My Rashmi Sharma version of TEI...3rd and final part..

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hyy guys m back😎

I was not in a mood to continue it but some of you asked me so i did...and ragini is not here to soo thays why i was like how will i write alone..but i tried ..

Okk so here we go with the third and the last part of my rashmi sharma version Of TEI..cuz ragini is not here i'm gonna write it all alone so will be not that good... hope you will like baki Chappals are welcome... lol😆


Note

Only for fun nothing personal against any actor,character or any person included in this story..No bashing and personal attacks..


Recape

soo kunj ban chuka hai werewolf... only way to make him normal is to show him sunny live dance and yo yo's live concert

Uv is a ichadhari bakra and to make him normal he need to spend a night with werewolf... soo anita kidnaped kunj...


Ab aggy..

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Present Scene

Both sisters twinkle and mahi were planning to make kunj normal ... so both were thinking how to ask mata ji for sunny dance and yo yo concert


Mahi:di hum mama ko kyse bolaain gi sunny k dance aur yo yo k concert k lye??


Twinkle:MAHIII

tum apny sanskar bilkul bhool chuki ho..mama kya hota hy ??? MATA JI bola aur SUNNY JI ko tum sunny Aur YO YO JI ki khali yo yo kyse bol sakti ho tum??


Mahi:maaf kar dijiye di... ainda se aisa nahi hoga


Twinkle:Mahi tumne ek ghor pap kar diya hai es ki shama tumhain mushkil se mily gi...(sorry for all the wrong hindi lmao)


Mahi:di mein Bhagwan ji se prathna karon gi bas abhi humein kunj jiju ko theek karny k bary sochna hai...


twinkle:han mahi tum sahi keh rahi ho par hum mata ji ko yo yo aur sunny ji k liye manaain gy kyse?? Mata ji tou humain ijazat nahi dain gi...


Mahi:di ik bar bat karty hain kunj jiju ka mamla hai shayad mata ji man jain...


Twinkle:theek kaha tumny chalo baat karty hain..


All the family members of Sarna khandaan were present in the hall


Usha:han tou bolo twinkle vahu kya kehna tha tumko humse???


Twinkle:woo mata ji and twinkle will tell her about kunj becoming a werewolf and the solution to make him normal...


SALAP...

DHAM DHAM DHAM...


TWINKLE ON FLOOR


usha:vahu tumhari himat kaise hui ye sab bolne ki.. humare parivar k sankar bhool gayi tum sub... ?? Boloo


Twinkle:mata ji main janti hon apne sanskaro k bary main.. par yahan kunj ji ki zindagi  ka sawal hai main kya karoon...aur waise bhi apny bhi tou jawani mein kumar sanu ji k songs py thumka lagaye hongy or.. tou ab konsi sanskaro wali moot parh gayi hai apko..


Usha:vahu ye mat bolo tum kisy baat kar rahi ho.. es gustakhi ke liye main tumhain ghar sy bhi nikal sakti honn.. or rahi bat kunj k tou wyse v RS serials main male lead ki koi khaas zaroorat hoti nahi hai sara kam tou hum karte hain wo tou bas hamare sath ghumne k liye hote hain somarta hy tou mar jaye.. or ye hai mera Aakhri faisla...


DHOM TAANA NA DHOM TANA NA


Twinkle:mata ji apne bhi tou pariwar ke liye dance kiya tha mahi k kehny par ab main bhi apne kunj ji ko bachane ke liye kuch bhi karon gi..


Usha:badtameez ladki nikal jao mere ghar sy aur wapas mat aana yahn...

DHOM TAANA DHOM TAANA DHAM DHAM DHAM...


twinkle left the house with mahi to save kunj.. but will get to know that kunj has been kidnaped...


DHAM DHAM DHAM


VO:ab kyse dhondy gi twinkle kunj ji ko?? Kya twinkle k pohanchne tak kunj apni izzat ki raksha kar payega... Dham


On other Side


Patal lok ki devi anita sitting on a jharu will bring kunj to a Kaali goofa..cuz Patal ka Aaka RT told her that deed should be done in andhera..lmao


UV already will be there ... so anita will tie kunj with a khamba and ask UV to wait for Shubh muhurat and then  you can do whatever you want to do man...*Shubh muhurat is 4 am par abhi it's 3:30 am*  kunj will be all shouting twinkle bachao meri izzat lootne se bachao


On the other side twinkle and mahi will have been finding kunj and will go to alok nath for some ashirwad.. and to know about where beats of kunj... alok will tell them that your pati izzat in danger.. and he will tell her that anita the patal lok ki devi has kidnaped him to make her ichadhari bakra beta normal by making him spend a night with kunj..


Twinkle:guru ji ab hum kya karain bataiye hum kunj ji ki izzat ko kyse bachaye koi hal bataye??!


Guru alok:ladki tumhare paas sirf aadha ghanta hai... bacha ly apne pati ko aur upaye ye hy k jis Dariya ke paas yo yo ka song shoot howa tha na aj blue hy pani pani and guru will start dancing... lol


Twinkle:guru nachna bad main abhi hal bata iss problem ka ..


