MaNan FF:Musicana Night..Begining of Change!!!(Chapter 11-page 31) - Page 20

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Nandini and Manik are love

yes 😳

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Awesome story.

Continue soon.
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RECAP:
Reporters interview with fab5 n NH3. Manik msged her to come behind the music wings but Nandini declined.

CHAPTER 9
" Sadka kiyaa..Uff...damn...not like this " Harshad cried in frustation for not able to pull on the line .
Nandini: Harshad relax. U can do it.Try again.
Harshad: How can u tell me to relax Nandini? Musicana srif one day...no actually 18hrs k baad hai and we r doing this!
Nandini: Then let's do one thing. Decrease the pitch...so that u can easily sing the line in ur comfort.
Harshad: I think u r right. Let's do it guys. We have to win Musicana.

" Yes...u guys can win anything but Musicana " Manik came towards the gang buttoning his jacket. That signature smirk never left his lips. Nandini jumped over her place listening Manik's voice. She didn't thought that luraring Manik can b this much dangerous. Now what she gonna tell them to her fellow. She didn't want to revel their relationship yet, not before her confession.

Harshad: Can't belive...U came here to spy on us. Now I got ur source of confedence.
Manik: Dekh harshad, mai teri tarha yeh baaccho jaise game nahi khelta and u know me very well. Manik Malhotra plays it B-I-G.
Harshad: Accha...then what are u doing here?
Manik: U don't know yet. Mujhe to laga u guys will be aware of my appearence but ; Nandu tumne bataya nahi?

Nandini became perplexed listening Manik. She made a face to Manik for doing this with her .
Harshad: Nandini called u?
Manik: Yes.
Nandini: Woh mai nahi...matlab mai woh..h..
Navya: Kya mai mai kar rahi ho Nandini? Tumne yeh rakshas ko yaha kyu bulaya? Tum nahi jante tumne kitne baari apshagun kar dia...
ManShad: Kya ?!?!
Nandini: Navya shut up. Kuch v maat bolo. Aur mai usse apne kisi personal kam k liye bulaya tha...
Harshad: Tumne Manik ko bulaya...woh v humare jam room me...and for what? Ur personal purposes !!
Nandini: Haa
Harshad: Can u tell us ur personal reason **fingers up**
Manik: Ha Nandu bolo

Manik is having time of his life sensing Nandini's discomfort. No matter what happen's between them Manik can never leave a chance to play with " His dear Nandini". He is sure by now Nandini is planning to murder him in hundreds different way in her mind but alas ! This moment it's Manik's turn to have fun.

Nandini: Guitter sikhne..
Harshad: Guitter sikhne ? Woh v Manik se ? R u trying to say Manik is better than me...remember Nandini this guy is the one who made your life a living hell and you r choosing him over NH3 ?

Manik palmed his face and in mind slapped himself hard for forgetting the fact that Nandini ko jhut bolna nahi ata. Now they will be caught anytime sonner. By now seeing their(NH3) faces anyone can tell they became suspicious. Before things get out of the hand Manik decide to step in and handle the situaton

Manik: Proffesor Nandu..agr apni muh khuli hai to pura baat bolo na...tell them how chachi forced u to be my student.
Nandini: Oh ha...actually mai na chachi k sath bazar ja rahi thi to mujhe waha Manik mile aur chachi...
Harshad: Manik bazar mai mile ?
Manik: Nahi...mera car kharap ho gaya tha and I was waiting. Tabhi chachi ne mujhe dekha aur unke ghar pe bulaya aur waha kuch baat huya. Aur she insisted me to teach her guitter lesson and I couldn't say no to her. And before u ask me why she(Nandini) didn't ask you to teaching coz her chachi want me to teach her in her home...so we r discussing about timimg.
Harshad: But how she came really fond of you?
Manik: Kitne sawal puchte ho tum harshad? Uff...listen mai rishab ko ek bar help kara tha...remember. And from then she likes me and these all happened. So My highness,Harshad can I go now for jammimg?
Harshad gave him a look and Manik went away. Here Nandini took a deep breath to calm herself. But harshad couldn't able to buy Manik's explanation. He looked at Nandini and think over it.

