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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi friends. I'm a newbie on here. I came across Yeh Vaada Raha by chance, and I was very impressed with Ankush and Sonals' acting/chemistry that they have on screen. I hope it carries on for a while. It's a shame that I can't see all the full episodes cuz I'm in the UK.
Anyway I have a written a poem about Kartiks' feelings about Survi when he found out who she was. Hope you enjoy it.

So you have come back
Back to the old life
You left behind.
Behind after 8 long years-
Trying to hide behind
Your so called naivety.
And innocence that
You left behind.
Don't think I've forgotten
What you did to me
Those wounds that
Marked every part of me.
Still hurt everytime
When I think of
How you betrayed me.
Your selfish, careless actions.
Because of your mistakes
You have made me a hardened bitter man...

Now I see it as fate that
You have come back to me.
To me to be punished-
My so called friend-
But your not nothing to me!
Yes my revenge
Will be the end of you.
I won't let you live-
But I won't let you die!
All this because of you
And I keep asking myself why?

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey welcome to d forum😊.. nice lines.. πŸ‘truly depict kartik's feeling back then .. when he thought survi was a traitor...
Keep posting πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey welcome...
Great lines... πŸ˜ƒ
YVR is an awesome show.. Don't miss it...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Welcome here dear... wow awesome lines... yeah yvr is matchless show...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks guys for ur comments. Very much appreciated. I will post something else soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi πŸ˜ƒ Welcome to the forum
Am Gopa
Those are some really beautiful lines.Loved it 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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AπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Very beautiful expression of Karthik, nicley protrayed Jagz do more.
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