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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 7 years ago

#371

Nyna baby...

Im very late...sorry...no excuse..im just getting lazier ...

Chapter 17 was indeed stupendious...though less swasan as u already informed..but swasan scnes has enough power and charm to drive me crazy...

Right from start it was amazingly penned update...i liked how sudhir and ranjit deduced the possibilities of kavita aduction and murder...reason is still veiled...we have to wait alot to know actual reason...

I likes swara meeting with arunima ...she found someone close to family now..with whom she is comfortable...uttara sudden entry was a shock..im glad she did not reveal much ..n kumudini manage to change topic on time...or else swara would be curious...

I likes the way u presented paper news of MSS acheiving n gaining heights...

Last swasan part was amazing ..they have formed quite bond and understanding...swara in a way asked about him n he revealed much but got rude ...n left...loved how he return and apologised...waitingfor next now..like crazy...

Love u

Talia

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Juanita

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Posted: 7 years ago

#372

Hi Nyna dear,

No sadly I am not here to comment on the recent updates. I have decided I need to reread the entire FF.. And boy it was an delightful read.. I just finished chapter 3 and I would love to continue read more.. But I think I have to comment about how much Kavita death affected Me..the first time I read it I was more curious about swara that I kind of ignored Kavita.. But whole rereading the emotions I felt for Kavita and her untimely death made me take a short break and let you know that you have penned it down very beautifully.. I could feel the sadness throughout.. Really amazing and wonderful chapter it was dear.. Now I go and read the rest of the updates.

Love

Nita

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Juanita

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Posted: 7 years ago

#373

Hi Nyna dearest..

How come you are so awesomely talented.. Well finally read chapter five.. My first time reading it and it took inhumane efforts to come and type an comment namely my famous blubber instead of reading chapter six.. That how much I get involved when I start reading your works.. Because you dear are an amazingly talented person..

I love loved chapter five.. It was awesome.. I really like the growing bond between Swara and sanskar.. Feel the pain of Kavita parents.. And every part of the update was too good.. I like their sleeping routine and I really really loved the update Nyna dear.. But unlike you I can't very well express it but just know it was splendid and my only regret being the fact I only have two updates left to read..

Love

Nita

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

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Posted: 7 years ago

#374

Well just letting you know the comment was meant for the first half of chapter five in page two.. Now off to read the next half..

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#375

Originally posted by: dreamy.tiara
Dear Nyna 🤗

A lovely update indeed.

Sanskar is already conflicted about his feelings for Swara, and with her memory loss he can't even be rude to her. And Swara is such a sweetheart, but she really cannot contain her curiosity😆. I wonder how Sanskar would react if Uttara tells him that she knows his little secret.

I am really nervous what revelations the investigations of Kavita's murder might bring forth, it might break Swara-Sanskar's hearts.

Patiently waiting for the next one.😊

- Tia

Dear Tia,

Yes, Sanskaar is already in quite a bit of confusion, regarding his feeling towards Swara - and it will continue for quite some time. And how he would react when Uttara tells hims that she knows - spoiler alert, it will not be in the best of circumstances, so it will not go well.

Ahh - the investigations into Kavita's murder - well any relationship has to be tested and so would theirs, for a lot of skeletons could come tumbling.

Next update, hoping it to be soon, a day or two.

love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#376

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Nyna baby...
Im very late...sorry...no excuse..im just getting lazier ...

Chapter 17 was indeed stupendious...though less swasan as u already informed..but swasan scnes has enough power and charm to drive me crazy...

SwaSan do that to us, right, drive us absolutely crazy.

Right from start it was amazingly penned update...i liked how sudhir and ranjit deduced the possibilities of kavita aduction and murder...reason is still veiled...we have to wait alot to know actual reason...

Sudhir and Ranjit - seems to be a correct decision on my part to summarise the whole events and possibilities till date - the reason, I think is quite silly but then any reason to kill someone must be stupid, most of the time

I likes swara meeting with arunima ...she found someone close to family now..with whom she is comfortable...uttara sudden entry was a shock..im glad she did not reveal much ..n kumudini manage to change topic on time...or else swara would be curious...

