PREJUDICE PARADISE SWARON AND KRIYANSH FF - Page 15

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PART-8

Guy1: dude pehle sirf dazzlers college mein rule karte the ab toh weaklings bhi aa gaye hai

Guy2: exactly...weakling ki popularity dazzler's ke equal ho gayi hai

Rohit:don't worry guys ek story mein 2 heroes nahi ho sakte hai... dazzler vs weakling kabhi khatam nahi hoga...dono mein se koi ek toh harega hi..dazzlers vs weakling mein loser koi bhi ho winner hum hi honge...hume toh bas unki fights enjoy karni hai

Next day

Rey:how are you

Kriya(confused):I am fine and you?

Rey:I am smart

Kriya: self-obsessed

Rey:kuch kaha

Kriya:mujhe kyun bulaya

Rey:assignment ?...tum mera aur mere friends ka assignment jaldi se complete karo

Kriya:I told you...

Rey:I know I know you are very bad in maths

Kriya:phir bhi tum chahte ho ki main...

Rey:yes

Kriya:ok

Rey:but remember agar humara assignment I mean mera aur mere friends ka assignment bura hua toh tumhara assignment usse bhi bura hona chahiye aur agar tumhara assignment good hua toh humara assignment best hona chahiye

Kriya:what do you mean

Rey:I mean agar tumne apni over smartness ko use karke humare assignment mein kuch bhi galat kiya toh...

Kriya:toh ? listen main tumse darti nahi hun

Rey: you listen to me tumne mujhe thappad mara, meri servant banne ka decision tumhara tha...jhoot tumne bola...toh ab tumhe meri baat mani padegi

Kriya:you can't force me

Rey:I can do anything ... agar assignment time par aur perfect nahi hua toh just remember amar, bharat aur Neha scholarship students hai aur my dad iss college ke trustees hai...unki scholarship cancel karne mein mujhe 2 minute bhi nahi lagenge aur agar woh log iss college se gaye toh tumhari team ka kya hoga

Kriya:I can't believe it...tum apni ego ko satisfy karne ke liye unke career ko destroy kar doge

Rey:yeh sab start tumne kiya hai so ache se yeh servant wali deal ko pura karo aur iss baat ko yahin khatam karo warna tumhare aur tumhari team ke sath itna bura karunga ki tum soch bhi nahi sakti ho

Kriya:you...

Rey:bye and start your work time bahut kam hai tumhare pass

Rehearsal hall

Kriya:Swayam

Swayam:hmm

Kriya: yeh rohit kon hai everyone has a problem with him

Swayam:usne kuch kiya kya

Kriya:nahi actually kal woh mujhse baat kar rha tha aur mujhe ghar drop karne ki request ki

Swayam:he is not nice guy please stay away from him

Kriya:I know that tumne mujhe pehle bhi yeh kaha hai isliye maine uss mana kar diya tha but woh mujhe force kar rha tha than wahan Sharon aa gayi aur usne Rohit ko warn kiya ki woh mujhse dur rhe aur mujhe ghar bhi drop kiya...Sharon hates me Swayam but kal woh mujhe Rohit se protect kar rhi thi I mean ...unbelievable and not only Sharon ,Rey aur tumne bhi mujhe Rohit ne dur rhne ko kaha hai ...aisa kya kiya hai usne ki tum sab apne sare difference bhool kar ek sath ho jate ho uske against

Swayam:leave it Kriya bas tum uss dur rho don't ever trust him 2and his gang

Kriya:Swayam please tell me

Swayam:Priya...humare college ki student and she is...

Neha:why you both not doing rehearsals

Swayam: after rehearsal baat karte hai

Kriya:ok

Swayam(in mind):you are so complicated Sharon...jab bhi tumhe hate karne ki koshish karta hun tab hi tum kuch na kuch aisa kar deti ho ki ...I can't hate you actually no one can hates you... may be isliye sara college tumhe admire karta hai

Swaron

Swayam:good morning

Sharon:tumhara face dekh liya toh morning good kaise hogi

Swayam:why mera face dekh kar tumhe tumhari haar yaad gayi

Sharon:over confidence is injurious to health

Swayam:really?

