MaNan FF:Musicana Night..Begining of Change!!!(Chapter 11-page 31) - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

Fabulous update just love it well done and do update next part soonπŸ˜‰

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Originally posted by: thamannamanan01

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#54

Originally posted by: Archana_Vinod

Short chappy. But loved it! It was adorable to see Manik jumping up and down, desperate to get Nandini's attention. LOL. I swear I felt the blood rush to my face when Manik finally had her attention... and everyone else's too. But he managed the situation pretty smoothly. Curious to know what's up next. Do update soon.

Thanks..πŸ˜ƒ...even I love the scene in ky2 when manik was coughing...that's why I added that..😳
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Originally posted by: thamannamanan01

awsome n superb

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Originally posted by: shaan...

Amazing update...

Luved it...
Thnx 4 d pm...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...

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Originally posted by: priyasmiley

awesome update

waiting fr next update

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Hi my lovely readers...I have a notice..plz read it..

NOTICE..PLZ READ...!!!
As u all know maine apna "MY MERMAID DOLL" story pm kar dia hain coz of silent response...and to be honest I m in a mood for pm all the story...so if u don't want the stories to get private plz do comments...😊

Coz unlike M2D main chapter pm karne se pehele koi warning nahi dungi...

And agr aap short short comments karte ho to v chalega...but I need comments...plzzz...!!!

And plz try to comment on other's story too if u r a reader...coz already bohat saree acche writer forum chor diye hain coz of ur silent response...😭😭

About my mermaid doll to woh story public nahi hoga...

Now plz read this chapter and hit LIKES and do COMMENTS...πŸ˜ƒ

CHAPTER 2

FLASHBACK CONTINUES...

Nandini is chnging her cloth and blabbering...
Nandini: Uff...yeh manik v na...kitna betaab hain...har wakt kuch na kuch karte hi reheta hain...bol rahi hu kabse bata dungi par woh hain to...

She laughed remembering manik's attempt to know about her feelings...though she showed that she was getting irritated by his act but inside she was doing somersault...But she is our TYPICAL NANDU na...she won't show it...πŸ˜†

Nandini: Oh shit...time ho gaya...jaldi jti hu warna woh monstu idhar v tapak parega...par main usko blungi kya...

She bite her nails cutely in nerveousness...
Nandini: Oh no...main manik k samne kya bolungi..ayiappa...Naku sahayam(help me..)

Manik: Wahi bolna jo main sunna chahata hu...

Nandini jolts in her place listening manik...she wispher
Nandini: Manik...

Manik asked he huskly...
Manik: Tell me...what do u feel about me...
Nandini: Manik..woh..

She fambled in her word...then manik saw that her dress is undone and her back is very much visible to his sharp eyes...though he tried hard but automatically his hand went there...

Maine haara, main tera saara main
Meetha meetha tu, haan khaara khaara main
Tera saara main, saara main (x2)

He caresed her back lightly...shiver run down both of their spine...nandini is feeling vey weak on her knees...manik just stared at her back and doing his sweet tortures...somehow nandini controlling her moan...manik wraped his another arm aroung her belly...

Sindoori rang suhagan saccha
Saccha re sarmaya jo paaya hai woh

He bend down to kiss her back...the moment his rough lips touch her back her knees give out...she held manik's hand to hold on her dear life...a slight maon escaped from her lips
Nandini: Mannnikk...

Tu dil mein maahi aaya hai
Maine maahi paaya hai
Nazar laaye naa, koi nazar laaye naa

Hearing her moan manik came in reality...he lightly smile remembering his deeds..even nandini's trance almost broke down sensing manik's absence...manik bring his face near to her ear...
Manik: I m waiting nandini...to hear "UR HEART..."

Dil ne shagun manaaya hai
Ishq parauhna aaya hai
Nazar laaye na, koi nazar laaye na

"UR HEART..." this word manage to make nandini blus hard and smiled fully...
Manik:...Jayada wait nahi hoga mujhse nandu...9 pm in clz garden...

Nazar laaye jo tumko jal jaaye woh
Chaand le jug begana ho
Nazar laaye na..
Nazar laaye na..

Saying this he zipped up her dress and plant a soft kiss on her forehead...giving a smile to nandini he went away...

Maine haara, main tera saara main
Meetha meetha tu, khaara khaara main
Tera saara main, saara main (x2)

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Tell me guys...r u enjoying this or not...main abhi prologue scene nahi lana chahati...I wanna show more MaNan...then I will do something with the prolouge...hope u guys r okay with it... :D :D
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Posted: 8 years ago
#60
lovely part
continue soon
thanks for pm
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