PREJUDICE PARADISE SWARON AND KRIYANSH FF - Page 5

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Please update the next part Reet 😳
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I really like the story so far...please PM me when you update
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Reet update this one too 😳
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Originally posted by: love-kreya

Update as soon as possible



I will try to update ASAP
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Part-4

Bharat:Uss kriya ke sath tu bhi pagal ho gaya hai

Swayam: first time weaklings kuch kar rhe hai... weaklings ki dance team ban ...aur tujhe bhi toh tera talent showcase karne ka chance mil rha hai

Bharat:apne ko in sab mein koi interest nahi hai

Swayam:sidhe sidhe bol tu darta hai

Bharat:main kisi se nahi darta

Swayam:acha ...toh dance team join kyun nahi kar rha hai...sabko pata chalna chahiye ki tu kitna acha dancer hai

Bharat:tujhe lagta sharon aur Rey weakling ki team banne denge

Swayam:haan...kyunki college Rules sabke liye equal hai aur rules ke against koi kuch nhi kar sakta par weaklings ki dance team tab banegi jab tu haan bolega

Bharat: par mera garage ka kya hoga

Swayam:don't worry rehearsal ka time tere according hi hoga

Bharat:aur mujhe koi order nahi dega

Swayam:thik hai ...tujhe koi order nahi dega ab toh team join karega naa

Bharat:haan

Kriya:please neha

Neha:neha not doing dance

Kriya:jhoot mat bolo swayam ne mujhe bataya hai ki tum dance karti ho...please neha humari team join kar lo

Neha:sharon killing Neha

Kriya:kuch nahi karegi woh main hun naa tumhare sath aur...aur swayam the protector of weakling

bhi tumhare sath hai

neha:ok but promising me you save Neha from dazzlers

kriya:promise

Neha:I joining your team

Kriya:thank you

Girl's locker Room

Simmi:aaj tak iss college mein sirf dazzlers ki dance team thi aur woh behan ji weakling dance team bana rhi hai

Rinni:Relax simmi dance team bana rhi hai bani toh nahi hai naa

Simmi:almost uski team ban gayi hai and you know what sharon uski team mein kon hai

Sharon:swayam

Rinni:how do you know

Sharon:dazzlers ke against kuch ho rha ho aur swayam usme participate naa kare aisa toh ho hi nahi sakta hai

Simmi :hume kuch toh karna hoga

Sharon:kuch nahi karna hai...dazzlers ko dance mein koi beat nahi kar sakta so why do we waste time on that behan ji and her team...sochna toh uss swyam ke bare mein hai .usne jo kal kiya hai...

Simme:kya kiya usne

Sharon:usne...nothing important

Kriya:yes bharat aur Neha dono maan gaye ab hume sirf ek dancer chahiye

Swayam:woh bhi mil jayega but I think humare pass jo team hai hume uske sath rehearsal start karni chahiye

Kriya: Rehearsal hall

Swayam:no we can't use rehearsal hall

Kriya:why ...tumhe bhi lagta hai ki rehearsal hall un dazzlers ka hai

Swayam:rehearsal hall college ki dance teams ka hai aur abhi tak humari dance team puri nahi hui hai so we can't rehearsal in rehearsal hall

Kriya:ok toh hum rehearsal kahan karenge

Swayam:main kuch arrange karta hun

Kriya:cool

Kriya(in mind):bas kuch din aur Reyansh singhania phir main aur meri team rehearsal hall mein tumhare samne rehearsal karenge aur tum kuch bhi nahi kar sakoge.

RDX OFFICE

Swayam:sir aapne bulaya mujhe

Rdx:yes swayam ...Humare college mein bahut se event hone wale like dance fest,footloose,election etc and I think sharon our cultural secretary uske liye akele yeh sab manage karna difficult ho jayega .she needs a assistant.and I think tum assistant cultural secretary ke liye perfect so Are you interested

swayam: definitely sir

Rdx:congratulation swayam new assistantc ultural secretary of st. Louis

Swayam:thank you sir

Swayam(in mind):congratulation sharon ab yeh weakling ke sath rhne ke alwa tumhare pass aur koi option nahi hai

Rehearsal hall

Rohit:hi sharon

Sharon: what the hell are you doing here?

Rohit:relax sharon hum apni problems baad mein short out kar sakte hai abhi hume un weakling ka kuch karna hoga dance team bana rhe hai woh ...humare equal aane try kar rhe hai

Sharon:humare?... don't worry woh tumhare equal kabhi nahi aa sakte ...unke liye tumhare jitna girna ... Impossible

Rohit:mind your language sharon

Sharon:get lost

Rohit:main sirf...

