Originally posted by: maaneet_michi
u know what.. it reminds me of ks serial
Hi dear,
Yeah, its some what same theme with SwaSan. I hope you wont mind and you like it.
Love,
Shreetha..
Originally posted by: maaneet_michi
u know what.. it reminds me of ks serial
Whoa! That was something!
My curiosity level is higher now!After the Prologue, I was waiting for you to update!And you did! Chapter 1 was really interesting!I knew Swara will get married to Sanskaar instead of Priya! Bt Ragini had something to do with it? I don't know Bt I feel so! Maybe Priya was clever & straight forward so Ragini wanted to Sanskaar to marry innocent & good hearted Swara bcoz it will be easy to deceive Swara? Maybe!Bt whatever it is or how it happened, Swara & Sanskaar are married now!You portrayed Sanskaar's pain, rage, humiliation too well and Swara's pain & dilemma as well.Sujata seems very nice in this story Bt Ragini is wicked!Now im praying Sujata must come back soon! Bcoz Swara & Uttara have to face some humiliation I guess from Ragini & Sanskaar is angry with Swara & right now nurturing hatred for her!It will be interesting to read how this cold hearted & fire ball Mr. Sanskaar Maheshwari will fall for his wife whom he hate right now!Amazing update Shreetha :)I'm so looking forward to read further!So plz update soon!Bt plz update the final chapter of Remember Me first plz!Loads of love & hugs <3
Originally posted by: krishuuu
Shreetha dear...
Chapter 1 was shocking and excellently woven...marvellous...Priya left sansku on wedding day.resulting in embaresment n humiliation for him to face...n ragini was acting like gasoline on fire...but one good thing she did ..she forced swara to marry sansku..to avoid her family humiliation...Felt bad for sansku he was soo hurt n dejected...he gave chance to priya n she hurted him..n now sansku is hurting himself n swara so much...swara is so confused..sad...scared..embaressed with what consequences she is facing due to priya ..how hurt sansku isdue to her sister...though both of them are married..just for society n family..only one person is genuinly happy with thismarriage n that sujata...glad..But worried for swasan..waiting for story to progress..update soon..Talia
Originally posted by: sneharay
Superb concept..
I really love your writing
Update soon
Originally posted by: humblepinky
Nice start...waiting for more...
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