TWINJ 2s:"Drenched & Dried" - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
Res
--unres--
Omg...shavs..
Its beautiful..
Uv deserved the hard slap..
Kunj poor man..
Twinj is soul..
Am actually very much curious to know Wats next..
Shavs u wrote it very well..
Only kisses and hugs for u not tomatoes or nothing..
Ly..
Spread love.,.
LavSriya..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
pasta...i'm surprised!!...pinch me...
i love uuu...
will read it soonish..and i mean 24th september...๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: adi_FMT_ct

R๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Unres
Shav...
what is this???๐Ÿ˜ฒ
I guess it's your 2nd writing.
This is soo well matured writing.

Love it's each part though I most admire the drenched and dried diary papers.
Simply amazing.๐Ÿ‘

Also you caught the original story flavour
This is beautiful.
Waiting for next part.
& Pasta
Thanks you dedicated this story to our crazy khandan.
And Special thanks to Saks.
๐Ÿค—

Thanks a lot Aditi di...
I m glad that u liked the story...
Actually the paper pieces were the main thing & as I wasn't getting how to post then so I tried incooprating them in a story...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dinky28

It was superb dear unbelivable its ur first story i loved it thoroughly u know i always wanted someone to write something like this after leap wala story n twinkle forgiving kunj n going back ti him but never got one i really really loved ur story i just left the hope that someone will come up wid this type of story but u r a star man love u a loads for this
Do update soon ha 2nd part
ps- thanku queen for encouraging ao well that had resulted in a treat for me

Thank you so much for ur sweet words...dinky...๐Ÿ˜ณ
Love u too...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: ...Anabella...

it was just a beautiful story . I always wanted a story after leap especially this jassi ka khulsa I was writing one but then I dropped the idea, it is better actually the bestest thing that could have happened in the show, I just wish it could have happened, par cv's ke pas dimag kahan. Her letter, poem whatever it was made my eyes well up, it was just so touchy, so beautiful, I'm in love with ur writing plz do write more, lo hogi meri bakwass, and thanks for the pm

I a glad...that u liked my writing..
Your words r not at all bakwaas...
They r really very encouraging & sweet...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: neverlandspirit

Wow! This is exceptionally good. Great Infact

No one would believe that this is your first time writing a story
Wonderfully written and tragically beautiful. Loved the poems too

Great work buddy๐Ÿ‘

Thanks a lot for ur nice words my Magician Writer...
It means a lot...๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: tikit

Pasta yay hamari pasta ๐Ÿ˜ณ badi ho gayi.

Pasta this was so beautiful just like u nd ur beautiful heart.
Thank u for for dedicating this to entire crazy t khandaan.
Love u pasta baby ๐Ÿ˜‰
Keep writing more stories baby of the house pasta.
Thanks for pm.
Continue soon.

ESHU...my love..
Your words literally made me blush...

Love you too...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Jambread3

Snuggles๐Ÿค—
I'm so glad that you decided to write something
This was amazinggg!
Everything made so much sense and I loved the concept...
Now I really wanna know whats twinkle's plan๐Ÿ˜†
I think now I should start calling you 'my enchantress' ๐Ÿ˜‰
Continue soon...

Kudos to Queenie!!!!

๐Ÿ˜ณThanks for ur sweet words...
U'll get to know about twinkles plan soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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When r u updating part two eager to know whats her plan
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreya098

Wow shavs ...
It was โค๏ธ
...those lines on the papers..
Were beautiful...
I just loooved them...

Why were u hiding ur talent from soo long...u write beautifully..
๐Ÿ˜ณI m flattered...
I am waiting to know about her plan... I know its gonna be something dhamakedaar

Continue soon ๐Ÿ˜Š

Thanks for ur sweet words...
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