Sharon: kuch kaam kare loser

Swayam:sure

Courier boy:excuse me

Swayam:yes

Courier boy:Miss Sharon Raiprakash

Sharon:that's me

Courier boy:this is for you mam

Sharon:one more gift...kisne diya hai

Courier boy:sorry mam I have no idea

Sharon:thanks

She found a thank you note with the gift

Sharon:thank you?but kis liye

Swayam(in mind):Kriya ki help karne ke liye

He gifted her a beautiful watch

Sharon:wow its so beautiful

Swayam(in mind):I am glad tumhe meri choice achi lagi

Sharon:look isse kehte hai class...you never understand it bloody weaklings

Swayam:class?...yeh stupid watch se class pata chalti hai...I sure iss watch ki tarah yeh watch dene wala bhi stupid hi hoga

Sharon:oh hello...yeh watch stupid nahi hai its beautiful ...aur jiski choice itni achi hai woh toh stupid ho hi nahi sakta hai

Swayam:thank you

Sharon:thank you ?

Swayam:thank you...thank you note kyun diya hai usne

Sharon:don't you have any manner kisi ke personal message kaise dekh sakte ho

Swayam:thanks...yeh message hai...wow kitna personal and amazing message hai

Sharon:haan bahut amazing message hai

She left

Swayam:jis din tumhe pata chalega ki yeh gift maine diya hai uss din yeh amazing gift tumhare dustbin mein hoga

In canteen

Rey:what up guy sab itne sad kyun hai

Simmi: weaklings...they are using our rehearsal hall

Rey:college rehearsal hall hai toh koi bhi dancing team uss use kar sakti hai...yeh rule hai aur hum kuch nahi kar sakte

Sharon:Rule my foot woh rehearsal hall mere dad ne banya tha

Vicky:aur uss par sirf humara right hai

Nil: weakling usse use nhi kar sakte

Simmi:uske liye weaklings ko rehearsal karne se rokna padega

Sharon:Rey please weaklings ke sath itna acha behave karne ki jarurat nahi hai

Rey:ok and Kriya ko handle karuga

Vicky:Kriya kyun

Rey:I have plan for her

Sharon:cool...aur Swayam meri responsibility hai

Nil:aur baki sabko hum handle kar lenge

Dazzler:mission weaklings start

Next day

Vicky:so whats the plan

Rey:Kriya ko old computer lab mein lock karna hai aur mujhe teri help chahiye

Vicky:sure dude but Kriya ko wahan kyun jayegi

Rey:main le kar jaunga usse...aur tu door lock kar dega

Vicky:ok

Sharon:and this is our canteen

Girl:I can't believe it yeh Mumbai ka best college hai

Sharon: excuse me...what do you mean

Girl:I mean...interior dekha tumne iska its so DM...don't you think yeh bahut outdated hai and food...pucho hi mat...but tumhe dekh kar lag hi rha hai ki iss college ka standard kya hoga

Sharon:what

Girl:look at you...agar iss college ki so called diva aisi hogi toh college LS hi hoga naa

Sharon:who do you think you are ?...yeh Mumbai ka best college hai I wonder ki tumhe yahan admission kaise mil gaya aur mere baare mein toh baat bhi mat karna...2 din mein college chod kar bhag jaogi

Girl:mind your language I am Alia malhotra principal's daughter agar maine tumhari complaint kar di na toh...

Sharon:aur main iss college ki trustee ki beti hun principal sir mera kuch nahi kar sakte hai..main sirf principal sir ki wajah se tumhe tolerate kar rhi hun

Alia:really...but you have no choice tumhe mujhe tolerate karna padega...now follow me

Sharon:what the hell...kahan phase gayi main aur Swayam ko bhi rehearsal mein jane se rokna tha kya karu...Idea

Sharon calls Swayam

Swayam:ab kya hua

Sharon:new admission hai aur principal ne kaha hai ki hume uski help karni hai aur woh chahti hai ki hum uss college dikhaye

Swayam:main tumhe tourist guide lagta hun

Sharon:nahi...but principal ko lagte ho agar tumhe koi problem hai toh principal baat kar lo

Swayam: aa rha hun

Sharon:ok main tumhara wait karungi

Swayam(tease her):mera wait?

