Originally posted by: lucky.m
Nynu
So I land up finally ..Guess new year came for choomantar act for all of us😆 ..The place has become quite dead ..yet I come here bcos finally I have some time for myself I guess where I have lesiure to read all the updates ..though I have been sneaking in..I oew an proper comment to fics I love
Lucky🤗I have been MIA myself (though I have been sneaking to read the updates quickly, I am so angry with Swara in Fanaa, will rant on that thread😡😡)
So here I am
Chapter 3
I just love the sig you have created for it .. with life and death.I so so love the terrific combinations of black grey red white you have been using 👏.👏⭐️. It just hit me right out hence that takes the crown to start with.
And I am all😳😳😳the sig for Chapter 4 is also predominantly black / white and red but will have a blue tinge - after all it should move to colour now that it could be the start of SwaSan😉😉
Next Architecture and Sanskaar .. absolutely loved the background you have given to it and laced with passion Sanskaar has for lines and art.. it was spelndid to read .. and I can titally imagine Sanskaar as architect ..ok blame on you love for sunny .. he fits every role but young architect😉
My favourite profession (Tere Ghar ke Samne...a BW movie - Dev Anand and Nutan with lovely songs and breezy tale) and my favourite character - explosive combination, right?
Then comes Kavita .. lady I got to give you here. I didn't hate her infact I felt sad for her given my strong feelings for cavity ..Kavita here is lovable , a victim of circumstances .. Gosh! It was painful 😭but my treacherous heart ..Cant imagine Sanskaar being in love for her so I assume he like her ..had been childhood friends, a mutual likability, comfort which he felt it was love because he has not yet experience that strong soul connect which he would feel for Swara ..in future parts I guess .. Hence I keep my cards open on that part.
I could do a red indian dance with joy - Kavita was a risk - Cavity left such a bitter taste, but then I just could not invent another new character. So when her character fills you and other readers with pity, I am quite relieved.
Sanskaar does sort of love her - not the ishq wala love - and now he would be driven to find answers, he feels that he owes her answers.
and the real hero .. whoa .. I love mystery elements you are weaving into tale .. very thrilling and good build of mystery to keep us hooked further. I don't want to strain with theories just sit back and want to watch tale unfold .. but yes I might come up with crazy ones ..once in a while.
Mystery and suspense - well I am trying to - just hope the tale is interesting enough
and how to you guys manage to be accurate with timelines and dates fitting them into tale👏 I fail miserably there ..hence I love that aspect when you guys do that .⭐️⭐️
And do not get me started on the dates, there are times when I am tempted to pull out my hair, I actually have to keep a tracker to track the dates and the days and the months and events (I referred to the moon calendar for a couple of dates😆😆😆) I am only in 2012 and I have to "travel" all the way to 2017- I am so 🤢
Ranted Ranted ..and yes I miss u guys and the forum .. hope we all will be back soon .. golden old days .. *sigh* Miss the fun
Work pressure should ease a bit, and I hope to be here more often. Miss you guys, so much.
Love
Lucky
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