#9MaNan FF: Dheere Dheere Chapter 40/Pg118/28th-January-17 - Page 18

siyaaaali

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Posted: 8 years ago

#171

tum itna sweet kaise likhte ho yar...so beautifull...I just love it...

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naziasiddiqui

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Posted: 8 years ago

#172

Awsmmm

superbbb

amazinggg

mindblowinggg

excellent

fabbb

nice update

loved it very much

Cont soon

Waiting

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sdhanuka52

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Posted: 8 years ago

#173

It was superb

Twinkle and Jack maza aayega

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momy290691

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Posted: 8 years ago

#174

Twinkle's entry maybe for jack . nice update

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Ro_8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#175

Awesome...i loved it d whole ch...plzz put these types of scenes often with their after effects too...

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lovlytuli

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Posted: 8 years ago

#176

wow...awesome,,,amazing...⭐️

first part is lovely,,,then it was emotional,,,then its like action movie,,,n then the romantic one...

only u can do this magic with the all emotions in ur writing...👏

loved it so much...tysm fr this update...love u very very much...

jack n twinkle,,,,sounds good together...also make remember the two nursery rhymes...😆

eagerly waiting fr the next part,,,,continue soon...love ur stories a lot...

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Manya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#177

Emotional tha but achaaa tha ^_^
I like Jack-Twinkle jodi :p :S

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Bushramajeed

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Posted: 8 years ago

#178

Awesome,amazing,fabulous and what not jussst dont have words to explain. Loved it to the core

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manan_0711

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Posted: 8 years ago

#179

Awww...it was such a cute update...

Loved d update to d core. .

Loved Twinkle's entry...aww manik n twinkle scene was really cute...

Am loving Jack more nw...he cares so much for nandu but doesn't show...

Loved manan moments to d core..

I so loved d fight scene...it was so interesting... haha Jack is awesome he didn't forget to joke at dat moment also...hehe but dat was cute...

Loved Jack n twinkle first fight so cute...

Plz continue soon...😊

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Mananlover0312

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Posted: 8 years ago

#180

Awesome part just super amazing
Twinkle is an awesome character as cute as Nandini but still less I guess; loved Manik and tigers part a lot too; Manik fight with goons and possessiveness for Nandu was superb; jack-twinkle fight was very interesting; Manan romance... Hayee that was awesome...

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