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Originally posted by: _InDreamWorld_
Nice story
Thanks, Sadhana. Guess this is the first time we are interacting though you do seem to visit Writers' Corner too.
Originally posted by: _InDreamWorld_
Nice story
Originally posted by: krishuuu
Nyna darling...
Chapter 10 B was Highly interesting...also my long lost tata indica resurfaced..pheww...now sudhir will find some lead...after two long years of hardship...fingers crossed...Yes, the Indica finally reaches land, though a small journey is left for it to reach Sudhir😉Starting from two new entries...Devyani...i envy her entry...laying in tub..rejuvenating and relaxing...it actually made me desire..to have this type of bath..alas i have no bath tub in my house...only shower jet..but im content with it...hmm...so going through her background..i liked her character...she is strong, she is actually "friends for benefit" type...she came long way using her powerful connections at correct time...Devyani, is indeed a very clever woman and has grown using the powerful connections she has built up. A tub bath is indeed very relaxing and rejuvenating, I was feeling quite relaxed myself when I wrote it out, guess that is why I went on and on about the bath soaps and massage oils😆Gayatri..though i felt bad reading about her...i felt she was a innocent ambitious protege ...used cleverly as a pawn by devyani for her own selfish reasons...but im sure her time will come..when protege surpasses the master...it will come soon..Gayatri is still a naive girl, one who believes that only her work would speak, it does provided it is not gagged by others. She will come to light, soon😊Pari...awww...you know i felt bad for her here...in serial too she was badly neglected...its hard to face fertility issues..and all that taunts from those chudail aunties..witches i tell u...she cried so much...after reading adharsh part..im not sure what is he planning to do..i hope he supports pari..and never leave her alone to suffer...Society has a way of gossiping and hurting people, I mean what business is it of them if a woman conceives or not, it should not affect them. Further, they love it when the recipient is not in a position to give it back to them, the barbs are sharper and quite poisonous. What does Adarsh do - next part will let you know.Coming to My amazing duo pair...swasan and raglak corridor scene..u know it reminded me of last DOTW pic u girls shared...all leads in one frame...just staring each other..uttu managed to bring them out of their staring session...Their agony, pain, frustration and despair was evident by the scenes u awesomely etched..two good thing happened..both swaragini got to know uttu's problem...and also that she knows that her both brothers messed up their blooming relationship...this scenes was perfect...loved it...
Uttara could be the youngest but that does not mean she is not perceptive, she hit the nail on the head.And the corridor scene - it was such a power packed vibrant scene, I am glad you could be reminded of the four of them in DOTW (I just love the scene in which the four are in a frame, especially the "not so happy" ones.😉Im curious to know what actually debo said to gayatri...??he warhed her but why?? Did he knew something??? last paragraph made me intrigued...im soo waiting for all the cards to reveal..all plotters...two decades of planning for revenge..it must be worth waiting for...but this will accompany many twist ..turns and heartaches too..im prepared..waiting for 10 C n D...i believeDebo gave a very general cryptic warning to Gayatri, he did not want her naivete to cause her pain and a stagnant career, his words will help her in future, when she has to make certain decisions.The revenge will start as will the investigation, which as you guessed would lead to twist(s) and heartbreak. I love it that you are prepared for 10 C and D.Love u loadsTalia
Originally posted by: kojagorimalik
Awesome chapter just loved it
Dearest ,
Who are you? A mathematical/computer/engineering wizard? A master of law? Banker? CA?. How can one have such deep knowledge (not superficial), abt what one writes...oh i forgot a Psychologist?
Nynu I was not able to read your regular updates due to some personal commitments and i am extremely apologetic for not giving due importance to a very talented writer. At the same time i am happy too for having skipped the updates due to some selfish reason...i could read it continuously without having had to wait anxiously for the next update. . Nynu i am really spellbound, couldnt keep the mobile away till late night when i finished reading.
I really want to give a chapterwise analysis but my three month old is not letting me do so, so i will quickly comment on few of my favorites.
---Never in my wildest dreams did i think will start loving ragini as a character because i hated her in the show and every FF i have read to date. It was like liking laksh after reading Best of Things. But you have characterised her so well..delicate yet strong...and i loved the bond between ragini and sanskar which was so annoying in the serial...forced bond.
---I loved your Omniscient third party angle of writing... giving the thoughts of each person such importance..i love it that way.. not sure whether you have heard of the longest indian novel...Avakaashikal... in malayalam...my all time favorite. There the writer Vilasini, analyses each plot from different persons perspective.. some people may accuse of repitition but the actual essence of the story lies when it is interpreted that way .
--Swara taking an initiative for a kiss..what better way to make up for the mahaan swaradevi who put her love last behind all other relations in the series. The scene was wonderfully set...gave me Goosebumps reading it... I thought the last kissing scene of amaranthine was the most romantic scene written by you but now not sure ...
--Sanskars forthright denial of the proposal, uttaras sudden relevation of how she knows her friends are going to be her future bhabhis, raginis sweet way of buying gifts for swara, swaras collapse on realising she is set to destroy sanskar(the most damakedaar sequence with the update ending there),laksh-swara camaraderie, swara-sanskar with sparks between them...the list will go on and on ...
--The conversation between sudhir and sujatha proved you are not only master of romance and plots but good at humour too.
--I love reading long updates and your warning "less swasan does not deter your readers...
--Nynu and above everything your work inspires me to write ...i am not good at it but i very badly want to pen my thoughts while i am reading yours. I am sure that is what a great writer does...inspire others...
Also want to thank Talia for her beautiful insights to the plot...I love reading the comments on my favourite works...
Now i will start being restless till i get the next update...hope the story continues forever.
lots of love
Veena.
My apologies to all my readers. I have had a relapse of my asthma attack and it is a liitle more severe. I have almost completed the update, a final read to check timelines is pending. I will do the same and update as soon as possible, my health permitting. ( Sometimes, the attack blows over in a couple of days, if I am lucky).
Hopefully I can update in a couple of days.LoveNyna
Originally posted by: blindassassin
Wondering whether you are a neonatalogists too!!! Jokes apart thank you darling for your kind wishes, concern and advices... And I am enjoying every minute of motherhood this time...he is my second nynu.First time it was all worries and anxiety..second time it is much more enjoyable.😆We are a bit more mature and hence has more tolerance and patience to sleep deprivation, nappy changing and potty duty..But I am more concerned about you now. This wheezing has been troubling you since last week, yet you haven't been to a doctor..Being an asthmatic myself I know how terrible it is..Are you on antibiotics or only inhaler? Please take rest nynu , updates can wait...please don't feel obliged to reply.Take complete rest and get well soon.LoveVeena.
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