Originally posted by: krishuuu
Nyna...darling...
Marvellous chapter 10A dear...thoroughly enjoyed it...i didnot actually missed swasan because they need this space to sort their minds..im happy we got glimpse of ragsan and swalak...i always adored this pair as friends...loved their little conversation...
To tell the truth, I love being surprised by my readers, when they say that they enjoyed the chapter despite not having much of SwaSan (I am always a little afraid that being a FanFic, it naturally means lots of the OTP, so when updates not featuring them are done, I am apprehensive). RagSan and SwaLak - I love them when they are friends, nice true friends not that one of them secretly harbouring love for the other.😆
Ragini- sanky and swara- laksh..all are quite secretive in term of emotion and their feelings..coz of their different pasts..which made them who they are...and sharing what they both went through few minutes earlier would be difficult...as they all are confused with this changing relationships...glad ragsan talked and everthing is clear...swalak silent support was good to read...
Nailed it on the head - each has a baggage and there are differences in upbringing, so this is absolutely new to them and both the intensity of their feelings and the uncertainty of the other person makes it difficult for them to understand the depth of their own emotions.
Trio..shekhar..sahil and T3..hehe.you know im called t3 in my house...due to my position in family..third child...i actually smiled reading it..i liked his name alot..difficult to memorise but it has weight...soo this part actually made me think so much...u said we will have four new enteries..i guess we have to start guessing the rapists...im starting to roundoff them...if one of them is actualy the culprit...this part really intrigued me...their past...all influencial people..must have helped and protected eachother after that incident...im sure..waiting for others too..guy u mentioned with sahil judge is one of them...im pretty sure..other????hmmm
T3 - seems my updates have quite some coincidences (Sanskaar Swara first kiss / not a kiss on your birthday), nick name of one of my characters, same as yours😉 Thanks for liking his name, to confess, his name took me quite some time (I changed if more than four times before settling on this and I also asked if I was the only one who spends time researching the names - each time I have to introduce a character - I have to have a name, tentative date / year of birth, a brief history, which is why my browser has all those weird search strings😆 No further answers, I love all your guesses.🤗
Sudhir part was soo sweet..he actually wanted a glimpse of uttara...awww..nynu..let him see her plzzz...sujju is too funny...but i believe she hides her actually self or something behind these stupid talk...she would be much wiser than she shows..ifeel it..
Sudhir was sweet, right. But no, he will not get a glimpse of her, destiny, or rather me is not going to allow that😈 Sujata is the entertainment queen.😆
Overall it was good..i could not guess anything about future...im sure part B..will bring some twist..
Part B not so much as Part C/D - which is when this book comes to an end, the rest of the story in book II
Ok dear..when will that car be found...???n i tried to read initial update..to guess on whose birthday the incident happened...i could not guess correctly...kavita i think..u tell me...i got confused in dates...n it was difficult to find updates using mobile...it happened on nov 18 or 19...i remember...uttu it is not..shewas born later..ragini was born in 1992 i guess...so she is not...it kavi..i believe...can ugive us birth day chart of all...???if its no problem...im mixing timelines...years went fast...
Secrets are slowly tumbling, I am setting the stage - the king / vazir / senapati versus the pawns. Car will be found soon - in this chapter itself. Regarding timelines, will do so soon.
Waiting for next..let see what next update holds...
Next update - hopefully within this week
Love u
Talia
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