HARSHAD'S POV:
Manik ne koi loopholes nahi choora but...there is surely some catch in these..but what? What is about Manik that I don't know. Jo v ho I need to find it before musicana to break FAB5.
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Posted: 7 years ago
It was awesome!Loved it very much.Manik ne pareshaan kar diya bichaari nandu ko.Update soon
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Originally posted by: AKHIAWAL

It was awesome!Loved it very much.Manik ne pareshaan kar diya bichaari nandu ko.Update soon

TYSM Sweetie 😳
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In a day 😃
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Yes I m back..plz plz do long comments 😃
Chapter is very long 😳

RECAP:
Manik landed up in NH3's jam room. Harshad became suspicious.

CHAPTER 10

Manik:
Dil ye mera bas mein nahi
Pehla kabhi aisa hota tha nahi(hmm..)
Dil ye mera bas mein nahi
Pehla kabhi aisa hota tha nahi
Tu hi bata.. iss dil ka main..
Ab kya karoon...

Manik is singing remembering his moment with NH3. He is smiling remembering nandini's struggle to cover up his sudden appearance. He knows that he was behaving like a bad ass back then but what to do..he is monster Manik and it's really rare to shut Nandini's smartness with his stupid and impulsive act.


hmm.. Kehne pe chalta nahi
Kuch dinon se meri bhi sunta nahi
Tu hi bata iss dil ka main
Ooh uff main kya karoon
Main kya karoon.. Main kya karoon..
Main kya karoon.. Main kya karoon...

He is remembering his old days with Nandini where she kept disobeying his order and do her willing. No matter how much he tried, Nandini could not come under any kind off pressure. Not only in past but also in these present days she always do her "Manmani"



Karta.. aawaargi
Iss pe toh dhun chadhi, hai pyar ki
Naa jaane, gum hai kahaan?
Baaton mein hai pada, bekaar ki

His mind is now full of Nandini's memory. He went to that moment when Nandini became fully drunk and she is doing anything to annoy the shit out of him. Be it running here and there in the whole college in mid-night or throwing the lime water. He was trying to answer her stupid yet so meaningful qus ; "Har bari har jaga...har wakt...tum mere peeche kyu aate ho? " He became so angry with her. Where Nandini will answer his question, but instead of doing it, Nandini asked counter-question.



Ulti ye baat hai
Aise haalaat hai
Ghalati kare ye, main bharu!
Uff dil ka kya karoon
Main kya karoon
Main kya karoon... (keeps repeating)

That night Nandini was doing every stupid mistakes and bechara manik had to cover up her silly mistakes be it hiding from raghav sir or telling chachil a set of lies.


Dil pe mera, kaabu nahi
Fitrat kabhi iss ki aisi thi nahi
Tu hi bata.. iss dil ka main ab kya karoon

Yes, those lines are so true for him...his mind couldn't any longer control his heart. He never had any intention of falling in love with anyone...Nandini was out of the question. But what happened to him, he is hopelessly in love with a tiny little girl named Nandini.


hmm.. Kehne pe, chalta nahi
Kuch dinon se, meri bhi sunta nahi
Tu hi bata iss dil ka main ooh uff main kya karoon

And now he has accepted his defeat happily and if defeats taste like this then Manik Malhotra definitely wants to defeat every time...



Main kya karoon...main kya karoon...main kya karoon
Iss dil ka main ooh uff main kya karoon
Uff aab mai kya karoon...main kya karoon...main kya karoon !!!


Unaware of his surroundings manik is singing his heart out. On the other side, FAB5 came in jam room from the canteen and saw manik singing. Seeing Manik's scenery smile none of them broke the moment and enjoying the show.
Mukti: Alya jara baata to kya kia kal raat aisa k Manik bilkul romeo baan gaya !! Just look at him..he looks so calm.
Dhruv: Ha mukti..buddy ko bohat dino baad aise dekha maine. Thanks alya for this.

They again start listening to him(M). Alya and cabir were silent all the time. Both r thinking those possibilities that made Manik like this. They both had a doubt on Nandini.

