MaNan FF : WAJAH TUM HO...(Chapter 14-Page 42 - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: akshima1995

Nyc character sketch
Eagerly waiting for the update
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Originally posted by: Pari_mananholic

Nice cs...
So what happened after his died..
Nandu is sweet enemy aww..
Waiting...
Update soon...

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Originally posted by: rockstarlover

superb cs
loved it
cont soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hawww. Manik ki life sad h bhut. but aise uski mom ka behavior kyu change ho gyaa .. hmm thinking ... Awww . so both r school student... so chotuu na .. Nandu are his sweet enemy. means cute moments . wow. waiting for update ... 😆
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Originally posted by: gtilwani45

Hawww. Manik ki life sad h bhut. but aise uski mom ka behavior kyu change ho gyaa .. hmm thinking ... Awww . so both r school student... so chotuu na .. Nandu are his sweet enemy. means cute moments . wow. waiting for update ... 😆

Thanks dear and update k liye jyada wait nahi karna padhega...😃
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CHAPTER 1

It was a pitch dark night. A boy is running and running...after sometimes he stop at his place and shout his lungs out. He is crying and crying...but there is no one to wipe those tears. And why will b...when his own mother treat him like trush so how can he expect there will b someone who will act like A SHINING STAR and guide him. After crying his heart out the boy think something and determined to do this. So he goes back to his house and sleep in his room i.e. storeroom of this big lavish flat.

In morning the boy woke up with swollwen eyes. He came to dinning room and noticed his family taking breakfast together with a happy and content face. Seeing this he felt a gut in his stomach and he felt that someone just squeez his heart badly. He wanted to ask god what crime he actually did that he is giving this punishment...is he really that bad that he has to face this at this point of life...will he ever able to get his FAMILY back...will he able to get the LOVE which is been deprieved from him. Thinking this kinda thoughts his eyes became moist and begin to shed tears...tears of craving for family love...tears of being alone...tears of being rejected. Suddenly her sister noticed him and looked at him with a loved yet pityful eyes. She stopped eating her food and keep satring at her younger brother. Her mother noticed her daughter's silence and looked towards her direction. What see saw make her totall furious. And she begin to shouted on this pour soul

Nyonika: What the hell is this manik???? why r u here...kya maine tujhe mana nahi kia tha k tu apna yeh manhush sakal mere samne ya mere bacho k samne matt dikhana...to kyu aya muh uthake yaha...

Manik: ma...wo..woh..m..main...
Nyonika: ek dum chup...kon hain teri ma...tujh jaise namurad k himmat kaise hue mujhe ma bulane ki...laagta hain tujhe apna aukad dikhana padhega...

Saying this she just through a plate on manik's face and manim fell down on the floor with a thud. His sister soha tried to stop her mother but her elder brother stoped her and ask her to continue her breakfast. But may b luck wasn't with him today...nyonika somwhow collect a stick and bit him black and blue. Seeing no mercy their maid shemonti came and somehow saved that poor boy.

Nyonika: aj zinda chor dia agar agli bar tu mere samne aya na to dekh lena...ja bhag yaha se...
Listening this manik just run to his room (storeroom) and began to cry his heart out.


In noon time when no one is around manik came out from his room and went to outhouse. There he saw his shemonti bua...he went to her and bid her goodbye.

Manik: bua...main ja raha hu...ghar chor k...humesha k liye
Bua: ja raha hain ??? par kaha ?
Manik: Rishav kaka k ghar...main wahi rahunga...kaka ne v jor dia tha mujhe unke ghar jane k liye...
Bua: thik hain beta ja...main dwarkanath jee se teri salamati k liye dua karungi...

Manik's pov:
ha bua...plz meri liye dua karna apni dwarkanath jee se...taki main sukun se mar saku..!!!! sorry maqine apse rishav kaka k bare main jhut kaha...par agar main sach bolta to aap mujhe jaane nahi dete...janti hu bohat pyar karte hain aap mujhse...but ma ka nafrat main aur jhel nahi sakta...main ess guilt main aur nahi reh sakta k mere wajah se mera papa ka death hua hain... I m good for niothing. ess liye maine decide kia hain main apne aap ko mar dalunga...taki ma ko mujhe dekh kar taklif na ho...

POV end.

Seeing manik lost in his thought shemonti bua tapped on his shoulder and told him...
Bua: dekh manik beta...main janti hu tere upar kya beeth raha hain...aisa umar main tujhe ma k rehete hue v anath k tarha darbadar ghumna par raha hain...
manik cut her off and said with a fake smile

Manik: Nahi bua...aisa nahi..
Bua: mujhse jhut na bol...mujhe nahi pata tu kitna tarapta hain apne ma k liye...
manik tried hard but couldn't control his tears

Bua: tu chinta na kar beta...tere ma par kala chaya hain...ess liye to aisa bartavh karte hain tere sath...warna tu to madam ka jigar ka tukra tha...pata nahi sahab k jane k baad...

Listening his father's name but just cut her off and said to her
Manik: bua main chalta hu...ma ka dhayan rakhna.
Saying this he just ran off from his flat.


After rooming around here and there manik came to an isolated placed near cliff area. Then he took out a blade and startrd to staring it with a teary eyes.


"kehete hain marne se pehele humare aankhoon k samne uska chehera ata hain jisse hum pyar karte hain..."

same case with manik...even he also seeing flashback of his family...his ma...his papa...his siblings...but suddenly this happy memory replaced with his father's death and post days.

How his life took 360 turns after his father's accident...anyway now he decided he won't repeat the same...he can't see his mother suffering because of him. So it's better to end this life...thinking this manik took the blade in his hands and placed it near his other hand to cut. But as soon as he placed it on his wrist he listened a girl's shouting...being confused manik began to look for the source of it but before he can find the source the girl again shouted behind from him...

Girl: Mann..iii..kk...manik...ruk jao...rukooo
saying this the girl started running towards manik...

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Screen freez on the running girl and a shocked manik...
Any guess who is the girl :P ???
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
the girl must be nandu..
amazing update..
I'm feeling so bad for manik.. he is suffering so much..
bt nandu h na..
I'm loving this story..
waiting for the next eagerly..
update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
Felt like crying seeing Manik's condition 😭
The is Nandini maybe
Manik is suffering so much hope he finds his happiness soon
Eagerly waiting for next update
Ty for pm

Keep smiling always
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
she is soha his sister
interesting update

loved the way u started story
continue soon

good luck
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