Guru :han han wo sory main zara bhawnaon main beh gya tha hihihi tou hal ye hy k osi dariya ke BLUE PANI  ly k ja wahan jahan anita ny tere pati ko qaid kiya hai wo jal tou anita or UV py dalna wo dono bhasam ho jaayenge... ab jaldi ja and alok will give them the address of that kali goofa to twinkle...


Mahi and twinkle will get the water of that river or Sea lol and will go to kaali goofa time is 3:50 already...

DHOM TAANA DHOM TAANA DHOM TANA


odhar uv is al ready  to make kunj his lmao...


Kunj:uv plzz chorh de mujhy tujhy kya mily ga meri izzat loot kar chod de plzzz..


Uv:kyse chod doon kunj ye tou meri bachpan ki khwahish thi tere sath kuch karne ki but ab bhagwaan ki karni meri bimari ka ilaaj tu hai tou tujhe kyse chor sakta honn... and he will swipe his nose 8 mints to go my boy get ready for some funnn... i promise twinkle sy better hon ..lmao


DHAM DHAM DHAM


VO:kya twinkle waqt par pahunch paye gi?? Yaa uv hoga apni es sazish mein kamyab...???


It was last mint uv was about do the deed but twinkle and mahi will reach there on time anita tried to stop them from getting into goofa but twinkle will throw that water on her and she will burn... ahhh


Ab andar..


Kunj:mujhe maaf kardo twinkle main apni izzat nahi bacha paya.. es janam tera sathiya tera sath nahi nibha saka.. but agle janam Sarna Sasural Twinkle ka hi hoga kyuki yeh silsila hai pyaar ka..


Uv was about to open the shirt of kunj.. but..


UV RUK JAA..


Uv:twinkle tu yahan kya kar rahi hy ???


Twinkle:door hat ja mere kunj say uv bol rahi hon ..


Uv:hahaha tu apny kunj ko mujhse nahi bacha sakti... kya kar legi tu mera ..


twinkle:dekh main tera kya karti hon and she will throw the water on him...UV will start burning kunj will run from there collecting his bachi kuchi izzat ..

But before vanishing uv will say that twinkle es janam tou tumhe bacha liya kunj ko par agle janam main kunj sirf mera hoga *BHAGWAN AGLE JANAM MOHE BAKRA HI KIJO*🤣


DHAMMM UV KHATM..


twinkle:kunj ji aap theek hain na ??


Kunj:han twinkle main theek hun and thanks for saving my izzat..


Twinkle:koi nahi koi nahi i know not like other shows RS serials mein asli heroes tou females hoti hain tum log tou bas awain hi hote ho jhak marny k liye soo apsy tou kuch hona nahi tha tou main apki izzat na bachati tou kon bachta...??


Kunj:acha acha ab ziada odoo mat hum na hon na serials mein tou tum log ko v koi TWINKLE BAHU nah bola sakay kabhi soo thori izzat diya karo...


Twinkle:acha acha ab sab sahi ho gya aap ki izzat bach gayi... uv aur anita mar gayee bas ab apko normal karna hy from a werewolf so chalo ab last kam nibtana hai chaliye...


all of them will go back to sarna house till then usha will realize her mistake cuz RS makes her understand that  agar kunj mar gya tou twinkle k liye ek new pati dhondna pary ga like gopi vahu so it's not cool... so usha decided ke koi nahi ek nya hero dhondy say behtar hy let's bachow kunj(anadar andar sy usha bhi tang thi from all the sankars guys  come on she too want some funn lol) soo sunny ji k dance or yo yo ji k concert ki ijazat day day gi...

Kunj will be back to normal ...


After 10 years

ab sarna house k darwaze khol chuky hain yo yo aur badshah k songs k liye... pankaj udhas ji k songs ab wahan koi nahi sunta.. Usha k thumke on baby ko bass pasand hy... And even mono does the rap of badshah ... twinj are living happily with their 2 kids.. mahi is married also happily...


BUT...



MAAA MAAA MAAA

BG:agly janam mohe bakra hi kijo 🤣

Warning:

No one can live a happy life for too long in a RS show..!!!!!😲


The End


🤣🤣🤣


SORRY

  • Guys i'm not a hindi speaker so i don't know much hindi but for fun i added add some sudh hindi words jo k i don't know how to pronunciation soo sorry for all the wrong hindi people




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Posted: 7 years ago
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zaw...what should i say????🤣🤣🤣
ye isse zyada perfect nahi hosakti...🤣
i really imagined guruji dancing on blue hai pani..
...uv ki bachpan ki kwahish pura nahi hua..
glad kunj ki izzat bach gayi.😆
that gopi vahi part cracked me up..
zaw...typo...change it to baadsha's rap...🤣
puri meaning change hogayi...🤣

and and..pics added effect...so the ichadari bakra is back..😆
loved it...