Sharon:come fast

After 5 minutes

Swayam:kahan hai special new student

Sharon:she is just like you

Swayam:matlab

Sharon:she is damn irritating like you

Swayam:you mean Sharon part -2 hai

Sharon:shut up

Alia:iss college mein kuch bhi impressive nahi hai

Swayam:she is so hot

Sharon:you are blind

Swayam:actually she is super hot and sexy

Sharon:whatever...and Miss Alia tumhe itni problem hai toh yeh college kyun join kar rhi ho

Alia:my bad luck and dad mujhe yahan rehne ke liye force kar rhe hai...aise college mein toh mere servants bhi naa aaye

Sharon:yeah yeah Miss show off ...kitne tantrums dikha rhi hai

Swayam:kabhi khud ke sath bhi kuch time spend karo...tumhare apne liye bhi yahi thoughts honge

Sharon:main kabhi tantrums nahi dekhti hun

Swayam:woh toh tum unse pucho jo tumhare tantrums aur mood swings ko tolerate karte hai

Alia:tum apne boyfriend se baad mein bhi baat kar sakti ho Miss Loser

Sharon:loser?

Swayam:opps...yeh toh sach mein tumhara updated version hai

Sharon:just shut up Swayam and how dare you

Alia:oh please ab tum apna OTT Drama band karo

Swayam:I am loving it.I wish mere pass popcorn hote

Sharon:you have no idea tum kis se panga le rhi

Alia:trustee ki beti se...tumhare dad college ke sirf trustee hai yeh pura college unka nahi hai...tum jaisi girls ko main ache se janti hun...tum iss type ki short dress pehn kar boys ko apne piche gumana chahti ho or agar tumhe ek boy ki attention bhi mil jaye toh...you know what tum jaisi girls ko kya kehte hai...desperate, cheap and...

Swayam: enough...stay in your limits...tum ek ladki se aise baat nahi kar sakti ho...tum dress ke bases par uske character ko question kar rhi ho aur agar aisa hai toh tumhe khud ki dress bhi dekh lo jo Sharon ki dress se kafi jayada revealing hai

Sharon(whisper):Swayam meri side le rha hai

Alia:hello Mr. tum mujhse aise baat nahi kar sakte

Swayam:aur tum Sharon se aise baat nahi kar sakti

Alia:tumhe main...

Sharon:principal se complaint karogi... toh kar do.I don't care. tum principal ki daughter sirf isliye main tumhara attitude tolerate kar rhi thi but now no more...lets go Swayam

They left

Alia:I am not gonna leave you

Kriyansh

Kriya:kya hai

Rey:din hai

Kriya:hahahaha very funny

Rey:mera sense of humour bahut acha hai

Kriya:kyun bulaya mujhe

Rey:kuch kaam tha

Kriya:listen mere pass tumhara koi new order follow karna ka time nahi hai

Rey:agar punishment accept ki hai toh usse pura bhi karo

Kriya:I just...

Rey:hate me...I hate you too now come with me

Kriyansh entered the lab

Kriya:kya karna hai ab

Rey:I want...(in mind)Vicky kahan rhe gaya door lock kyun nahi kar rha hai

Kriya:what do you want

Rey:I want...I want...

Vicky lock the room

Rey:yes

Kriya:kisine hume lock kar diya

Rey(in mind):well done Vicky

Kriya:Rey

Rey:haan...main dekhta hun...open the door... koi hai

He looked at Kriya

Rey:koi nahi hai

Kriya:ab kya karenge

Rey:wait main dekhta hun...tum darna mat

Kriya:Rey please kuch karo

Rey:haan karta hun(in mind):bye Kriya see you

Rey try to open the back door

Rey:what the... yeh lock kaise ho gaya...vicky

Kriya:kya kaha tumne

Rey:nothing...ab kuch nahi ho sakta

Kriya:I have an idea main Swayam ko call karti hun aur woh yahan aa kar hume...

