Thanks...π³Originally posted by: rockstarlover
loved the prologue
waiting
cont soon
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Thanks...π³Originally posted by: rockstarlover
loved the prologue
waiting
cont soon
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Thanks rahul...π³..will update soon...πOriginally posted by: Mr_Rahul
Don ne ek aur BOMB plant kr diya
Aur es Bomb ka natije kuch dino me hi hi India forum me dikhne start ho jayneg
Btw
Nice Concept Swarna
Waiting for update
ALL THE BEST
Thanks...πOriginally posted by: riyaparo
nice start
continue soon
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Thanks...π³Originally posted by: shweta6767
Nice concept..
Continue.
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Aww...itna lamba comment...π...u always manage to post mortem my story...π...love u for that...π€Originally posted by: Archana_Vinod
Aha! So here we are. With a different version of season 1's most interesting conflict. The break up.
There were places in this phase which I felt was not satisfactory. For instance, Manik losing his cool and forcing Nandini into accepting his apology. Well. That's Manik. π He gets desperate at times. Enough to kidnap and blackmail. ππBut you know what I like about your story? That Manik will pay the proper price for his actions without getting too bull-headed. That for a moment, he's going to keep aside his arrogance and ego whatever. At least, that's what I feel from the prologue. I really feel that he deserves more punches from Nandini than he actually got in the show. π What say?But whatever you've got up your sleeve, I'm game. The ending itself is promising. That Manik will need to try harder to win her back. πAll in all, this looks very interesting. I'd love to see how they finally bury the hatchet and gel with each other once again. Do continue soon and please do PM me π
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π³Originally posted by: Angelic_Doll
Interesting prologue
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Thanks for ur wish...π³Originally posted by: mehak_ahuja
Amazing topic post musician.. Nice decision ...
Will definable love to read this ToryThanxx for startingN all the best for the new journey:)
Thanks...π³Originally posted by: Pari_mananholic
Interesting one...
Looking forward to it...
Update soon..
Thnx for pm...
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