ARIYA SS- PYAR DOSTI... Epilogue updated 7/07

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PROLOGUE


Story about two childhood friends who loved each other a lot... Married and separated because of a friend whose sister loved the guy...Edited by balan04 - 7 years ago

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Character sketch

ACP ARJUN SURYAKANT RAWTE

ACP SAMEER SINGH RATHOD

ACP RIYA MUKHERJEE

SAKSHI SINGH RATHOD

DR ROSHNI SURYAKANT RAWTE

ACP RIHAAN MUKHERJEE

SHREEKANT SEN AND CHOTU
ACP KARAN SINGH RATHODEdited by balan04 - 7 years ago
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I'm new to the story writing need ur support to continue
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SCENE 1 CITY HOSPITAL, MUMBAI

A group of 4 running behind a stretcher...

Roshni: sister jaldi OT thaiyar kijiye... Rihaan sab teek hoga

Shree: bhai aap yehi rukhiye mein formalities poori karke aatha hoon

Rihaan: teek hai..

After some time roshni comes out

Rihaan: kya huva roshni... Riya teek tho hei na...

Roshni: hope so rihaan Riya is one month pregnant mein ne on call gynaec ko call kiya hei vo Abhi aathi he hogiEdited by balan04 - 7 years ago
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After 30 minutes

Dr(gynaec) : excuse me... Dr roshni
Roshni: dr aayeye mere sath

After checking Riya

Rihaan: dr...
Dr: i should say Mr Rihaan it's a miracle varna ese cases mein Bachche ko survive Hona bahut he mushkil hei I must say both baby and Riya are fighters... Roshni just make sure Riya koi stress na lei

Roshni: jee doctor I'll keep u updated
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Rihaan: Shree Arjun ko call karo aur jaldi yahaan bulavo shayyad voh sab Riya ko doond rahe Ho
Shree : ji

Chottu: kya huva shree???
Shree : phone tho not reachable aa raha hai

There with Arjun sameer Karan sakshi and Ayesha

Karan looks at the phone and throws it away

Karan looks at sakshi and smiles

Sakshi:mv ab tho Arjun hamesha mera ho jayega...

Arjun :mv kaho Ho mera Bachcha... Baby is missing you bachcha be safe mein tumhe kisi bhi Haal mein doond loonga
Karan... Hamein hospital mein dekleni chahiye
Karan: Han Arjun mein ne chottu ko keh diya hai voh vahi hei
Arjun: mera phone kaha hai
Sameer: shayad kahi gir gaya hoga
Arjun : karan tum chottu ko phone karo
Karan: meinne kiya tha Arjun par not reachable aa raha hai
Arjun : shree kaha hai???
Karan: woh bhi chottu ke sath he hei
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Posted: 7 years ago
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awsome pls update the next part soon
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Hey 
Awesome start
Jaldi jaldi aage bhi update karo
Varna curiosity se mera dimaag kharab ho jaata h 
So continue sooon 
If possible please pm me
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After some time Riya gain consciousness the she remembers some thing
Riya : Arjun

Arjun: bachcha

Sikander: Rawte apne heroine ko Aakri baar dekhlo

Arjun: sikander use chod do ladayi meri aur tumhaare beech ka hai

Sikander: tumhaare kehne par meinne sakshi ko chod diya par ese to nahi... Ro lo arjun rawte

Karan: sikander and was about to shoot when he pushes Riya down

Riya: arjun...

Arjun: riyuuu...

Shree and chottu run down wards and take Riya but that is a no signal area

Later in the car shree and chottu receive rihaan's call and that's how the story starts

Rihaan: Riyu bachcha tu teek heina and congrats tum mumma bane vale Ho

Riya: sach me bhai bhai arjun kaha hei... Voh to khushi Se pagal Ho jayenge

Roshni: unka phone nahi lag raha hai ri ab thoda rest karlo

Roshni: mein karan bhai ko phone karthi hoon

Rihaan : haan

Roshni: hello karan mein roshni

Karan: haan roshni Bolo
Roshni: karan voh Riya
Karan : haa tumhe pata chal Gaya ... Humane back up force bheja hai thodi der mein pata chal jayega
Roshni: magar...
But karan cuts the call
Sakshi : koun tha bhai
Karan: roshni. Riya ke bare mein pata chal Gaya use...
Sakshi: bechari... Apne nanad ko miss Kar rahi he shayad
Karan smiles
Sameer: karan...
Karan : ji bhai
Sameer: mere sath chalo comm sir ne bulaya haI

