Twinj Dark SS - Immortal Love updated Chapter 5 - Pg 13 - Page 7

lavanya

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Wow...nice update...

Poor kunj...

Trying to hit and his frustration my god..u wrote it amazingly..

Felt bad for kunj..

Finally twinj kiss...how can he kiss her??? Twinkle can feel the kiss??? Soany questions I hav...but I enjoyed reading it..

Superb..plz continue soon...

Plz.pm.me.

Ly..

LavSriya

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Cobra

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Posted: 8 years ago

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K this is wow!!! I love it

Kunj's frustration was so beautifully written and he and Twinkle just have a connection. Idk how it will work out since he ain't human but I am really excited to know what u have planned for us.

Alisha is definitely a dicey character. She and Vishal are somehow involved in Kunj's murder. I have a feeling.
And the kiss!

Can ghosts kiss? Never mind I don't care as long as they kissed lol

Update soon baby 😆

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piu22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Loved it..

Again an amazing episode..

Waiting for the next part

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Eshita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

K i want to keep on reading this story.

Its amazing a ghost nd a human.

Kunj's frustration was beautifully shown when he was not able to hit his friend being a ghost nd then the breakdown.

Awesome k.

Its as though theres some sort of connection between twinj.

Continue soon s m greedy for updates.

K 🤗 for thinking of writing this story.

Thanks for pm.

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Aditi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Yes Yes

You did it.

My one wish is fulfilled...

Can you fulfil the other one pleaseee.😉

& Don't look at me like What...???

I gave the hint below.😳

[HINT:-K,I don't know why i found something my personal likings in your story.

And for sure this is not the different.

Since Casper days (When I saw first time the movie )I wish that if Casper became alive.😃]

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Hope09

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Posted: 8 years ago

#66

K u r driving me crazy by ur writings doll...the story is so so awesome...the description of feelings and self realisation part of kunj was awesome...I don't know why but for me this story of urs I love it exceptionally...this is ur best story for me...this attracts me so much...

If possible cont asap...

Love u ❤️

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Really nice story. Update soon😊

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neverlandspirit

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Posted: 8 years ago

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☺️ The kiss!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THE KISS!

THE STORY!

THE DEVELOPEMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Everything is just sooo beautiful!!!

Loving the pace and development of this story man. Its simply amazing!!

LOVELY!👏

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Blissfullife

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Posted: 8 years ago

#69

Awesome k.
The kiss.. ❤️ ...
Uggh..this Alisha... She hurted my kunj..
The way u described his anger,frustration, pain...amazing 👏

Loved it

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Jambread3

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: amlavs
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--unres--
Wow...nice update...
Poor kunj...
Trying to hit and his frustration my god..u wrote it amazingly..
Felt bad for kunj..
Finally twinj kiss...how can he kiss her??? Twinkle can feel the kiss??? Soany questions I hav...but I enjoyed reading it..
Superb..plz continue soon...
Plz.pm.me.
Ly..
LavSriya

Thank you so much Lavs,glad you liked it 🤗

Ly2😃

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