Originally posted by: lucky.m
Look whats here and who is back.. should I say who never left .🤗🤗
I am sad I missed that excitement of waiting for prologue ..but a greedy side of me is dancing , that I got to read the prologue .. and what a start we have nynu👏⭐️. I could feel vibes hitting straight out of your writing. The wait, hope , pain ,resignation of Swara and Sanskaar, the subtle notes of it could be felt with intensity and the cosmic connection angle. It took me to FM ,nose and toe😆
👏I am glad Sanskaar decided to hear out to Swara. That was very fair on his part..and deep down its his own need to find her, keep her by his side always. I so loved Sanskaar's part..a bit more.😉
I Cant wait for chapter 1 .
I always tell you I wish I could write like you and I keep wishing. May be one day😉😉😳
I am super glad you posted this.I will step in forum to catch more of memories and few other dwellers
Love Loads
Lucky
I knew you never left, but you were missed - and so was your tale (and I know I still have to get back with a detailed comment for Chapter 9 and 10 but still..😳)
I loved writing the prologue - the same structure but with a little twist and the cosmic connection - it had to be subtle so that rational Sanskaar can dismiss it as stress related though Swara admits that she is missing him like never before.
Sanskaar is a fair person and this is almost six months afterwards, so good bit of time to make rational decisions- but I was a little worried and now after reading your take, I am relaxed. And since Swara is also willing to tell him about all her memories, it would help them find answers.
Chapter 1, part 1 almost done but too tired to post now (the double quotation marks will trouble me, so tomorrow morning)
@bold - all the encouragement I need to keep writing☺️ And yes, now that I have started posting, I would be more regular. I have to start posting on RR too, have a few snippets for that too.
lots of love,
Nyna
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