Scene shifts to the hospital
Rihaan: kya huva rosh ???
Roshni: pata nahi karan bahut Ajeeb behave Kar raha hai
She tells everything

Roshni gets a call from her hospital in US

Roshni : yes

Sister: dr your patient whom u posted for surgery the next week
They have come here it seems serious

Roshni: but sister I'm in Mumbai right now it takes atleast 2 days for me to come there

Sister: pls come soon asap

Roshni: ok

Rihaan: kya huva rosh??

Roshni : mere patient thoda serious mujhe jaldi US jaana hoga
Par riya
Shree: hum Riya ko shift Kar sakte heinna
Roshni: teek hein
Shree: mein kuch Kartha hoon


shot 2 US after 4 months

Riya is talking to her baby...
Jante Ho baby... Apka papa aap Se kitna pyar karte hai

She remembers nine months after her marriage

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Arjun: kya huva Riyu kya Soch rahi Ho????
Riya: kuch nahi baby
Arjun: baby se yaad aya bachcha don't U think it's time hamein baby rawte ke liye sochna chahiye... Riya blushes and was about to go when
Arjun pulls her in to his arms and caresses her waist and she kisses him on his eyes nose lips and he takes her in his arms and goes to his room without breaking the kiss

Arjun undresses her and kisses every part of her body and Riya does it to him too
Arjun kisses her waist and asks her permission which she gives
She feels pain and moans Arjun but he kisses her lips
After many thrusts inside her and out

Finally Arjun: I love u bachcha
Riya: I love u too baby...

She come to the present when roshni calls her

Roshni: chalein Riya check up karne jaana hein
Riya : ji aayi


Edited by balan04 - 7 years ago
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Introducing
Dr. Preethi gynaecologist, lover of shree our play boy...

Preethi: Riya ab kaise mehsoos Kar rahi hei aap
shree : yeh sawal tho tumhe mujhe aur roshni as puch leni chahiye...
Preethi: kyu
Chottu: are math poocho yaar poora ghar apne sar par le lethe hai
Aur iske mood swings hey bhagwaan
Riya : dekha baby tumhaare mamu hamein kaise ched rahe hai...
Pouts baby and mamma mamu Se Katti and shows her last finger and tongue out

Preethi(smiles) chalo Tum dono bahar raho main Riya ka check up karthi hoon ...
Preethi: Riya voh Dekho yeh he tumhaare baby
Riya: omg kitna Chottu sa hei... And she hears the heart beat and tears come out

The Scene shifts to Delhi
( all have shifted to Delhi after the incident all thought Riya to be dead except sakshi and karan)

Sakshi is doing make up why doesn't she... she is the bride
Karan : sakshi Dekho meinne apne vaada pura kar liya hei
Ab Arjun ke dil jeetne ke baari tumhaare hai
Sakshi: jee bhai thanks so much and hugs him

Arjun: Sam kya sakshi sach me
Sam: ha mere bhai voh sach me tumse Shaadi karna chahti hai
Arjun and sakshi get married in the temple
Arjun : sakshi voh
Sakshi: it's okay Arjun don't worry... Mein samaj sakte hoon u need time it's okey
Arjun: thank you so much sakshi
Sakshi smiles and hugs him...

After 5 months it's Arjuns birthday
Sakshi has worn a sexy dress and yeah Arjun started having feeling for sakshi

Sakshi hugs Arjun and says happy birthday Arjun
Arjun too hugs her tight.. And says thank u
Arjun kneels down
Sakshi mein tumse bahut pyar Kartha hoon on my bday id like to make u mine will u be mine forever...
Sakshi as if her wait was over says yes and they made love the whole night...
Here Riya was making sweater and talking with shree regarding contacting Arjun suddenly felt her water broke and starts screaming but unluckily roshni and RIHAAN are out of town... And he takes her to the hospital and calls Preethi
She tells Shree about Riya's complication

Scene freezes with Sakshis evil face and riyas crying face