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All beamed at him and pounced on him for a group hug.
Soon all retired to their respective rooms after planning about party.
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Manik lied on his King sized bed while thinking about their talk and smiled a bit and slept. He after his mother's death was 1st time smiling rather than crying before sleeping.


Here is the part 1 !!!!
Edited by manan_eku - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
Wow awesome update...
Let's see how Manik finds Nandu...
Jst hope Manik will be able to accept her...
Luved it..
Thnx for pm..
Update soon..
Waiting for next..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
nice update
please continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
lovely update

so story is proceding pre sequel part..befor manik found nandini..

beautiful update

one suggestion, plz change the sub title of the story on each update..muzhe to pata hi nahi chalta ke story update hui hai if i wouldnt have read all the pages..

chootu part tha but its ok

waiting for long one when manik and nandini will meet..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
Nice update
Kinda short BT quite fine
I guess there is sm story with manik'mom
Waiting for nandini's entry
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