Sharon:I SAID GET LOST

Rohit:aur agar nahi gaya toh...apne so called best friend and body guard se meri complaint karogi but I don't think so ki woh tumhari help karne ke liye yahan aa sakta hai because aajkal toh woh kisi aur ka body guard bana hua hai

Sharon:tumhe handle karne ke liye mujhe kisi ki jarurat nahi hai

Rohit:really ...so handle me

He step closer to her

Sharon:stay away from me

Rohit:come on sharon

He tried to touched her and she slapped him

Rohit:you...bloody bitch

He raise his hand to slap her but swayam caught his hand .

Rohit:leave me...it is none of your business

Swayam:It is my business .

Rohit:yeh koi weakling nahi hai jise tu yahan protect karne aa gaya hai

Swayam:iss duniya ek tu hi toh hai jiske liye dazzler aur weakling bhi ek ho jate hai.aur tut oh iska live example bhi dekh chukka hai shayad tu bhool gaya hai Hotel paradise...yaad aaya

Rohit:I will see you both

He left

Sharon:whats your problem...I can handle him

Swayam:tumhe school mein mannars nahi shikhe the ...jab koi tumhari help karta hai toh uss thanks kehte hai

Sharon:what help...maine kaha tumse help karne ko...i don't need your help..aur usme aur tume difference kya hai tum dono ek jaise toh ho

Swayam:tum...tum mujhe use compare kar rhi ho...you know that ki usne kya kiya tha

Sharon:aur tumne kya kiya ...kal tumne bhi khud ko mujh par force kiya

Swayam:kal maine kuch galat nahi kiya tha

Sharon:oh really tumne forcefully mujhek...mujhe kiss kiya aur woh galat nahi tha

Swayam:yeh sab tumne start kiya tha

Sharon:you mean agar kisi ladki se tumhari fight hoti hai toh tum khud ko us par force karoge jaise kal tumne mujhe kiss kiya ...next time humari fight hui toh ...toh kya karoge RAPE

Swayam:shut up sharon...you are crossing your limits

Sharon:so get out ...yahan aane ko kisne kaha tha ...mujhe tumhara face dekhne mein koi interest nahi hai

Swayam:but yeh face toh tumhe daily dekhna padega...after all I am new assistant cultural secataory

Sharon:what...it is not possible

Swayam:ask RDX

Sharon:RDX sir pagal ho gaye hai kya

Swayam:ask him and iss face ko dekhne ki adat daal lo

Sharon:I just hate you

Swayam:I hate you too tumhare sath rhna iss world ki sabse badi punishment hai

Sharon:so get ready for your punishment

Swayam:and you... you should change your lipstick ...I don't like its flavor

Sharon:what...I hate you I hate you I hate you

Swayam:I love it ...you are great RDX

Rey bumped into kriya

Rey:are you blind

Kriya:sorry

Rey:do one thing ...tum daily mujhe ek sorry ka message kar diya karo kyun ki mistake karna tumhari hobby hai

Kriya:aur tum apne forehead par likh walo The Reyansh is rudest person in this world ...humesha rudely baat karte ho

Rey: so stop following me jahan jaata hun wahan aa jati ho kabhi car mein , rehearsal hall mein, I guess tum dehradun se Mumbai bhi mujhe follow karke aayi ho

Kriya:aap itne bhi important nahi ho ki main aapko follow karu...infact I think aap follow kar rhe ho

Rey:ok we will see kon kise follow karta hai

Kriya:we will see

Rey:kriya cockroach

Kriya:kya kahan hai cockroach

Rey:tumhare piche

Kriya:universe ji help me

Rey:tumhare pass aa rha hai

Kriya:shit

She hugged him

Kriya:kahan gaya cockroach

Rey:pata toh yeh karna tha ki kon kis ko follow kar rha hai but tum toh gale hi pad gayi

Kriya:what

Rey:I know I know...reyansh singhaniya ka charm hi aisa hai

Kriya:liar ?...jhoot bola

Rey:woh kya kehte hai...everything fair in love and war and this is a war

Kriya:war ...war toh footloose mein hogi ...jo hum jeetenge

Rey:dream on Miss kriya...firstly tum apni team toh complete karo anyways I have a news for you...kal dance team register karwane ki last date hai

Kriya:what...itni jaldi

Rey:ab tumhare liye college ke rules toh change nahi ho sakte agar kal tak tumhe 6th dancer nahi mila toh footloose war ke bare toh bhool hi jao

Kriya:6th dancer ?

Rey:all the best

Kriya:All the best ki jarurat aapko hai

Rey:weaklings ko itna attitude acha nahi lagta hai

Kriya: attitude par toh dazzler's ka copy right hai

Rey:exactly

Kriya:aap...

Rey:6th dancer ...don't you think mere sath time waste karne se acha hai ki tum 6th dancer arrange karo

Kriya:you are so...

