Nyna sweetheart...
What an awesomely brilliant update..8B...well for one reason only swasan..but i will come to it in end...
Soo starting from sudhir though I like him..I never expected him to be this stupid...two years after kavi death he still believes sanky is involve..oh gosh..finally he realized n backed off..but plzz do keep following uttu ..I feel she is in danger...
How sad, but then it is his job to suspect everyone, and if you see from his point of view - Sanskaar was very reluctant to help Swara and now appears to have completely forgotten Kavita and does not even seem interested in finding out about her, so he had to do something to close his suspicions. He will keep have Uttara followed - the end of this Chapter tells you that.
Swaragini encounter with goons was best thing...rise in eve teasing incidents..swara reaction was necessary and apt..i liked how she used all her knowledge of kalaripayuttu on those goons..
Ragini concern and love for swara increased too..which was something good...
Swara had to use her knowledge right? And yes, I too support eve teasers to be beaten up. And it helped turn Ragini completely around. But there is one more impact this would have - more in Chapter 10😉
Swasan garden scene...I didnot understand the purpose of that scene. .May be to show swara is affected that sanky still loves kavi..or miss her..but he did not give answer..he himself is confused with his change feelings...I think...
There are a number of reasons - one it is a filler😳 Two, it lets the reader know that Ranjit kaka is no longer regular constant presence, though Lalita di and Chottu are. Third, as you guessed, it is to let the readers know that Sanskaar is slowly moving on, though he is not ready to admit it and take tangible steps - note that he has made no effort to convert it to a home, for him it is still a house which Kavita should have made it into a home. And last... cannot give my secrets in explicit detail😉
Swara presentation part was good..she really had made her position in company strong with her sheer hard work...gaurav teased her n her secret revealed that was hilarious..she didnot know nalini and gaurav are couple...I loved this part...
I was actually thinking that this filler scene might not be liked, but when I wrote it out, it sort of gelled with my own office experiences, I have has some really fun filled moments and this part reminded me of those times, so I let it stay. And it has turned out to be quite a liked scene😳
Uttu..I like how she shared her thought n doubts to swaragini..I hate when like serials women keep everything to themselves. atleast inform 1 or 2 close friend or loved one...she exactly did that ..advice given to her will indeed help her...
Do not get me started on serials, I mean in real life if you have good friends, you end up sharing so much with them, imaginary fears, real hopes and fanciful dreams. So Uttara had to share with them and their advice was good too. It is reasonable that she does not share with her brothers, they would have turned into overprotective guards, but then when she listened to her friends, it helped her, quite a lot.
Coming to my favourite part...swasan playful banners and that sweet peck...I'm in love with this scene...atleast now swara should declare her love for him..she is very straightforward after all...
U know what I love about this scene..that it happened on 15 Feb..I'm acting all stupid. .but it's my birth date which made me excited. .hehe..sorry for my stupidity and craziness. ..
And you just made me feel less guilty, guess it was a nice birthday present for you. Swara is a very straight forward person, so as you said she should be the first to confess but then life and her memories will turn treacherous. They still have to battle their own inner demons and the external storms that threaten their families and MEPL.
I just cherish this part very much ..now super excited for next part..update soon..
I took so long to reply, that I have already completed Chapter 8 - both parts 3 and 4 are posted.
Love and hugs
Talia
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