P.S...bg music is awesome..😳😆
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Originally posted by: crazyfan9_sanju

zaw...what should i say????🤣🤣🤣

ye isse zyada perfect nahi hosakti...🤣
i really imagined guruji dancing on blue hai pani..
...uv ki bachpan ki kwahish pura nahi hua..
glad kunj ki izzat bach gayi.😆
that gopi vahi part cracked me up..
zaw...typo...change it to baadsha's rap...🤣
puri meaning change hogayi...🤣

and and..pics addedeffect...so the ichadari bakra is back..😆
loved it...

P.S...bg music is awesome..😳😆


lmao sanju glas you enjoyed ..hihi 😆
LOL guru wala idea was a last time addition..
OHHH GOD TGANK YOU SOO MUCH FOR TELLING ME I CHANGED IT ...OHH GOD🤣
YOOO tge ichadhari bakra is back..lol meri hindi bohoot galt tou nhi thi na ..?? hihi
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Originally posted by: ZawraMalik


lmao sanju glas you enjoyed ..hihi 😆
LOL guru wala idea was a last time addition..
OHHH GOD TGANK YOU SOO MUCH FOR TELLING ME I CHANGED IT ...OHH GOD🤣
YOOO tge ichadhari bakra is back..lol meri hindi bohoot galt tou nhi thi na ..?? hihi

kaise nahi batati...balatkar hojata...poor baadshaa..😆
whom are r u asking zaw???🤣
i'm very bad with hindi...grammar and genders...i always go wrong with it...
bu...agar kuch hongey toh bhi comedy mein cover hojayenge..fhiker not...😳😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Too Good Zawra 🤣 just loved it 👏 Kunj and uski izzat 🤣


"only way to make him normal is to show him sunny live dance and yo yo's live concert " 🤣 🤣


right wolf k aatma bhi ye sab nahi jhel payega 🤣


"Patal lok ki devi anita sitting on a jharu will bring kunj to a Kaali goofa..cuz Patal ka Aaka RT told her that deed should be done in andhera..lmao " 🤣 🤣


I am imagining anitha sitting on jhaadu LOL 🤣


"But before vanishing uv will say that twinkle es janam tou tumhe bacha liya kunj ko par agle janam main kunj sirf mera hoga *BHAGWAN AGLE JANAM MOHE BAKRA HI KIJO*🤣"


and he comes back with maa maa romantic music OMG 🤣


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Zawra it was bang on🤣🤣
Kunj ki izzat last minute pay bachgayi😆😆
But ichadari Bakra is back 😉
My god..pics are perfect 😆😆
Luved it..🤗
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Zaw This is called Absolutely Crazyness.
Kunj became wolf,Yuvi want to become Bakra.
And what are you say,Kunj ki ijjat lootne ka dar wo bhi Yuvi ke haton me.🤣
Damn and Special mention to Kunj's dialogue to Twinkle...Saat Janam Ka.😆
Oh!God I am going freaking out completely.😆
Kudos to U,Zaw.👏
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Originally posted by: Sampriti.

Too Good Zawra🤣just loved it👏Kunj and uski izzat🤣


"only way to make him normal is to show him sunny live dance and yo yo's live concert "🤣🤣


<font color="#ff0000">right wolf k aatma bhi ye sab nahi jhel payega</font><font color="#333333">🤣</font>


</p>

"Patal lok ki devi anita sitting on a jharu will bring kunj to a Kaali goofa..cuz Patal ka Aaka RT told her that deed should be done in andhera..lmao "🤣🤣


<font color="#ff0000">I am imagining anitha sitting on jhaadu LOL</font><font color="#333333">🤣</font>


<p>"But before vanishing uv will say that twinkle es janam tou tumhe bacha liya kunj ko par agle janam main kunj sirf mera hoga *BHAGWAN AGLE JANAM MOHE BAKRA HI KIJO*🤣"


<font color="#ff0000">and he comes back with maa maa romantic music OMG🤣</font>


lmao..pubi glad ypu enjoyed it...finally twinkle saced kunj on last mint but bechara uv or humary kuvi dreams tou dhary k dhary reh gye 🤣 koi nhi koi nhi uv is back 😆
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Originally posted by: crazyfan9_sanju


kaise nahi batati...balatkar hojata...poor baadshaa..😆
whom are r u asking zaw???🤣
i'm very bad with hindi...grammar and genders...i always go wrong with it...
bu...agar kuch hongey toh bhi comedy mein cover hojayenge..fhiker not...😳😳


lol balatkar matlab rap** na ?? 🤣
chal koi nhi sanju i guess m rocked with hindi 😎
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Originally posted by: amlavs

Zawra it was bang on🤣🤣

Kunj ki izzat last minute pay bachgayi😆😆
But ichadari Bakra is back😉
My god..pics are perfect😆😆
Luved it..🤗


thanks di glad you liked..
lol yaa kunj ki izzat bal bal bachi but uv is back to get his kunj..hihi..
di hw is my lil princess??