Memory Chronicles (SwaSan FF) - Page 86

Originally posted by: kojagorimalik

Hii ...

I actually forgot complete book 2 so had to start again ...so from 1st chapter to 2nd though in subparts are really enthralling...

Sudip and Sanskar confrontation brought about Sudhir's father accident or supposedly murder into light...

Janki rape case...Though I couldn't get the accused name...But I m sure accused are from the trio..

I only hinted at the accused names, so it is not apparent, the names will be revealed slowly

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One thing that didn't sit here was Why Kavita's parents aren't bothered ...As much as I remember she was a very lovable daughter...I actually have a feeling that again trio are somewhere responsible...

Okay, I think it is my fault here, I have not made their outlook clear. I have the draft of chapter 3 in process, is it fine if I expand their position in that paragraph, if you as a reader get this impression, I have to correct it. 😊

Kumudini 's revelation got one thing clear that everything was a preplanned and carefully executed process...They know what they are going to do...and What opponent is thinking to do...The detective and Kumudini 's conversation brought about that somewhere Detective knows some thing more hidden ...something dark and dirty...Kumudini I feel is on a Good side...Her talk about Sanskar not being hurt ...And one more thing How does Harsha knows Sujata Maheshwari...Some past links there...Coz he particularly asked Does Sujata Maheshwari knows all this...

Yes, the present, takeover of MEPL is one that has been planned very carefully for years, also is the plan to avenge Janaki's rape, though it would be done differently. The detective, is eccentric (I made him so) hence would most likely support Kumudini. Kumudini is good here. Harsha know everything about the Maheshwaris and it is a common knowledge that she is a joker.

Again in Rape case...Kumudini mentioned Jahanavi...Is this the Swaha's Maasi...Is somewhere Swara existence is linked to it...

Jahnavi - one and the same, as to how Swara is linked ... that is what I hope is the secret😛

And last about SwaSan much awaited meet...A walk by Beach ...Swara getting a false of memory...And that last line ...Superb...

You liked the last line😳😳😳

I m actually excited to know what happens next

Originally posted by: dreamy.tiara

Dear Nyna 🤗

I had been seriously waiting for SwaSan to meet since the starting of Book 2, and I am super happy to read an entire SwaSan part. Very beautifully written.😳👏

Thank you, I was afraid I was shortchanging my readers, no kisses, no romance, just a walk and some talk😊

What can I say about Swara? After missing Sanskar all this while, when he finally appeared on her birthday she stupidly wishes that he goes away waiting for her. Impossible!

Swara is one confused soul when it comes to Sanskaar especially about her feelings regarding him. She wants to meet him yet it was so unexpected that she wishes him to go away. 😆

Sanskar is adorably honest about asking Ranjit Kaka her address and deliberately planning to meet her on her birthday. Cute sweet little boy. 😆

Our Sunny boy - however hard I try not to, he does end up being cute😳😳

So, Swara finally remembered her real name, but I don't understand why she doesn't tell that to Sanskar along with what she revealed. Is there danger?

No there is no danger, or rather, Swara is not a type to actually understand if there is danger. It is just that she is not sure that she can tell Sanskaar she just remembered her name. Moreover, the last memory revealed a lot - her name, the firm declaration of the Maasi who promised that she would always be a daughter and is surprisingly missing and the fact that she understands a foreign language. Even when she told Sanskaar about her memories, she just gave a gist and left out her role / idea of playing with Laksh.

(But you know what the problem I now have - I have to carefully weave it in, in the future chapters - another note to be made)

Beautiful, warm and flowing conversation between them. I specially loved the last line by Sanskar about building bridges. ❤️

It was nice, right, a promise and a confession (sort of) He still has a long way to go before I make him confess😆😆😆

Amazing chapter. Waiting for next. 👍🏼

- Tia

Originally posted by: dreamy.tiara

Does it mean that my guess is close enough? 😆.. Okay, you need not tell. I would rather read and find out. 😊

Well, I am exhibiting all qualities of a demanding reader..so.. 😆 But you are an amazing writer, you actually noted it in your draft notes about this. Thank you so much. 🤗

Originally posted by: Rumadiv

Finally after a long gap Swara and Sanskar meet that to on her birthday wow its superb. The story slowly starting to unfold and now again back being friends with both trusting on each other makes us more curious. Hope curiosity doesn't kill the cat. The conversation between Swara and Sanskar was well penned.

Yes they are back to being friends, and with no false promises or hidden motives. No more dancing around each other skirting facts😊

The last where Swara talking about the bridge that leads to the road which as no destination implies she doesn't want to build a hope of them being together as she doesn't know the entire memories and scared of losing the friendship? On the other hand Sanskar indicating building the bridge where he knows the destination means both will end together?Am curious.

Right on both counts - Swara is accepting that their journey is to find the truth about her and Kavita and that they might never be more than good friends. Sanskaar on the other hand, is open to the possibility that they can be friends or more and wants to keep that option and is willing to steer in that direction if inclined.

Anyways now both have teamed up lets see how they find the truth and how Swara will finally regain her whole memory.

The truth will be out😊

With love,

Divya

PS: Where did u find the last part at the end of the story the lines"And along the bridges that lead nowhere...take the gamble on ife and pay the prize"

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Note: May 6, 2018

The past two weeks and the coming week have been / will be very hectic on the office front. With me working more than fourteen hours a day, I have not been finding much time or energy to write an update. It is not very nice of me but I am unable to help it.

Requesting you to bear with me for the delay.

love,

Nyna