God loved it Nyna it was amazing to the least, the way you described Uttara's plight was absolutely right we girl go through this kind of situation so many time when our intentions are misinterpreted. So Swara remembers something significant this time, which will make her more miserable than she was before. I am worried what will be her reaction and her behaviour after coming back to conscience.
LoveRia
Originally posted by: dreamy.tiara
Res...😉
PS: I am very disappointed Nyna. I missed so many beautiful updates because you no longer PM when you update. Now you too would have to wait for my unres..😛PPS: Don't worry, my upset would subside sooner.PPPS: You are a terrific writer. 😊- Tia
Originally posted by: iamreader
Dear Nyna,I'll try to unres the running chapters ASAP, at least in brief. next 4.5 months are gonna be crazy for me.😭Take your time, we are all going to be around. And what is up that almost the whole of this year (what remains) is going to be carzy?Coming to chapter 9/1, I'm glad Ritu's chapter has come to an end, apparently (you know, you can make him return. But I don't wish him to.) And it was a relief his obsession hadn't take the ugly turn, that would be one kind of win from AP's side.To tell the truth, I decided to go this way, not because of AP (I mentioned that for another reason, will be clear in 9 or 10) but because I did not want it to end with him attempting to molest Uttara. That is the worst to happen to a girl, and you can imagine the guilt trip it would entail for everyone (Swara and Ragini were aware of Uttara being troubled with Ritu). So I wrote it out this way, which is possible, mistaking friendliness is quite easy especially when one is already in love with the other. Oh yes, his chapter is closed, mostly.I read your reply to Lucky. surely Google is a lifesaver. My all works have heavy contributions from that search engine. But you really put the best use of all information.Google and Wiki - I seem to be always on those pages😆😆 I agree that everything that Google returns might not be 100% accurate, but is quite reliable. And for distances, names, routes, nothing beats Google Maps😊Finally, Swara could remember what she was supposed to do, befriending Laksh. But she was intrigued by Sanskar from the very first sight. At least Harsha didn't have any plan to hurt Laksh or Sanskar. He did good to Adarsh in one way, he was literally in a prison earlier.Swara remembers part of what she was supposed to do but since she does not remember why, she is now quite confused, which would be borne out in the rest of the chapter. How could she not be intrigued by Sanskaar?Harsha has no intentions of hurting anyone - none of the children would be harmed if he had his way, but destiny had Kavita killed. Yes, he did do good to Adarsh.I guess Sanskar would know the truth really soon, probably half truth. Book one is coming to an end. With Swasan's separation? though they were not TOGETHER in actual sense? or are you going to reveal that truth after Sanskar's realisation of love or something?Without giving much away, in Book 1, since we are almost at the end, no great truths are going to be revealed, though facts would come to light which would really not be the complete truth but enough to force them to see and interpret things differently. So that would answer the questions, rather give rise to more. And yes they are not together in the sense of being lovers, but are on each other's side.The truth is not one single thing, right there are a number of truths spanning two generations and two decades, it will slowly start stumbling out, all it needs is one small break.I'm thinking of endless possibilities. I wonder which way are you going to walk. Waiting for the next part.Well, the next part is already sketched out, just fleshing out, hopefully will update soon. And you might get a hint as to which direction I am going to take😉love,Dyuti
Originally posted by: krishuuu
Hey nyna...
I'm feeling horrible coz I'm late...sorry...I know u will understand...Talia sweetheart, do not feel horrible, you are not late, just fashionably on time. And nobody understand being late than me (and my delayed updates😆)Coming straight to chapter 8C and D which were awesome...These parts had story of most characters of this ff..nearly all appeared...right from sudhir to kaveri..maheswaris..etc loved it whole..I tried to keep all the characters introduced so far, and ended up a few new ones too😆, but then I am happy, for it is nice to know that readers like the stories about other characters (that is the thing scary about FanFiction, one is not sure if the readers likes reading about anyone but the OTP😕)sudhir: I just don't understand it been a while since kavita's death why sudhir suspects sanky...hopefully if he starts looking somewhere else he will found out something...regarding case...Sudhir is as frustrated as you are, but think from his POV, Sanskaar has his sweetheart killed, he was not very interested in Swara and all of a sudden becomes pally with Swara - so his police mind is on an overdrive. But he did stop suspecting Sanskaar though he still has his doubts on Swara. He will find something out, though how good it will be???😉Swasan: after kiss they were awkward.. but this new thing made me panicky when swara asked about keystroke logger...sanky is smart and he found out so much..I'm scared that he will start hating swara after knowing her identity...till now he is not sure...due to swara lost memory...and his growing feeling for her..but there are chances. ..fingers crossed for his reaction...and their fate...Aaahhh...the kiss that was almost a kiss? the new development is going to drive the wedge of suspicion for now. As to his reaction and their fate, a hint in Chapter 10 (not in 9, enjoy the events in this one before the storm in 10😉)Raglak: atleast one love story started...I'm glad...both raglak showed how they felt for each other...enjoyed their parts...light and soothing...RagLak - yes their love story has started, though Laksh will be impulsive as usual, Chapter 9 (I so love teasing you😳)Uttara:She is sweet soul..I'm worried for her...but glad she took advice of swaragini seriously and maintained distance from rituraj...but he finally managed to convince her to ride with him in his car...awesome twist...sudhir will save her..I'm sure...Do not worry, I could not allow anything to happen to her, she is safe though shaken.Others:DP...ram..adharsh..debo...kaveri...anurima ..harsh..eetc. .all their parts were classic and had vital importance in story progress...totally loved it...even Harsh cars, which they have stolen, slowly resurfaced. ..swara's birth day part and kasturi curse part to her daughter was amazingly penned...Harsha's car, that Tata Indica, will now change the flow😉Your are masterfully skilled writer nyna...I love your story style...And I love you and your comments, I do look forward for them and your conspiracy theories, how come you did not have any this time?Read 9 too..will reply asapTake your time, I shall try to update ASAPLove u...Keep writing..and entertainingWill keep writing.Talia
Originally posted by: kojagorimalik
Hello nyna diii,
Phew atlast I completed my reading till chapter 9 part 1...takes took much of time...yet worth it...
Loved all the parts...
Its awesome...
I m completely bowled out by your style of writing ...
Completely clean bowled...
Waiting for next chapter and pls pls pls *puppy face* pls PM me...
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