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Swarna

@manancraze

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Posted: 8 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: bikita
Of course our nandini who else it can be.
Interesting continue soon.
U are doing good have faith in yourself

Thanks for understanding...😳

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Swarna

@manancraze

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#72

Guys one thing about manik's character...
Manik is not any goon...it's just that har class main ek aisa person hota hain jisse hum sab darte hain and also none doesn't want to mess with him/her. Manik is kinda like that one. Everyone scares from him except one ;P

dpsdevuu dear plz delete some of ur msg...I couldn't send u pm...😃

Now let's move on to the story...

RECAP:
manik is about to cut his hand but he heard a girl shouting his name...

CHAPTER 2

Girl: Mann..iii..kk...manik...ruk jao...rukooo
saying this the girl started running towards manik...manik just dumbfoundly looking towards the girl and wishper...
Manik: Nandini...

Manik couldn't believe on his eyes...matlab how on earth nandini end up in a place like this...why is she here...why is she shouting his name...most importantly...how came she find about his secret place..!!! But before he can run his thinking process further he saw nandini just fell down on her face while running. Manik just run to her and help her to get up.

Manik: Yeh kya laga rakha hain tune...aise dour kyu raha tha...sab se badhi baat tu yaha kyu aya...bol...!!
Manik couldn't stand that no one wanted to let him lived peacefuly and now even die peacefuly . Itna muskil se usne sab pareshani se chutkara milne ka rasta nikala tha...par nahi...this creature just ruined it...so he angrily jerk nandini towards him and shout...

Manik: bolta kyu nahi tu...kyu aya yaha muh uthake...

Manik's eyes r spiting fire...but...but...but...shayad manik bhul gaya k uske samne jo ladhki hain woh aur koi nahi nandini shekhar murthy hain...jo apni baato se kisi k v fuse off kar sakta hain. So according to her nature nandini also reply him with a pouty face and angry eyes...
Nandini: tumhe rokne...

Though manik knew what is she trying to stop yet he just asked her angrily...
Manik: Rokne...kya rokne ayi hain tu...????

Nandini: Tumhe VEET k add karne se rokne ayi hu...
Manik: Whatt...!!!

Manik just couldn't believed in his ear...duniya main konsa ladhki aisa answer deta hain jab uske samne aise situation ho...no one..he is trying to remember that is she have any mental problem or not...meanwhile nandini continued her talk...

Nandini: Ha...aur nahi to kya...yeh koi jaga hain add karne ki...upar se Monster ji lagta app ka aankh bohat jayada hi kharab ho gaya hain...
Manik still looking at her with a shocked face...

Nandini: Tumne nahi dekha katrina ne spatula ko wrist pe lagaya tha...woh v plastic ka...but tum to sidha blade ko hi spatula bana dala...matlab bewokufi k v haad hota hain...
Saying this she started to laugh loudly. And manik...do I need to what what he is going through...I guess no. After coming out of VEETFULL shock manik coldly said to nandini

Manik: Sach sach bata...tu pagal khane se vhagke to nahi aya...???
Listening this nandini became very angry...how can anyone question about his mental stabilty...huh...so even nandini also reply to him same tone

Nandini: Tumhare himmat kaise hua mujhe pagal bolneka...bolo...tumne khudko dekha hain..."BLADE WALA KATRINA" lagte ho...!!!

Manik's POV:
"BLADE WALA KATRINA"...seriously...zindagi main yahi sunne k liye zinda tha shayad...aur kuch nahi mila yeh miss.chewinggum ko...
POV end.

Meanwhile nandini continued with a puppy face...
Nandini: Aur mujh par chillane v lag gaye...ek bar pucha mujhse nandini tum gir gayi,kahi tumhe lagi to nahi...par nahi tumhe to anger main Ph.D karna hain...hayee...meri jaisi ful si kali yaha gir gayi thi aur yeh ladhka mujhe mera madad karne k badle mujhse jhagra kar rahe hain...

Listenig her manik noticed nandini got some cut due to fell down. So he trying to wipe some dry blood from nandini's forhead and told her softly...
Manik: Tumhe yaha nahi ana chahiye tha nandini...yeh jaga bohat sunshan hain...agar kuch ho jata to...

Seeing manik talking so calmly nandini understand that manik k dimag se already suicide karne ka khayal chala gaya. She smiled in mind cause her mission "MANIK BACCHAO" finally succeeded. So it's time for some seroius talk.
Nandini: Manik aj main tumhare ghar gayi thi...

Listening this manik became so shocked...no no...this can't be happen...no one should know how vulnarable he is...No one...but now...nandini knew how weak he is...his mind gathered all this kinda thought...he hates it when anyone see him with a pityful eyes...it suffocate him...and now there is one more person added to this list who will treat him with sympathy instead of LOVE and CARE...and this mere thought was enough to make his chocolate brown eyes beaceme moist.

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Guys this story is not fully emotional one...it will have a mix of romantic and funny moment as well as emotional moment. Coz har wakt rona dhona mujhe accha nahi lagta. Tell me in ur comment aj ka chapter kaisa tha...
Aur agar koi confusion ho to v comment main puch lena...

Edited by manancraze - 8 years ago

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anum_6

@anum_6

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#73

Amazing update
Finally she succeed to stop him
Great

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Ky21

@Ky21

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#74

awesome update..

and veet add.. hahahaha!!!

nandu is soo cute...

she went to manik's house.. only she can cure him..

loved it..

waiting for the next eagerly...

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rockstarlover

@rockstarlover

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#75

awesome update
that was a quite veetful moment😆
nandu is crazy but cute
cont soon

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Geet *wink*

@dreamy_doll15

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#76

Ohhhoo so busy time se hme update mil gyii.. wow. niceee update .. Finally Nandu ne baccha liya. Hahaha. nandu ki theory oh god. that was funny ... Litreally Funny ... hahaha ... mjaa a gyaa.. Manik bhul gyaa nandu ka mission kamiyab... Amazing update ohhh nandu ne kya dekhaa aisa. ohhh. waiting for next update. thankeww for this update. thanks for pm.. Stay blessed keep smilling.

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mehak_ahuja

@mehak_ahuja

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#77

Glad that the girl was non other than Nandu.. The story is looking very creative and Intresting

Thank u for the update and the PM

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Pari_mananholic

@Pari_mananholic

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#78

Wow awesome update...
Nandu saved him from committing suicide...
Manik didn't want her sympathy...
Waiting for next...
Thnx for pm...
Update soon...
Sorry for being late...

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Swarna

@manancraze

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: anum_6
Amazing update
Finally she succeed to stop him
Great

Thanks for comments...😃

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Swarna

@manancraze

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: Ky21
awesome update..
and veet add.. hahahaha!!!
nandu is soo cute...
she went to manik's house.. only she can cure him..
loved it..
waiting for the next eagerly...

Thanks for comments...😃

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