Rey:ry:don't waste my time ...bye

In canteen

Kriya:swayam please kuch karo agar 6th dancer nahi mila toh...

Swayam:kal tak 6th dancer kaise milega audition mein bhi koi nahi aaya

Vishakha:dude hum kisi ko bhi 6th dancer bana lete hai aur baad mein use dance sikha denge

Swayam:bad idea...team register karwane ke baad hume firstly dazzlers se compete karna hoga aur uski preparation ke liye humare pass jayada time bhi nahi hoga .hum kaise kisi non dancer ko humare level ka dance nahi sakega

Bharat:maine pehle hi kaha tha dazzlers se panga mat lo...hum toh waise bhi unki hit list mein aa hi gaye hai

Neha:he is right saying

Swayam:6th dancer ke bare mein baad mein sochte hai...atleast hume humari rehearsal start kar deni chahiye

Kriya:kya fayada 6th dancer ke bina team hi register nahi hogi

Swayam:be positive kriya shayad kal tak kuch ho jaye...come on guys lets go

Neha:where doing rehearsal

Swayam:store room

Vishakha:store room?

Swayam:main use saaf karwa diya hai uske alawa aur koi place nahi hai

Store room

Visakha:thik se step kar naa bhatart

Bharat:thik se hi toh kar rha hun

Neha:bharat you doing wrong step

Bharat:tu batayegi mujhe

Swayam:kriya right step btao unhe

Kriya:hum yeh sab kyun kar rhe hai...6th dancer ke bina kuch nahi hoga

Swayam:look kriya kal tak koi nahi tumhari team mein aur aaj hum asa a team rehearsal kar rhe hai.abhi tak sab acha hua hai toh aage bhi acha hi hoga

Kriya:hmm

Amar:coffee

Swayam:thanks Amar ...take a break guys

Neha:Neha showing Right step to bharat

Neha show the step

Bharat:abbe dekh yehi toh step toh kar rha tha

Amar:tum galat step kar rhe ho

Bharat:tu kon hota hai batane wala

Swayam:shut up bharat...right step kya hai amar...show us

Amar:main?

Swayam:haan show us

Amar show the step

Kriyam:6th dancer

Amar:kya

Kriya:please humari team join kar lo

Amar:main kaise

Swayam:you are great dancer ...ek baar dekh kar hi tumne step kar diya

Amar:par

Kriya:don't say tumhe bhi dazzlers se dar lagta hai

Amar:dar toh lagta hai

Vishakha:hum sab hai naa woh dazzler kuch nahi kar payenge

Neha:and swayam also with us savior of weaklings

Amar:ok

Kriya:thank you swayam tumhari positivety ne kaam kar diya

Swayam:actually main khud bahut nervous tha.but at end sab thik ho gaya

Precap:RDX Party

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Posted: 7 years ago
#46
Nice update ...
But kindly that forceful kiss portion is not romantic it kind of come in assault so telling you that
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Posted: 7 years ago
#47
Reet u updated🤗
Coming to update it's Awesome.
I always loved the Tashan between SwaRon and the way u showing it in ur ff is just amazing.👏
I read many wrks and even in films saw Heroine doing bak bak and hero to shut her up kisses her forcefully then in background guitar drum sab bajne lagta hai... thats kind of irritating actually and it can never be justified... nothing heroism in that.
But in ur ff u had written it but written very cleverly, u showed the anger of swayam but in this update u showed a strong girl speaking up and hadkofying 👍🏼
I really liked the way u showed Sharon here(my favourite character strong n loveable and not at all like bechari n rondulu😆 ) She knows how to speak up and tell the person "You are Wrong" And i think swayam also got this msg clear... I'm sure in future coming update you'll defo make swayam to say sorry to her for that( I knw swayam is gem)
Ye Rohit bhaisahab ki kya problem hai... pit k hi manenge kya😆
Swayam become ACS ...He got so happy that he can irritate Sharon more now😛
I'm really looking forward to ur story.
I want to read more n more ... ur my second best writer Officially now⭐️😆( sorry baz is my nmbr one fav.)
Please dear update quickly.
RDX party ...I so want to read rdx party in ur imagination as i'm loving your story, updates and your writing.
PLEASE UPDATE😳
Edited by Anu_TanHa - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#48
Awesome update like every bit of the story
U r a mind blowing writer
Swaron tashan wala conversation was amezing and the dialogue swayam the savior was great
Want regular update of all ur story
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Posted: 7 years ago
#49
U updated...
Update was awesome
Tashan btw swaron
Rude Rey
Saviour swayam
6th dancer Identified
Continue sooon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Update 😛 I want to read RDX party...I can't wait 😳
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