PREJUDICE PARADISE SWARON AND KRIYANSH FF - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
Thanks for update .
But honestly swaron part felt like filler to me. I exlected more, though liked swayam teasing and irritating Sharon but still it was not proper for me. I hope didn't hurt u with my comment but i expect more frm u as i knw u are capable.
I hope i get a PROPER swaron part in next update.
Update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Update reet ... its been a long time
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Update ... its been a long waittt
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PART-3

Sharon:how dare you...yeh sab tumne kiya hai..yeh tumhara plan tha

Swayam: what are you talking about?

Sharon:don't act smart ok net par jo humare bare mein...yeh sab kaise kar sakte ho tum

Swayam:kar toh main woh bhi sakta tha jo tumne kriya ke sath kiya tha but then I realize jitni insult kriya ki tumhre cheap plan ki wajah se hui utni insult toh tumhari tabhi ho jayengi jab sab log tumhara naam ek weakling ke sath jodenge

Sharon:whats your problem why don't you mind your own business

Swayam:you are my girlfriend mera aur tumhara business same hi hua

Sharon:tum...ok...bring it on swayam shekhawat ab tum khude apne iss plan par regret karoge

Swayam:I am so scared

Sharon:I am not gonna leave you

Boy's locker room

Rey: hey guys

Nil:tera plan superb tha pura college sirf kriya ke bare mein baat kar rha hai

Rey:I am so proud of me

Vicky:we are also proud of you...har ladka us par line mar rha hai ek din mein itni famous ho gayi hai

Nil:you know Rey ek ladke ne usse kaha ki kya woh sirf boys washroom mein available hai ya kahain aur bhi

Rey:what

Vicky:I think woh kal college aana hi band kar degi

Rey:maine aisa nahi socha tha I thought ki...

Nil:chod rey sharon aur tujhse panga liya hai toh yeh toh hona hi thas uske sath

Rey(in mind):I guess maine kuch jayada hi kar diya...I should go and apologize her

In canteen

Amar:this is your bill

Swayam:ok

Swayam:5000 ?... ek burger aur cold drink ke 5000...are you mad

Amar:cold drink aur burger ke nahi woh sharon ne apne friends ko treat di hai yeh uska bill hai

swayam:toh sharon ka bill uss do mujhe kyun de rhe ho

sharon:kyun ki bill humesha boyfriend pay karta hai...ab tum mere boyfriend ho toh boyfriend ki responsibility phir puri karni hogi

swayam:what is this?

sharon:Mr. boyfriend...sharon ka boyfriend banna itna easy nahi hai

swayam:boyfriend my foot

sharon:yeh game tumne start ki thi aur isse finish mein karungi...now come on bill pay karo warna agar sabko pata chal gaya ki tum apni girlfriend ka bill bhi pay nahi kar paye toh tumhari so called image ka kya hoga ...bye see you and it's just a beginning BOYFRIEND

In Auditorium

Neha:Neha told you koi nahi aayega sab scaring from dazzler

Kriya:aisa nahi hai neha ...dekhna bahut ache dancers aayenge

Neha:neha leaving attending lecture

Kriya:ok

Kriya:abhi tak koi nahi aaya...meri dance team kaise banegi

Rey:koi nahi aayega

Kriya:tum?...tum yahan...

Rey:koi nahi aayega audition dene...iss college mein dance ka second name dazzler hai aur woh tumhari team kabhi join karenke

Kriya:I don't need your advice

Rey:and I don't ...calm down Rey

Kriya:please leave

Rey:kal jo bhi hua ...

Kriya:use bhi kuch bura karne aaye ho

Rey:tum mujhe complete toh karne toh

Kriya:nahi

Rey:you are so wired

Kriya:I know

Guy:hii I am Rohit...Auditions yahi ho rhe hai

Kriya:yes

Rey:get out from here

Kriya:aap inse aise baat nahi kar sakte ho

Rohit:leave it kriya yeh dazzler aise hi hai ...tum batao kya karna hai

Kriya:dance audition mein dance hi karenge and Mr. Reyansh will you please leave

Rey:no...tumhe pata nahi yeh kon hai...niklo yahan se abhi warna

Rohit:warna?

