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Here I un-res all my previous posts.
Hi Nyna,
Finally I caught up with all the updates (except the footnotes in detail)
I feel like I am reading a thriller novel with all the plotting happening in between the lines.
I find Sanskaar very heroic here. Not that I didn't find find him heroic in the serial or the other fan Fictions, it's just something very extraordinary of a person he has become for me in this story. A prudent businessman mourning the loss of his lover while trying to logically solve the puzzle of her death coming across a stranger who lost her memories. That's a lot for someone to handle. I think if I had to go through that, I am sure to have a headache from the skull splitting into pieces.
I don't know what to feel for Swara. When I read about her losing memory and depending on these strangers to keep her alive, I felt pity for her. But when I read about her ever alert manner, her scrambled memories, I am scared of her. I never imagined I would be scared of this character called Swara Bose. Yes she was a fighter in different way. May be she is misled in this quest for revenge, it doesn't lessen the fact of this dangerous weapon Swaha is. She might have forgotten her memories but Swaha resides in her.
The nurse thinks if Swara has a threat from Maheshwaris. I do see a plot over there where the elder Maheshwaris might be involved and the history repeating itself. I am starting to think the minute Swara realises Swaha's purpose in life, she might become a threat to Sanskaar.
I don't understand, or lost between the lines, how Jahnavi and Harsha are related. They are in construction industry. So does she have a different story for revenge on Maheshwaris?
At this point, I just don't trust Amar and Sudhir. Sanskaar was right. There's a sure conspiracy happening between them and each has their own conspiracy unknown to the other.
Why do I feel Ragini is not just mourning the loss of her friend? I find her on the sidelines and Ragini is not a character you would put on sidelines. Same goes with Lakshya but given our "bias", I can live with that. But Ragini, no way!
There's a lot happening that's not stated here despite the 10k word length updates. A complex yarn to be unwound carefully. A war spanning generations and multiple families brewing on the backdrop and feelings changing with every revelation.
If this was truly a thriller novel, it would be on the best sellers' shelf!
Cheers
Sharon
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