Memory Chronicles (SwaSan FF) - Page 60

Originally posted by: Sanya17

It was an amazing update but you ended on such a cliffhanger I hate cliffhangers please update soon

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Nynu🤗

It was painful towards end ok 💔.My heart literally dripped down .. and I am dreading what would happen further ..and The point Swara was at end ..truly heart wrenching😭😭. Sanskaar is going to hate her and hate himself for loving her ..and I am sure he will be guilty too .. as to how he can fall for some one whom he now believes of having hand in Kavita's death.

It was, was it not? Heart wrenching and gut wrenching too. But nothing to dread for, I will have them make up quite soon though the separation would be intense - absence makes the heart grow fonder. As to Sanskaar's feelings, the epilogue will give you a hint, I have updated it, so do let me know.😳

and the dairy ...That's the key..

The key, hmmm.. one of them the minor one, the actual clue is something else which will click 😉

I am heavy hearted right now 😭😕... will be back for more. Though I had not been able to give proper comments now and then .. I have been foll wing the tale religiously ..and I intend to read it all again to catch up on any hints or nuances I might have missed out which you would have masterfully crafted into tale .⭐️👏 I loved the scene between Sanskaar ..and Swara scenes of Swara and Sanskaar alone too..and I always adore how much care and diligence you put into all little things ... that makes you stand apart from all👏⭐️ ... Sudhir , uttara or devyani and S3..Everyone is dealt with same importance .That requires lot of patience and relentless commitment and no give up attitude ..👏⭐️which you have in abundance ..

I so love your comments, they are what really perk me up and especially the stars you give me😳😳😳. I know I am digressing but I have to let you know, in my school, in the primary classes (KG, 1st and 2nd maybe till the 3rd class) the teachers would actually have boxes of stars, silver and gold one (around 1cm or so) which they would stick on to our class work or home work if it were good😳 As kids we would be exceptionally proud if we did get a star and now when I am all grown up, I think I am still a child in some ways, your stars take me back to those lovely childhood days.😳

I am looking forward for epilogue ..and I love the name you have given Memory Chronicles⭐️😳 absolutely apt .Will be back to unres for rest of them soon

Already updated the Epilogue and glad you like the name. I have a tentative title for Book 2, will let you know😳

Originally posted by: Anahita_Leve

Dear Nyna,
Not going fancy with my response this time. But finale had literally broke my heart. Swara, poor thing was in impression of being in irrevocable one sided love. Now she will be hated by the man she loves. Perhaps she will hate her herself. For Sanskar Swara had turned into his reality. But now he would berate himself. I think Swara was not involved with the murder. There was a chapter where she wished Kavita not to suffer, but Harsha wasn't willing to interfere. Perhaps the last entry in her diary meant that thing.

I can't handle their ordeal anymore. You better solve this really quick and let's know the cause of Harsha's wrath.

I hope your shoulder is better now and so is your lung condition. Don't exert yourself. Take care.

Love,
Dyuti

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Res nyna...

Unres..

Firstly thank u nyna and veena for your praises..i read your comments...hugs to u both...😳

You deserve it, 🤗I love the way you read and take time to give such detailed comments, alongwith with very perceptive reasons, some so close to the truth that I am convinced you have access to my laptop. And even when you are absolutely wrong, I like them becausethat is what could be if I had taken that route.

Coming to chapter 10C..which was mind blowing..👏.and also im doing 100 situps for being horribly late... i tell u sometimes it hard to just reply..i was frequently online...but could not write as everyone was calling me..for safai...etc..now im free...daily routine started job n household work...😭 i will comment now finally...

No worries for the delay, and though situps are good exercises, do them only for your health not because you are late to comment, festivals are meant to be enjoyed and cleaning the house is a part of it. So did you enjoy your Eid?

Last chapter was roller coaster ride...😉how excited i was that TATA indica should be found..n it finally did...i liked your detailing...pramila ..soumen n others..you penned whole new place n characters that lead to discovery of the lost car...i was wonderinghow this news will reach sudhir...but u weaved story so nicely...👏sudhir actually got transferred there...i first thought was it destiny of sudhir??or he was a pawn too...n was deliberately placed there..so that car could be found?? It made be very suspicious...coz it cannot be coincidence..after taresh (T3) entry..things are changing rapidly... even harsh's company is expanding widely...😲

Sudhir's transfer to Hemnagar, was intentional on T3's part, he feels an irrational ire towards Sudhir and decides to transfer him to the most dangerous place he could think of. And in the true fashion of not being good person, he decides to reshuffle everyone so that nobody can accuse him of being unfair. But then destiny decides to show its hand, and Sudhir's transfer was the most fortuitous thing to happen alongwith Bahir's to KLC police station. If T3 had an inkling as to how things were going to unravel, he would have Sudhir transferred to the Assam border and not to the Bangladesh border. One step, that will finally set the ball rolling.

Harsha's company, he has had a long time to plan so it is quite smooth.

Adharsh confrontation was awesome..i was actually proud..he confronted his family..n made nice decision of moving out...👏however i wasnot expecting sujata to create such chaos...i like her funny side...she being that blunt to another women i did not enjoy..she was right but her way was harsh...or was that purposely???she was always loving to everyyone and understanding to at times...😕

Sujata is the drama queen, so this time she just seems to have lost it when she kept repeating what Mrs Tapadia told Annapurna. But then it did give Adarsh the final push he needed to take Pari with him

uttu, swara and ragini playfull banter was so good...they both handled the painful blow pretty well...ragini was much braver actually after all she had suffered indifference and heartbreak so many times...laksh stupidilty was just small compared to that...both appeared composed and calm infront of sanlak which actually confused them alot.. 😆

All the three girls are quite resilient in their own ways, so when they had a choice they decided not to show that they were crying over the men they loved. Ragini is a classic example of how people who suffer can make a choice to set things right - at that point she had quite a choices - continue to bemoan her fate or decide her course of action. She had already learnt to fight her depression and also realised that at times life gives you a chance to progress (Sanskaar falling in love with Swara gives her that realisation) and that you have to move on (again from Sanskaar). So rather than submit to fate she decided to build her life.