Swayam:warna tumhare sath bahut kuch ho sakta hai

Kriya:swayam yeh audition ke liye

Rey:tumhe nahi pata ki yeh yahan kis chiz ke liye aaya hai

Swayam:I hope tumhe humari last meeting yaad hogi so chup chap se nikal jaa yahan se

Kriya:what are you doing swayam

Swayam:let me handle this kriya...get out

Rohit: i am not your slave main jo tumhare orders follow karunga

Rey:dude you know that ki hum kya kar sakte hai isliye order toh tujhe follow karne padenge tere pass aur koi option nahi hai... nikle yahan se warna tujhe humse koi nahi bacha sakta hai

Rohit :I will see you

Rey:we will waiting you

He leaves

Rey:and you swayam shekhawat stay away from sharon...uske sath apni dirty games khelna band karo

Swayam:dirty games...agar meri games dirty toh tumhari games kya hai

Kriya:stop it swayam and Reyansh will you leave us alone

Rey leaves

Kriya:woh's he? Weakling and dazzler dono ka enemy

Swayam:ab tum bhi issi college mein ho tumhe sab pata chal jayega but stay away from him anyways how's your audition

Kriya: audition? Koi nhi aaya

Swayam : main toh audition ke liye hi aaya tha

Kriya:you are a dancer ?

Swayam:kyun nahi lagta

Kriya:tumhare alawa koi nahi aaya pata nahi yeh team kaise banegi

Swayam: dazzlers ke against kuch karne ki himmat sab mein nahi hai but pure college koi na koi toh honge jo tumhara sath denge

girl:hii...dance audition

kriya:yeah I am kriya and he is

girl:swayam everyone knows him...I am vishakha shall we start

kriya:ok

Obviously swayam and vishakha are selected

kriya:3 dancers aur chahiye ek dance team banana ke liye minimum six dancer chahiye

swayam:3 nahi sirf 1

kriya:matlab

swayam:matlab my best friend bharat he is awesome dancer and your new friend Neha

kriya:Neha and dance usne mujhe bataya nahi

vishakha:kyun ki iss college mein dazzler ke against jane ke guts kisi ke pass nahi hai

kriya:and you

vishakha:I am not scared to anyone mujhe bas ek chance chahiye un dazzler ko unki sahi jagah dekhane ke liye

kriya:ok ab inhe manana padega

In packing lot

swayam:where is my cycle

sharon:kya hua boyfriend something missing

swayam:tum ...where is my cycle

sharon:your cycle ...oh shit woh tumhari cycle thi actually galati se meri car se tumari cycle...sorry boyfriend

swayam:enough sharon tumne meri cycle ko...

sharon:relax boyfriend...I don't like your cycle ...anyways mere pass tumhare liye ek special gift hai hai... bhaiya aa jao

sharon: do you like it boyfriend

swayam:what is this

sharon:bhaiya aap jao ...donkey ...aur hindi mein iss gadha kehte hai...perfect gift donkey for a dockey ...ek photo to banti hai waise bhi tumhe photo upload karne ka bahut shok hai

swayam:you are crossing your limits sharon

sharon:phirse panga lene se pehle soch lena ki tumhare sath kya kya ho sakta hai aur haan tum jaise loser meri sandal ke equal bhi nahi hai

swayam come close to her

swayam:really sharon?

sharon:stay away

swayam:why girlfriend

sharon: because...

Before she complete he kissed her on her lips .she try to push him but he is stronger than her and soon she gave up after sometime he leave her

sharon:what the hell

swayam:boyfriend yeh bhi kar sakta hai aur haan 5000 ka bill pay kiya hai hai toh in return bhi toh kuch milna chahiye

He again kissed her wildly she was trying to get rid of him. After feeling like out breath he left her

sharon:you...

