Memory Chronicles (SwaSan FF) - Page 85

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

Chapter 8.1

The quote is bang on! The house of cards that the MEPL was built on is coming undone slowly.

I am all 😳

This is one such update and story, where I realise the potential Adarsh and Parineeta had. The show never utilised them well, but they are also overlooked in fanfictions. After reading this detailed account, I am starting to think that theirs was a pairing well complemented, though less complimented.

That is a beautiful line and one of the best compliments I could receive for devoting so much space for AdRi😳

Sujata was not staying at Mihir Bhavan in the early days. So far, this information has not made an appearance in the story. My guess is that it had to do with RP's involvement in Sunil's murder and probably Sujata was accompanied by Ramprasad in her days away from Mihir Bhavan.

I did notokay but no more - it all falls into speculation on which I will not comment.😉

Another wild and a very sure guess: That girl at the bar was Swara. This I write with a hope that I be wrong and there's a twist in the tale as you would not leave answers in plain sight. If I am right, well, a reason to pop in the chocolate.

Pop the chocolate - sometimes, things are best hidden in plain sight.

The theft was brilliant. Take the data but show no immediate repercussions.

The chat between AdRi was an interesting one. Again lost opportunity on screen.

"I don't want to hear you breathe" - ROFL moment!🤣 Sanskaar has a weird sense of humour that really comes out in some worst moments.

I had to have Sanskaar say that, Swara must have been tiring him out and he was confused and worried so😉

I come from the construction industry. So I could relate to Swara's frustration to search for the plans and documents. 🤔

That was based on my frustration with document retrival in an audit firm - files and papers referenced and cross referenced, indexed and stored yet we were always searching for papers

Uttara's birthday was a nice addition, especially involving the orphanage kids. This Ripu is definitely bad news! I thought this when I read this chapter and what I felt about the realisation of it - I will leave it to the corresponding chapter.

A phrase that this tale is - a slow poison. It's a lot to take in, too much to leave behind, playing on the tongue as you get addicted to reading it.👏⭐️

That is a wonderful thing to read, thank you

Originally posted by: ria2794

Read both 2b and 2c there are thousand of things i want to aam aam but for that i have to read it again. Will read it in 4 day weekend and then bug you with questions.

Originally posted by: lucky.m

I have missed out many updates ...But I am going to catch up on them

Done with 2A..It left me with so many questions .

I guess I need to do a re reading to link the things but what caught my attention was the file hidden by Sunil which Sudhir was checking in last fee paras ..

So something related to drugs and a ghastly event .Is this somehow related to one of girls mentioned in the very start of FM book 1 and Sunil was killed Bcos he was pursuing the case

And is it kumudini who spoke to Harsha over phone ?

Such a complex take nynu with so many details to fit in and yet you deliver it with so much ease .I wonder how you guys manage to weave such tales on intricate lines ..

And it gave me a thriller feel ..I am going to hop on to next chapters

Originally posted by: dreamy.tiara

Dear Nyna,

I read and reread all the parts of Ch-2 (with a gap of a week in between).. This is getting more and more intriguing. I think later on Swara and Ragini will turn out to be half sisters through their mother. This secret surrounding the Maheshwaris run much deeper and murkier.

I loved Uttara's outburst on Sanskar 👍🏼 ... though I hoped Sanskar too to share his version with Uttara.

Amazing chapter. 👏

Waiting for the next.

- Tia

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

Chapter 8.2

The car had been integral to the mystery since the start. Glad that Sudhir didn't give up on that.

That car is a hero, no way I would let Sudhir give up on that😊

Your geography is just awesome, Nyna.👏 You have your places to the T. With the routes between the locations and the distances, I am simply in awe of that level of research. This may sound repetitive but your research efficiency blows me away all the time.

I will accept the compliment, once in a while it is nice to bask in the warmth of them😳😳

Being a true blue feminist, I enjoyed this update. Recently I have been watching Troll Police on Youtube and every time the troll admits, especially how coolly they throw the blame on the celebrities is enough to boil my blood. Most recent episode I watched, the troll said these exact words "chedne mein mazaa aata. chedna masti hai. Harrasment masti ke liye karte hain." I just couldn't sit back and listen to that. I shouted expletives at the TV and my mom came running to see why I am so angry.

I get too worked up and stressed out when I watch or hear such things, it could seem cowardly but then I keep away from such news too. I cannot stay calm and having a temper outburst does not change anything. I hate it. But then it does not have to be in the stories we write and the worlds we create, right? I guess you now understand why I detest bad boy good girl stories.

Anyway, back to this part of the update, I think I enjoyed the scene where Sanskaar and Laksh arrive to witness the aftermath.

It was fun to write too, especially Laksh contributing his mite by way of a kick😆😆

Adarsh and his trademark silence.. Lol!😆 My god, Sujata is epic na!🤣 Ghar mein toofan aur use poori ki padi hai. Honestly, this AP and DP are so adamant that they only see what they prefer to see.

Sujata is the court jester of the Maheshwari kingdom

You have once again reminded me why I used to ship RamTa, sometimes I prefer them over SwaSan. 😳 They know the pulse of the family, understand the repercussions and see the reactions for every decision. And their sensibility is not limited to the family. They are aware of the public or the societal issues that crop up for these decisions. They complement each other too well.

Most of us do ignore those in the shadows for they are never in the light, but then they who are hidden in the shade are in a better position to see the others and observe.

The Gaurav-Nalini part was fun to read. I know, sometimes we divulge gossip to the wrong person and it leads to amusing consequences.😳

Triple Chocolate Torte- Nyna, promise me, when you port this on Wattpad, please post this scene as a separate chapter and name it as Triple Chocolate Torte. The sinful chocolate romance!❤️

Oh, I loved writing it out - so much possibility, so tantalising, and nothing much happens but so much changed😉 And I will keep the title in mind too

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Originally posted by: Nynaeve

I get upset with guess that my readers make😉 (not going to say if you are right or wrong, that would take away the fun😈)

Sanskaar's reply - honestly😆, then that update would be another 1000 words long and this chapter would end up with 5 parts. But then, i could always have Sanskaar or Uttara talk about it so that you would know (pointed noted in my draft notes🤗)