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blindassassin

@blindassassin

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Posted: 7 years ago

#241

Nyna

What a great day for swasan fans. Floods during a draught...You, lucky, shreetha ..Wondering who is going to surprise us next. Was very badly missing swasan and watching old episodes in voot..And reminiscing those golden moments.

Wonderful update nynu...Sanskar s apprehensions, swaras courage, uttaras bubbliness everything was sweet. The story has many hidden stories ,unfolding each one will be a wonderful experience.

And your brilliance will make it all the more beautiful. Waiting for next update.

Love, veena.

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Zephyr8

@Zephyr8

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#242

Such a superb update. Loved the way the story is unfolding. I was wondering when you'll continue the story. Looking forward to reading further. Thank you for the PM. Tc.

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Gayathri

@Gayathri93

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Posted: 7 years ago

#243

Hi Nyna dear

It was a lovely update dear.The story is getting more intriguing.I am loving it Do u have any connection with medical field bcoz i was amazed at the way u have written about amnesia.U had wrote it just perfectly dear.

I think Amar and Sudhir know something more which Sanskar do not know.Uttara is a lovely girl.I think she can bond with anyone easily.

I think the car theft had been done by swara and her father and later someone might have attacked them and took the car.

I am loving the swara and sanskar connection.Swara has no problem with sanskar.'s touch .Swara feels some connection with sanskar.

waiting for the next update
lots of luv
gayu

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#244

Hi Nyna,

The Prologue was pleasurable read. The scenery you have described to the minute details is breathtaking. I am sure, some day, I would come back and read this again to experience being there on the balcony.

The mystery surrounding the SwaSan tale is intriguing. I am going to dive into the Chapter 1 right after posting this comment.

Again this reminds me of Amaranthine where the memories remind Sanskaar of his past. The tables are turned here. Sanskaar is the one who stays in her memory even though she forgot her own history. Matters in mind could be forgotten, but the matters of soul stay around long after the time.

Really want to know how the memory loss happened and where are the rest of the cast.

Cheers

Sharon

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#245

Hi Nyna,

Chapter 1 is a lengthy one and a lot is happening. I have given it a quick read. Its like the maha episode of 2 hours long. Lol!

While I will take my time to picturize the timelime with dates and places you have provided, there are a number of emotions flying around. Joy, Fear, Distress, Hope. Too many and they contradict the mood set by the previous scene.

The children are swapped, business deals in exchange, an extraordinaire setting with complex characters. As a reader, Too much Fun!

But as a writer, I must congratulate you for weaving it all together into one update.

Will be back for more.

Cheers

Sharon

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

Trailblazer

+ 19

Posted: 7 years ago

#246

Hi Nyna dear,

I resd few pages back I guess.. But thought I still leave it unres as I want it to be my detail comment.. Not whatever I am typing here now.. It took me quite a few days to read chapter 4.. Not because I wasn't interested but because I was very interested.. I wanted to read it when I could fully concentrate on it.. Since you are such an amazing writer I don't want to miss anything out.. So finally gotten around to read it and as always loved it a lot..

I still can't believe how someone can explain memory loss in such an logical way.. You have done awesome job at it dear.. I am like wow that makes so much sense.. That what makes me love your work a lot more.. Because it amazing and logical..

I am happy Harsha is still alive.. I am interested by his character.. I am dying with curiosity to know about Swara past.. But I will wait.. Love the fact Swara even before knowing him is not affected by his touch.. Soul connection.. Understood Sanskaar dilemma.. Can't wait to read further and comment in detail.. I hope I get around to that soon..

As always if you didn't get what I am trying to say.. You should understand it was me saying I loved it so much..

Love

Nita

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#247

Dear all,

I have been reading your comments over and over again, each time I am stuck in the next chapter, I read your comments and I am so inspired. I have not been able to reply to them as I am trying to balance the updation of this tale, commenting on the FF penned by my lovely pals and, I confess this with a twinge of guilt, meandering into other forums (no not any show, there will never be another OTP for me, just the Writer's Corner, the book talk and chat clubs😳)

Chapter 5, I think should be done by weekend, it is a little lengthy, already at around 9000 words, but I hope I take this as a commitment to myself and aim towards completing it. And being the OCD'ed person that I am , I shall reply to all the comments and then post the update.

Love,

Nyna

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ya ya girl

@Maharani69

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#248

Hey Nyna,

What is this FF about?

Forgive me, I have no idea what Swarangini is.

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: BB10
Hey Nyna,

What is this FF about?

Forgive me, I have no idea what Swarangini is.

Dear T,

Thrilled to see you here. 🤗

Well this is a story where the FL has a memory loss (complete amnesia) and the twists and turns her life takes from that point. And just to spice up things, there would be corporate espionage and a revenge thread in the background😕😕.

The FL and ML are the only OTP I adore - Swara and Sanskaar, from the serial Swaragini. The whole setting is in an AU - no connection to the serial or its plot(s)😆😆

And do not get me started on that serial - it was a story with great potential and a brilliant cast that was mercilessly butchered by pathetic plots and inconsistent characterisation. 😡

If you risk reading it, (I have given a plot summary and the synopsis on the first page) it would be preferable you did it without the baggage of the serial, I would know how appealing it would be to someone not having any clue about the serial (that is the drawback of writing FanFic, there are times, when we would be tempted to skip some details, as the readers could easily visualise the scene). So if a "non-fan" can read and understand, it would be a compliment to the writer😳😳

Best,

Nyna

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ya ya girl

@Maharani69

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#250

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear T,

Thrilled to see you here. 🤗

Well this is a story where the FL has a memory loss (complete amnesia) and the twists and turns her life takes from that point. And just to spice up things, there would be corporate espionage and a revenge thread in the background😕😕.

The FL and ML are the only OTP I adore - Swara and Sanskaar, from the serial Swaragini. The whole setting is in an AU - no connection to the serial or its plot(s)😆😆

And do not get me started on that serial - it was a story with great potential and a brilliant cast that was mercilessly butchered by pathetic plots and inconsistent characterisation. 😡

If you risk reading it, (I have given a plot summary and the synopsis on the first page) it would be preferable you did it without the baggage of the serial, I would know how appealing it would be to someone not having any clue about the serial (that is the drawback of writing FanFic, there are times, when we would be tempted to skip some details, as the readers could easily visualise the scene). So if a "non-fan" can read and understand, it would be a compliment to the writer😳😳

Best,
Nyna

I had to follow you here. 🤗
I like people who give me positive vibes.
I don't watch Indian television and I had to LOL at 'plots'.
I swear they are so effed up. I just loved watching unrealistically real drama on Bigg Boss 10, that's about it.
I will definitely read it and give you a feedback! I am sorry I missed your comment.

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