Originally posted by: lucky.m
Nynu...
So I took my time ... went through update peacefully ..and I loved it .I don't think readers mind to have other characters being established other than only swasan , when the tale is being woven with such precision.I didn't mind not having swasan here specifically because whether be it part of Swara Sanskaar or swasan ...it so nicely gelled and other characters and tale is intriguing enough to keep us engrossed so you don't have to worry at all
That is such a relief, this whole chapter and to be truthful, the whole story has so many threads, that weaving them and ensure a decent amount of focus on SwaSan is getting to be difficult. I guess this is where I simply underestimated the attention the other characters demanded. And now, at the rate I an introducing new characters, my story is turning out to be slightly different from what I originally envisaged too. So it is a relief knowing that you found it engrossing enough.
To Start of with .. house of cards siggy ..*sigh* ..I loved it ...the blending was so good⭐️ Then the quote by Haraki Murakami ... your apt quotes juts add more depth to the update .his 'Kafka on Shore' had been on my list for long,
I am quite proud of the siggy - 😳😳 especially with fact that the masks were added by me in PS - I am pleased as punch and am grinning away like a cheshire cat I love quotes and I so search for them, which I think gives the readers a hint as to what the chapter might deal with. I actually want to read the book this quote was taken from. Once I finish book 1 of this FF, I plan to take a break from updating and catch up reading - online and offline books.
Then Adarsh - Being elder always come with tag of being responsible and dotting to-parents every words I guess.. Young ones always have lineage and that rebellious streak which clearly stood in update and Adarsh's plight could be connected very well , but I am gald one way that lead him to rekindle his relation with pari ..It was a feel good part .😳.and I am sure Adarsh will take up Harsha's offer .😊
Trust me, I know that quite well, being the eldest is great in some ways though you are always held liable for what your younger siblings do. It was nice, his rekindling or rather the kindling of the relationship with Pari - I might give his story a little closure - poor guy had a raw deal. Regarding the offer, part 2 deals with it, should manage to post it tonight.
When Arunima referred Swara as Maasi .. such a touching moment 😭..and thoughts of Swara around Sanskaar .all underlying currents could be felt .Laksh and Swara's equation gave such a warm and fuzzy feeling and 'baloo '😆, office part , good fun😆.I am sure Swara will fare well ..and that mention of sunny boys lashes☺️..God! How much I love him ..😳
Swara was convinced she had been forgotten, that despite what everyone says, she was never a part of that group. So Arunima calling her a sister, was indeed a gift. Sanskaar, Laksh, Ragini and Swara - lot more confusion, I think that when they finally realise who loves whom, it would be on a very sure ground. Office part, given that we all work in offices, I thought we could relate to it. It is such light hearted moments that make me glad that I work for a times the politics get so dirty that I am tempted to call quits. Sunny's lashes - for a change it is his lashes that seem to be so alluring rather than the FL's, Sunny yet has to realise what his feeling her for him to start admiring Swara😉
Then Uttara .. Hmm birthday celebration , Rituraj..I am waiting for more threads to tied ..
over all and few to be loosened .Over all absolutely loved the update ..Super engaging
Uttaras' tale - that is another one which I plan to give some closure to in Book 1 itself, I do not like the line I would be taking but then I let it be after quite a few deliberations with myself. Let us see how it proceeds.
Love
Lucky
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