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Now when the dots have started connecting I am really in awe with the depth of research you have gone through for this story. Every character is so well defined that I sometimes feel as if I am seeing a movie instead of reading a chapter of a book after a considerable period of time. Good to see that two girls are sure of what tey want from their life. Ragini is in love with Lakshya and Swara with Sanskar still both are jealous of each other. Good to see how subtly you have portrayed the new found feeling of love and jealousy. I was not sure how Swara's character will develop given her life before memory loss has been one of an ascetic, totally aloof from the world of emotions and feelings. she has been trained as a warrior to fight.
Good to see Janhvi and Harsha loved her. in a true sense, she was their daughter, there has been none for her other than them, though for them she was just an Ahuti like her name means but they have come a long way from their initial plan. I am really amazed how Harsha has accepted her as she is the constant reminder of what he has lost. She carries the blood of the person who has destroyed his sister and ruined his life.
I somehow feel that Jahnvi is the long lost daughter of Mr Singhaniya. Good that you put Sahil in different generation altogether, I wouldn't have liked him near my Shona.
I feel both Kaveri and Sharmistha were involved in Janaki's case that was the reason their mother's left both of them. If this would be true It will make me hate female race as (How can they support such a heinous crime).
Sudhir is the son of the person who was involved in Janki's case that is quite clear. The only thing that I don't understand is how everyone who sees Swara always remembers Janki. how many similarities both possess. I would love to see the face off of Annapurna Maheshwari and Swara as I somehow feel that would be the final battle.
I am hating few characters even when the whole story is yet to unfold. Annapurna Maheshwari, Sharmistha and Kaveri are one of those few characters.
Love to see how frustrated Sanskar is with Swara's closeness with Lakshya. He is not ready to share her with anyone even for friendship, he wishes for all her attention. That was kind of cute. Uttara is a lovely girl I just hope she will not get hurt in this Revenge game, she doesn't deserve any hurt.
I am contemplating what will happen when all truth will come out. Will Swara be able to love a person whose is the reason of her destruction. From childhood whatever she has gone through was because of these people after knowing that will she be able to forgive them? If Janki is her mother then will she be able to accept anyone of them? she has suffered a lot due to these people whether she is Janki's daughter or not it doesn't change the fact. Even if she is not Janki's Daughter she has been ruined for her cause.
What will Sanskar do will he be able to stand against his own family and friends for Swara.
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