Sudhir..he finally made his break through...his father was killed right???i remember that..did he too have motive against maheswaris ..gadodias..coz he is soo involve in a murder case of kavita...why i mean..its been three years now?? Why still it bothers him...he is independently searching for evidences..he got momin...n is about to reach that diary too..it makes me little curious..why?? Was his family wronged too by maheswaris or others???😲

Sudhir did make a break through, so he is still on the off path to the truth. He does not have anything against the Maheshwaris and Gadodias, though his mother hates them. Her story in book 2. Regarding why he is unable to give up on Kavita's case, nothing personal, this is his first case and he hates that fact that he has failed to get justice for her, and he is taking this failure quite personally, which at times clouds his judgement. But soon, all will be on the right track.

And yes his father was killed, in suspicious cirmcumstances though the official statement is that it was an accident.

Read 10 D too..got few doubts..need clearance..will revert soon..😆

Love u

Talia😳

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Nyna darling...

Im early for 10 D...it was heart wrenching update. I was in tears in the end..you are so cruel...but as u already told final ending is going to be good..so im keeping my patience and believe...im composing myself...now

Yes, sabr ka phal meetha hota hai, it will be quite a happy ending. All lovey dovey couples, like a Rajashri movie closing frame😆

Swasan...hmm...swasan sharing a single frame is enough for me.i tell u...they both had suffered hell for two months by purposely keeping distance..but i liked swara's determination...how she admitted to herself about loving him always, no matter what circumstances...on his birth day she decided to confront him..it was a beautiful scene...they both agreed to talk..the piece sanky whittled.u describe brilliantly...i loved reading about it...n how both analysed samething...but assume themselves as an outer fish...they both are lonely...there conversation did reveal few harsh truth..n some remain unspoken...

We SwaSan fans can derive solace even if they are in one frame, right? Yes, they suffered in a hell of their own making, but then each of their assumptions was based on fact and it is tough to really talk about one's feelings when you are convinced that you do not stand a chance. So each had a similar veiw about their position in the other's life. Both presumed that their place in the other's life was not sure or was in the outer circle, not realising that they meant the world to each other. They will realise it, in good time😊

Sudhir..how i wish i could kill him now...he is the one that put the seeds of doubt in sanky's mind...he has given so many possibilities of swara's involvement in kavis murder...noo...that moron even send that diary to sanky...if he did not meet him before in temple..sanky would have took another meaning of that diary's word or would have given benefit of doubt to swara...but that idiot ruined swasan building relationship...well actually he had broken only swara badly...completely...sanlak did felt betrayed...

Sudhir will want to kill himself too - not that drastic but somewhat close to that. He did not want to send that diary to Sanskaar, there was no way he could come to Kolkata to collect it from Momin and since he did not want to delay it any longer, he instructed Momin to hand it over to Nalini (who if you remember, is still indebted to Sudhir and is responsible for giving him info about Sanskaar?). But Momin only remembered that the name ended in "ini" so when he saw Ragini, he gave to her, which is how it reached Sanskaar and then Swara. Sanskaar feels betrayed while Laksh is bewildered, he was aware that Swara is a suspect in Kavita's case.

Last two paragraph words were soulstirring..i cried reading those...what swara felt...something broken inside her..it made me soo sad...sanky did not believe her..he had many reason too..but still it made me cry...

KUDOS to u for this part..it was worth all praises...i enjoyed it as reader...

I am glad you liked it despite it making you cry. Sanskaar not believing her, in the mood he was, it was natural. It is not humanely possible not to suspect Swara, though as you rightly pointed out, if Sudhir had not met Sanskaar in the temple,his reaction would have been milder. But then in the end, it will turn out for the best.

Few other things...i liked all light moments before the storm..swara n ragini together shopping etc...swara did make some great new memories to last forever in life...i hope ragini support her in tough times...now if harsh n others came to her ..i dont want her to accept them..where were they for three years???

Ragini and Swara will continue to there for each other, that is what girl friends are for. Harsha and her Maasi, time will tell😉

Now im sure sudhir family had bad past with maheswari's...his mother surely hate them all..that proves in temple scene..

You will come to know soon - we have reached the end of 2014 and the story wraps up in mid 2016, so things would move faster now.

I liked the newspaper snippet parts...MSS is surely making mark all over the country...

Oh, yes - they will soon make it visible as to who the company behind all those moves is - after all, an MEPL and MSS confrontation is also on cards

One thing..that memory part of kavita n sanky..when she asked him to move on in life if she dies...did kavi knew she was going to die?? Or got any fatal disease...??planned her own kidnapping or death?? Or shot dead accidently?? I have my guesses now...maybe she was involve in something and knew she could die in that task...??? With gayatri???i felt that...but sudhir said she had bruises on her body as in autopsy report...of martial arts blows..im wondering how thatcame?? May be she was learning self defence???

No, that memory did involve Kavita having a premonition about her death. Though her involvement was with Sanlap it was more towards rehabilitation of the human trafficking victims rather than investigating the cause and means of the same. The conversation triggered from a casual lovers' talk, "what would you do if I die" sort of. But then it has a role to play in Sanskaar finally believing.😉

I got so many guesses..if n buts...plzzz im desperate for epilogue n book 2 too dear..plzz update soon..

Love u

Talia..

Hoping and praying u are good now??? How is your shoulder?? Apply ice pack or something to soothe the pain n discomfort...plzz n do rest too...