Memory Chronicles (SwaSan FF) - Page 78

Originally posted by: Seriously.

Surprise to see me babes... Yeah for me too.. finally getting my times with the stories here.

Fantstic Nynuuu,

What an explanation and the great use of adjectives,(for a time I for the word adjective it took me a day to bring it back from my memory.) I read the prologue it was fantastic as usual. I loved the way how her imagination turned as his dream. Need to read first part. So going babes.

Keep posting, have a good health.

Love you,

Kam.

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Nyna darling...

How are u dear.???..im fine...trying hard to come back on forum...but busy schedule is making it difficult..i hardly read any thing properly in last few months...

Its been so long that i have read this chapter 1 of FM...badly wanted to reply...write some word worthy enough for your commendable writing skills...finally im typing...

So chapter 1 was STUPENDOUS...literally...i loved it..

I can relate to life being hectic and busy, so I never grudge your delays😊

Flashback of swasan condition after the diary fiasco was neatly penned...what i realised...after being together with each other for nearly 3 years...swasan, raglak ...they lack proper communication...this lack of sharing and conversing took them to this point of seperation...i do realise their state of minds which lead to this situation...their inners turmoils did not allowed them to think clearly..they all assume so much..i actually agree with one line that too much reading brushes up your imagination skills ..even i do overanalyse simple things sometimes..same happened with swasan...raglak too...

Despite knowing each other, they had always left some things unsaid - unsure themselves they could not truly express themselves and now find them in embroiled in a mess of their own creation. Sometimes, things are quite black and white, with our imagination we muddy the circumstances and blame it for being grey

sanky always somewhere in his head thought swara is involve in kavitas kidnapping and murder...swara's memory loss was her biggest enemy..her few pieces of memories always made her doubt herself...diary out of no where came and ruined the peace and warmth they all share...acted as final nail in coffin in growing misunderstandings...

For Sanskaar, the fact that Swara being found with Kavita leaves no room for thinking that she was not involved, moreover, he knew that both were shot with the same gun. He always hoped that she was not responsible for the kidnapping but with Sudhir's suspicions and the diary entry, it was the logical though flawed initial reaction. Swara was already feeling guilty about what she inferred from the little she remembered and the diary - again a flawed reaction.

For a change i loved lucky...his past mistakes made him little matured...loved how he handled sanky .and said what he felt...hope he help himself and ragini too...

Half way into the story, it is time he grows up, right?😉

Ranjit kaka was the hero of this chapter...the way he logically pointed his theories to swara was commendable...sudhir ..well he is doing his job...but good he got thrashing from kaka too...
Ranjit asked swara to trust him...but still swasan will be seperated for 6 months...why..???what are they planning???.waiting for swasan reunion...

Ranjit kaka is the unsung hero, the mentor in the background. Six months, what they do you will know - i needed that time to set somethings in motion.

One little things caught my attention...that shiv prasad maroon car...i did cross check...in chapter3 of book 1...when sanky and lakshya went to rescue kavita ..one maroon car overtake them..i think this is connected...someone close from family is involved...who??..only time will tell...
U know now im actually wondering how many people were involved in harsh long revenge/justice plan ...swara ..jahnavi... may be amar...ranjit too...still so many things are unclear...motive for kavitas kidnapping...

Not going to comment on any of the above - you know why😉😉😉

Im more curious now...Update next soon plzz...im waiting since forever...

Soon - by end of this week or maximum by mid next week

Love u...missed u..
Loads of hugs n kisses
Talia

Originally posted by: raaz19

Agree with all of talia points... nyna miss you...

Hoor you are feeling better :)

Will revert soon...

Take care razia

Originally posted by: dreamy.tiara

Hi Nyna 🤗

Hope you are doing well and are in your best health.

Missing you and your stories terribly.

Do update soon!

(Finally, I became a demanding reader 😆)

Take care,

Tia.

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Tia,

I am so sad to hear that you are also asthmatic - I hate it. And you got it young, I was a little older around sixteen when it started and it would last only a couple of days and simply taking care of my diet (not eating much during the attack and drinking hot liquids) was enough to tide over. But over the last few years, the attacks though far paced are severe when they hit - it was more like consecutive ones, which was what forced me to keep a diary (in my head) to try find out the trigger - an allergy to peanuts (my resistance has now improved) soya and lobia seeds and bakery products having fresh cream icing, (no black forest for me), but that is a small price.

The issue here is at times you cannot be careful enough - you eat outside, or the weather is cold and damp and everyone around suffers from cold or cough, that lowers your lung resistance and chances of an attack is higher, which is why an attack in rain / cold (August to December) is a bad one and recovery is slow.

I do exercise (though not regular🥱 but with summer around the corner I am much much better now.

Take care and hope you never ever have a bout of asthma.

love,

Nyna

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

I love this demanding form of yours, makes me feel like I am star being chased by the paparazzi😆😆😆

I am very well, in fact as I have been replying, in as pink of health can be.

I was stuck in a place, for all the threads of my motifs and lietmotif got entangled, I had the ending, I have the last few chapters drafted but was stuck as to how does the breakthrough come across? I did not want to use the coincidence angle (it is considered very amateurish) but could really not built in any other way. Finally I stumbled on a compromise, it would use both the characters actions leading to a coincidence which would open a round about way for solving the mystery - am I making any sense😕

Anyway, I am now able to move forward, so should be updating soon.

love,

Nyna

PS- I have finally become active in Wattpad. I would be reposting all my other stories (fanfiction, general fiction and other writings) but this story stays here. My IF readers have dibs on this story.

Originally posted by: dreamy.tiara

Of course you are! And I am your psycho fan. 😆😆😆

Yay! That means we all are getting an update soon.

Thank you so much. 🤗 This is one of my favorite SwaSan stories by you, and also the one where Swara works in a bakery-cafe...Sorry I forgot the name, but I remember the story.

Update soon. Eagerly waiting.

- Tia