Rey:yahan network nahi hai

Kriya:tumhe kaise pata

Rey(whisper):isliye toh tumhe iss room mein lock karna tha

Kriya:what

Rey:nothing

Kriya:ab hume humesha ke liye yahin rhena padega

Rey:humesha?...wait for an hour door khul jayega

Kriya:tum itne confidence se kaise bol sakte ho

Rey:kyunki yeh mera pla...kyunki yeh mera college hai mujhe sab pata hai

After sometime

Kriya:Rey

Rey:hmm

Kriya:can I ask you something

Rey:one more question...haan pucho

Kriya:rohit ne kya kiya hai

Rey: are you interested in him

Kriya: no way...sab mujhe usse dur rehne ke liye kehte hai par koi reason nahi batata...please batao kya kiya hai usne

Rey:Priya Sinha iss college ki student thi...ek weakling...she is in love with him.but rohit ne uske aur apne private movements ko record kiya aur uss blackmail karne laga...pata nahi kitne time tak uss blackmail karta rha...uss physical relation banane ke liye force kiya...but rohit ki cheapness ki koi limit nahi hai uske baad woh uss apne friends ke sath share karna chahta tha and then ...Priya ne suicide kar liya

Kriya:what...aur kisine kuch nahi kiya and police usne bhi against kuch nahi kiya

Rey:rohit politician ka beta hai ...bahut easily Priya ko drug addict bana diya aur uske suicide ko drug overdose ka case bana diya...uske suicide note ko bhi kahin gayab karwa diya gaya...pura college sach janta tha but koi proof nahi tha...Priya ki friend jisne yeh sab police bataya tha usne bhi statement change kar diya tha

Kriya:I can't believe it real world mein bhi aisa hota hai

Rey:real world tumhari imagination se bhi bahut jayada bura hai

Kriya:thanks

Rey:for what

Kriya:mujhe Rohit se dur rakhne ke liye

Rey:just remember humare bich mein...I mean weakling aur dazzlers ke bich mein kitne bhi differences ho kabhi Rohit par trust mat karna aur na hi uss humare differences ka advantage uss lene dena...I know him woh tumhe humare against use karne ki try karga

Kriya:hmm...friends

Rey: suddenly friends kyun

Kriya:tumne meri help ki aur yeh best way hai apni fight ko khatam karne ka

Rey:dazzler aur weaklings kabhi friends nahi ho sakte

Kriya:but Rey aur Kriya toh friends ho sakte hai

Rey:main girls se dosti nahi karta

Kriya:toh Sharon, simmi aur rinni kya hai

Rey:my childhood friends aur unke liye mere dil mein waisi wali feelings nahi aayegi

Kriya:waisi wali feelings means

Rey(winks at her):waise wali feeling

Kriya:oh...relax I am not interested in you

Rey:me too...this is my rule...main girls ke sath friends zone mein nahi jata...pata nahi kab usse pyaar ho jaye...aur mujh pyaar aur dosti wala confusion nahi chahiye

Kriya:I don't understand but this is weird rule... sorry thappad ke liye

Rey:its not ok...tumhe tumhari punishment puri karni hogi

Kriya:punishment puri hone ke baad dil se mujhe forgive kar doge

Rey:we will see that

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aswom update

new girl with attitude nice...

aur kriya frndship with rey

rey excuse hahaha...
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Amazing update in first time someone give attitude to Sharon woh bhi ek girl and didn't accept Rey will lock kriya and kriya she is so cute friendship karna chati hu... Rey usse attitude de raha hai... Waiting for next update... UPDATE asap and your other stories too 👍🏼
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Dil tut gya. Tu aisa mat bola ker 🥺
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I just couldn't stop smiling after reading this chapter
😃 😃 😃
Rohan is such a b*stard
Maan karta hai saale ko goli se uda dun. 😡
Rey ka dialog Mujhe waisi wali friendship nahin chahiye 😳
Maar daala 🤣
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Awesome...The Best thing which I like about your all work is that it reminds me of old D3 for which I fell for. Chahe fir wo Kriyansh hi kyun na ho. You write every part so beautifully . Loved the tashan n nokjhok of our dear SwaRon. But loved the way Sharon protected kria from that chepo forgetting all her rivalry.
One more gift from swayam ... I remember in the show it lead to the show down between them with full of tashan... Let's see where u make it go.
Loved how. Swayam took her side
Aisey hi ek chepo Kam tha jo ek aur chipkali as gyi😡


I know u are hurt with few likes. I can very much understand how disappointing is this ... Wen you do all hard work.. thoughts to pen down one update and not getting enough appreciations. I also not like this. But please do not stop writing. It's a request.😭


Do continue soon.

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