Arunima and Swara - nice bonding also introduced Uttara. Uttara is a Maheshwari, they know the importance of discretion.
Swara already feels she is a burden on Sanskaar and is a bit jealous of Kavita, if she realises that she lived and Kavita died, she would have quite a tough time, but she will come to know, soon.

I likes the way u presented paper news of MSS acheiving n gaining heights...

Masterstroke, on my part (I am patting my back and doing a red Indian dance in joy.) BTW - you are the only one who noted and commented on it🤗

Last swasan part was amazing ..they have formed quite bond and understanding...swara in a way asked about him n he revealed much but got rude ...n left...loved how he return and apologised...

Their relationship is currently a mixture of confusion, some amount of liking, a little respect for each other and absolutely no clue about what they actually feel for each other more in the case of Sanskaar😆)

waitingfor next now..like crazy...

Tonight or tomorrow - hopefully.

Love u
Talia

Dear Talia,

Replied in blue above,

love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#377

Originally posted by: NitaReid
Hi Nyna dear,

No sadly I am not here to comment on the recent updates. I have decided I need to reread the entire FF.. And boy it was an delightful read.. I just finished chapter 3 and I would love to continue read more.. But I think I have to comment about how much Kavita death affected Me..the first time I read it I was more curious about swara that I kind of ignored Kavita.. But whole rereading the emotions I felt for Kavita and her untimely death made me take a short break and let you know that you have penned it down very beautifully.. I could feel the sadness throughout.. Really amazing and wonderful chapter it was dear.. Now I go and read the rest of the updates.

Love

Nita

Dear Nita,

Take all the time you want, I am actually thrilled to bits that you have decided to re read the entire FF, till date (gives me a great high)😳Kavita's death, well it should affect us, she was a lovely person and would have remained as lovely memories for Sanskaar if only the serial... but then the creatives ruined the entire serial, forget about the Kavita track. It was quite emotional for me to pen too, so reward is reading that it affected you also.

love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#378

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Hi Nyna dearest..

How come you are so awesomely talented.. Well finally read chapter five.. My first time reading it and it took inhumane efforts to come and type an comment namely my famous blubber instead of reading chapter six.. That how much I get involved when I start reading your works.. Because you dear are an amazingly talented person..

I love loved chapter five.. It was awesome.. I really like the growing bond between Swara and sanskar.. Feel the pain of Kavita parents.. And every part of the update was too good.. I like their sleeping routine and I really really loved the update Nyna dear.. But unlike you I can't very well express it but just know it was splendid and my only regret being the fact I only have two updates left to read..

Love

Nita

Nita dear,

@bold above - and I am 😳😳😳

I have told you umpteen times that your comments are not blabber. But even if I concede to you and accept it then do know that it is a one the highest compliment I can get, my update has affected you so emotionally😊

Chapter 5 - was long and appears to be the start of my long updates. But then when you say you love it, it makes every minute spent worthwhile. Swara and Sanskaar, it will be a very slow development, with confusion predominating, both have their own baggage and are really not sure how to be around each other. Spoiler alert, for a change, it will be Swara who will fall first😆

Do not worry about updates, I should be able to update part 2 of Chapter 7 soon.

love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#379

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Well just letting you know the comment was meant for the first half of chapter five in page two.. Now off to read the next half..

Will wait for the comments🤗

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#380

Dear lovely readers,

I have updated part 2 of Chapter 7 on page 3 and the link is below:

Chapter 7 part 2

And I am still sticking to my resolution, so no pms.😊 However, I would love to know your thoughts, guess or suggestions.😳

love,

Nyna

PS - one more part and chapter 7 is done. I still have to correct typos for both parts 1 and 2, will do them once part 3 (final one) is done.😊

Edited by Nynaeve - 7 years ago

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