Swayam:you ...you listen to me next time kuch bhi kiya toh yeh yaad rhakna ki boyfriend aur bhi bahut kuch kar sakta hai...remember kuch bhi

Sharon:I am gonna kill you

Kriyansh

Rey:do you wanna lift

Kriya:no thanks

Rey:yahan tumhe koi transport nhi milne wala hai aur tum yahan new ho aur woh kya kehte hai jamana bahut bura hai toh soch lo

Kriya(in mind):he is right kriya ...already late ho chuki hun agar aur late hui toh maa mar degi

Rey:hello mam say yes or no

Kriya: ok tum itna insist kar rhe ho toh?

Rey:thank you mam

In the car

Kriya(to herself):yeh meri help kyun kar rha hai kahin yeh mere sath ...shit... how can you be so stupid kriya

Kriya:mere pass pepper spray hai

Rey:kya

Kriya:pepper spray

Rey:oh...tumhe lagta hai ki main tumhare sath...Impossible ...you are not my type.tumse 100 times better girls mere piche ghumti hai

Kriya:aur woh sari ladkiya blind hogi

Rey:no...un girls ki choice bahut achi hai.

Kriya:tumhe lagta hai ki tum bahut smart ho

Rey:yes I am

Kriya: no...tumse better ladke hai college mein like...like swayam he is smart, intelligent aur uss yeh bhi pata hai ki ladkiyon ke sath kaise behave karte hai

Rey:listen you (in mind) relax Rey

Rey:i am sorry

Kriya:what

Rey:kal ke liye

Kriya:so you are already scared ki tum aur tumhari team meri team se haar jayenge isiliye advance mein sorry bol rhe ho

Rey:what ...tum konsi baat kahan connect karti ho

Kriya:it's a truth tumhe lagta hai ki tumhari team haar jayegi

Rey: in your dreams...tumne mere sath galat kiya aur uska revenge lena chata tha but kuch jayada ho gaya so I am sorry.aur rhi tumhari team ki baat toh woh kabhi banegi hi nahi aur agar ban bhi gayi toh 2 minute ke liye dazzler ke samne khadi bhi nahi ho payegi

Kriya:really...let me tell you kriya ghai kabhi nahi haarti

Rey:aur reyansh singhania ko haarna nhi aata

Kriya:footloose ki trophy meri team ki hogi

Rey: we will see

Kriya:stop mera ghar aa gaya

Rey:listen I am sorry ...forgive karna hai toh karo warna mat karo

Kriya:I am not interested in your sorry

Rey:actually you are not deserve my sorry so get lost.

Kriya:I...I just hate you and your team

Rey:we hate you too

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Posted: 7 years ago
#35
wow dear...
Reyam hate that guy...
Why???

This gf bf thing is going great..
Loving it

Thanks
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Posted: 7 years ago
#36
Awsomd kriyaansh cute nok jok I really miss them but wid ur update I feel like I m watching it infront of my eyes lovelly
And swaron really super se bhi upr
Swayam just kiss her like it is normal
Update soon and ppz update ur other story also
Jodi made in heven plz update it
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Posted: 7 years ago
#37
god to see your update ...Well i really liked this new Avtar of swayam ...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#38
Awesome. Waiting waiting.
Tashn between kriyansh... Loving it.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#39
Awesome chapter love the whole convo between KRIYAANSH in the car
and swaron gf bf thing was lovely
Who is that guy rohit jishe reyam itni hate karte hai
Waiting for your next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
#40
Awesome update.
Sharon's trick back fired 😆
SwaRon kiss full of hatred, i hope this hatred soon become full of love
I'm loving the tashan between SwaRon 😎
Who is this lafanga Rohit. Iska future meko bright lag rha. Swayam and rey dono se maar khayega ye 😆
Reet yaar tussi bohut tadpati hai. Itni acchi acchi story likh rhi but itni deir mein update dete. I read all ur Work please update them. Update this too soon pretty soon 😳
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