Originally posted by: blindassassin
Dearest ,
Who are you? A mathematical/computer/engineering wizard? A master of law? Banker? CA?. How can one have such deep knowledge (not superficial), abt what one writes...oh i forgot a Psychologist?
Only one of the above😳 I am a CA by profession, an introvert by nature, with a propensity to talk a lot, an avid book reader, a day dreamer, a night time thinker and blessed with a very fertile and over the top imagination. Writing is the natural output of such a disastrous combination.😆😆
Nynu I was not able to read your regular updates due to some personal commitments and i am extremely apologetic for not giving due importance to a very talented writer. At the same time i am happy too for having skipped the updates due to some selfish reason...i could read it continuously without having had to wait anxiously for the next update. . Nynu i am really spellbound, couldnt keep the mobile away till late night when i finished reading.
I really want to give a chapterwise analysis but my three month old is not letting me do so, so i will quickly comment on few of my favorites.
As already told, do not worry about regular reading or timely comments. As long you enjoyed the story, I am happy😳
---Never in my wildest dreams did i think will start loving ragini as a character because i hated her in the show and every FF i have read to date. It was like liking laksh after reading Best of Things. But you have characterised her so well..delicate yet strong...and i loved the bond between ragini and sanskar which was so annoying in the serial...forced bond.
Ragini, by now I am sure everyone is aware of my fascination with her and I simply loved the possibility of Sanskaar and Ragini of being friends, good ones. So when you say you like my Ragini here, I am on top of the world.☺️ (And yes, Best of Things - there were times when I found it tough to choose between RagLak and SwaSan - brilliant writing by SoapBubble❤️)
---I loved your Omniscient third party angle of writing... giving the thoughts of each person such importance..i love it that way.. not sure whether you have heard of the longest indian novel...Avakaashikal... in malayalam...my all time favorite. There the writer Vilasini, analyses each plot from different persons perspective.. some people may accuse of repitition but the actual essence of the story lies when it is interpreted that way .
Once again, thank you and big hug🤗I love this style of writing (as mentioned, it gives you a sort of God complex, you have access to the thoughts of all the characters and at times, each one interprets the incident differently, makes great fun to write, though the fall out as you mentioned, could be that I could get repetitive
--Swara taking an initiative for a kiss..what better way to make up for the mahaan swaradevi who put her love last behind all other relations in the series. The scene was wonderfully set...gave me Goosebumps reading it... I thought the last kissing scene of amaranthine was the most romantic scene written by you but now not sure ...
Swara not mahaan here, and for her it is going to Sanskaar before anybody else, she won't be a doormat but he would be her priority. And glad you liked that kissing scenes - I always have problems with them, maximum time in drafting and finalising them, I am drained writing it out and then terrified as to how it has turned out to be.
--Sanskars forthright denial of the proposal, uttaras sudden relevation of how she knows her friends are going to be her future bhabhis, raginis sweet way of buying gifts for swara, swaras collapse on realising she is set to destroy sanskar(the most damakedaar sequence with the update ending there),laksh-swara camaraderie, swara-sanskar with sparks between them...the list will go on and on ...
Nice tiny twists, right, how course Uttara would know, she has seen three of them, Sanskaar, Laksh and Ragini from the time she was born and hence is quite attuned to the nuances, and Swara, she is an open book, sort of. Ragini is the compulsive shopper and fashionista here. Swara's collapse on her memory that her mission was to honey trap the Maheshwari siblings (Spoiler - fact not the complete truth, hopefully the suspense will be worth it😉)
I like clear cut definition between friends and lovers (both are beautiful relationships and I dislike mixing them up, it is said you cannot have it but in my story, it stays)
--The conversation between sudhir and sujatha proved you are not only master of romance and plots but good at humour too.
Sujata is the drama queen, the full entertainment force of the Maheshwaris, I had fun writing it out😆
--I love reading long updates and your warning "less swasan does not deter your readers...
Good, another long, no SwaSan update coming up😃
--Nynu and above everything your work inspires me to write ...i am not good at it but i very badly want to pen my thoughts while i am reading yours. I am sure that is what a great writer does...inspire others...
Just pick up a pen and paper / laptop and start (I use both, a paper and pen to scribble the plot lines, excel sheet to set the time lines and a doc to type it out). Keep as many drafts as you want, and you do not worry, when the story is ready to be put out, it will clamour to be told.
Also want to thank Talia for her beautiful insights to the plot...I love reading the comments on my favourite works...
Talia is a true sweetheart, I have told her a couple of time, if time and logistics permitted I would have made her my Beta Reader, there are some subtle nuances that she picks up in a snap. And when I write a plot line which can go either way, she can pick up both and that actually helps me decide the final direction, at times. A big hug for Talia🤗🤗
Now i will start being restless till i get the next update...hope the story continues forever.
Next update coming up😆
lots of love
Veena.
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