ALYA's POV:
I would be happy Manik if I was the reason for ur happiness. But mai janti hu this reason is no other than but that commoner Nandini. Ek bar yeh musicana ho jaye...Nandini I will see you !

CABIR's POV:
Seriously...Nandini..kya tum ho sakti ho? But Manik to tumse nafrat karta hai...agr yeh wajah tum aur alya mai se koyi nahi ho fir kon hai jisko yaad karke Manik aisa khush hai...
Par jo koyi v ho tumhe cabir ka ek thanks to baanta hai boss.


SCENE CHANGE: NH3 Jam room

Harshad: So now we should pack up guys...bohat practice ho gaye aaj. Now let's give some rest to our voice.
Navya: Ha harshad ji..hum waisa hi karenge jaisa aap chahenge ***puppy eyes***
Harshad: ***shakes his head*** Aur Nandini aaj Manik tumse milne ayega na to be careful.
Nandini: Manik!! Kyu ayega??
Harshad: Itni jaldi vul gaye?? Guitter practice remember? So plz dhyan rakhna Manik koi garbar na kare tumhare sath...aur uska diya koi cheej maat peena..they might be harmful for ur voice
Nandini: Ohh ha..Aaj to Manik aane wala hai...tum chinta maat karo. Manik mujhe kuch nahi hone dega
Harshad: Tum kuch jyada Manik ko defend nahi kar rahi ho aaj kal Nandini??
Nandini: Nahi woh..mai...
Navya: Kya aap dono Manik Manik laga rakhe ho...chalo ghar chale aur aram karte hai...kal bohat badha din hai humare liye
HarDini: Ha chalo.


SCENE CHANGE: FAB5 Jam room
"Wow Manik wow!! It's fabulous. Itna spirit ke saat gana...kamal kar dia tune" Mukti praised him with enthuasticly. Manik became starlted listening mukti's voice.
Manik: Are mukti tu? Kab ayi
Mukti: ***winking***Wahi jab tu alya ko yaad kar ke gana ga raha tha
Manik: Ohh..ha thanks
Dhruv: Buddy you r too God. Agr aisa hi chalta raha na to we gonna win musicana for sure.
Cabir: Exactly...Musicana is always about FAB5. Aur iss bar v hum hi jitenge.
Manik: Yes Cabir is right. Musicana iss bar v humari raat banayega. So guys till then a group hug for now
Dhruv: Sure!!
FAB5: All for one, one for all.

Manik's POV:
Mujhe sab ko Nandini k baare mai batana hoga jald hi..mai nahi chahata ki kisi aur se pata chale. Musicana Night will be the night.
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it was superb.loved it.i'm enjoying this majnu manik.update soon and thank you for the pm
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I hope Cabir stands by them in the hour of need
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CHAPTER 11

Recap:
Manik sang "Main Kya karun" He decided to tell about them(MaNan) to Fab5 after musicana.
Harshad warned Nandini about Manik.

Canteen:

Cabir: Accha Manik baata to aaj kal kya chal raha hai?

Manik is busy texting Nandini. Suddenly cabir's question took him surprised.
Manik: Umm...aah...kuch nahi..

Cabir: Manik bhul maat mai cabir hu..

Manik: Accha..mujhe nahi pata tha!! Thanks for the info dude.

Cabir: Dekh Manik mujhe itna to pata hai ki tere sath kuch to huya hai aisa jo tu hum ko bata nahi raha hai...but jo v ho ek baat humesha yaad rakhna buddy, koyi aur tere sath ho ya na ho yeh cabir tere sath humesha rahega. And also if you want to share anything with me then I will be there for you.

Manik becomes really happy listening cabir. He knew only his dear cabira can understand his current situation and he is great full and as well as sad for keeping secret from him.
Manik: Hey buddy, thanks. You are right. Par plz understand main abhi jo situation mai hu pehele mujhe sort out karne de...ek bar sab thik ho jaye ga na to mai khud aake tum sab ko batayunga. All you have to do is just trust me and give me some time.

Cabir: Always Manik...Have your time.
Manik hugged cabir and they left for their own way.

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